Red Dogg420 vs L.I.
 

yo the rules r......
10 lines
due 10 minuteas after check in
no feeding
no prewritten
no hate votes
no dickriding
no crew votes

holla goodluck

i will check in after u

smoke a blunt get drunk, hit a line of that funk, now u fallin up in tha spot and u thinkin that u crunk, u aint crunk yous a punk and ima show u that tonight, all it takes is one killa to step and we can start a fight, in tha middle of the club bych wats up we can do this shyt, security aint gon jump in tha way becuz they scared of this, implatin this into ur brain so ull no the next time u cross the line again in standin full of sin we u fuck wit tha boss

ok or dont check in.......checked in.....wont feed cuz i wont need to.....1........

wat tha fuck u mean check in, i just spit some shyt to yo ass

well this bitch challenged me straight out of my otha thread....
regrettin this shit once he see's the shine of my lead....
Bam right through your head, DEADon, bullseye....
No need for the sun cuz its heat i supply....
Impact of fists comin ur way so watch out....
One hit n i win this without a doubt....
Only ten lines so i could finish a fag off quick....
Found the answer 2 the tootsie pop question n its 1 lick....
Got to the center of this fag n its all white....
Its the same on the outside fuckin fag GOODNIGHT....

holla wun

uppin 4 votes.........................................

up.

A'ight, there is no fuckin' doubt that L.I had this...Red Dogg, wat the fuck was that shit? You need to work on everythin'...L.I...your shit was better than the one against Lyrical Havok...you had this wit some decent punches, flow, and vocab...keep it up dawg.

L.I: 6/10

Red Dogg: 2/10

Hit this up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

uppin 4 votes...........................................

uppin this please finish this........................

ok ok i cant vote right now but if i could it would be for L.I no doubt

uppin 4 votes.....................................

HaHaHaHa And Red Dawg Said In MY Thread I Need Work....HaHaHa

redd dogg: okay i understand that u are new and all u probably dont know about multies, personals and stuff like that....check into those and u will be aight

L.I. this was an easy win...u dont have to read yours...jus look at the structure and u can tell of the back......

v/L.I.

uppin............4 votes..................................

both was whack but red dog was below whack it was terrible vote goes to LI

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Red.... W Thee F were you thinking?? That sounds like a 3-6 mafia song or something... ok your verse had like no metaphor no punches nothing that stood out it just..... flowed.

Ok LI...ya verse was iight, you had some pretty decent lines and vocabulary...and you actually added structure to ya bars, so i could read tha shyt. Of course you didnt need much to take this one as far as i can see. No hatin Red its just an obvious one here.

winner LI

uppin 4 the final vote.............................................. ........................

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dam no offence but that shit was whack...
my vote goes L.I.. at least he had some sought of structure..no real hard punches though..
red dog..keep droppin n elevate.. this is a net battle not a street battle....sayin u gunna fuk sum1 up isnt wat wins u a net battle...think smarter
peace

you man red dog u really need too elevate and LI your shit was good enough too win so you got my vote nice punches

uppin 4 final vote...................finish this off...............

yo that dude reddogg420 ripped you up. you suck on that pactice man. my vote is for reddogg

^^^^^^^^^?!?!?!??!^^^^^^^^ ook well neways finish this off wit one vote.....................

Aight red, ya was dead b4 he dropped his verse

ya need:
structure
punches
and everything else

best line:
Impact of fists comin ur way so watch out....
One hit n i win this without a doubt....

vote: L.I.

A.K.A an red are nigga so they vote for each other when its clear they lost