Big'N vs. PROOF
 

16-20 lines house rules, 30 minutes after check in, you spit first, i check in when youre done, and i wont feed

I aint never seen u but I can imagine u wack/
1-11 what kinda proof is that 1 win pause..../
My bad u see I almost forgot to clap/
Its my first battle but it might be your last/
put your vocab in a vocabulary cast/
I can find more proof in some peppermint snaps/
Your style diluted i could drink u from the tap/
This should be your time to shine bright/
your in a battle with a rookie right/
I want to buy a can of diet sprite/
jus so u could have a taste of the lime light/
This is Big'N and dont forget my name/
Niggas try to deny that the be put to same/
like gettin crossed up dunked on an lose the game/
Its your bedtime time homie let me put you to sleep/
Better to be in a dream world crony, then to be awake in defeat...


:shoot: :thefinger :thumbup:


And I'm out....................

schnapps is how you spell it, and no it doesnt rhyme

and ill check in once im done with my dinner

Correction:Niggas try to deny that they've been put to shame/

check in

my shyts on proof, but hey dawg do me a favor and vote for me agains L.I lil bych ass

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

umm, no.

i was gonna try vs. Big'N till i read his verse
thank god i read it first, now i dont have to work

and as for my lexicon, do you discern that im a genius?
i have inimitable vocab, dont entice me i mean it

and dont give me that fukin attitude, im already mad at you
this size, of ya lines, b'for they rhymed, were like lines of lattitude

my vocab makin you think that your dislexic
i know you wont respect this, cause ur rhymin skill are reckless

im tired of battlin whack emcees and getting DQ'ed
but if i break the rules and a mod sees this, he'll know i beat you

i was wondering if this Bitch Is Good, 'No!
have to cut this faggots artery, just so he can flow

maybe i should go easy, and give em a chance
cause for people to vote for him, they'd must be in a trance

so i guess ill go easy on him on my last two lines
cause otherwise hell never get a vote the way this fat dude rhymes



the line that says "i was wondering if this Bitch Is Good, 'No"
i wanted the capital letters in bold but i dont know how to do it, it spells his name if you were wondering.

and can a mod take away my vote that i have for me

Big'N if you have any other battles ill hit it up, but could u drop an honest vote here

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

i already asked him to drop an honest vote here

Yo, no doubt about it that Proof got this one...punches, flow, the works, was better than Big 'N's verse. Its not that Big N had a bad verse...its just that Proof's was better. N, just elevate dawg, and it'll come. No hate...

Vote- Proof

uppin, drop a link and ill hit it up

uppin, this is gettin slept on hard, drop a link and ill hit it up

proof i see that your rhymes are very rarely good ! but this was a better of the few that i have seen you desreve my vote peace

Breakdown:

Punches: Proof
Metas: Big'N
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Proof
Disses: Tie

This Battle Was Pretty Equal.Proof Came Stronger With The Punches Tho.Big'N Had A Few Creative Lines But Im Goin With Proof On This One.

Vote-Proof

proof took everything
both should work on vocab and personals a lil

punches: Proof
metas: Big'N
opener: proof
finisher: Neither
flow: proof
structure: proof

iight battle, the vote had to go to proof
good verse dog
bign- u need to work on ya flow

vote - proof

hit this battle ya'll
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

uppin 4 votes

you know whats funny, i should have 5 votes, but no one is poll voting, drop some links, ill hit em up

ok ok well good flow and vocab from both sides... both put up a good fight... but proof had better structure.....
so my vote goes 2 proof

I VOTE 4 U..... U VOTE 4 ME

umm. drop a link then

last up, drop a link please

one more vote!!! cmon yall... Uppin...

I'm gonna give this one to Proof. There's no explanation needed, but I'll give one just to entertain the mods. What's up, guys? Proof had better punches. Better rhyming language. Better vocab. Better structure. Better overall rap. My vote goes to Proof. Big 'N, I see where ya style's goin and I like it, I do, but keep ya head up, son, and keep writin. Stay up ya'll.

UBR