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L.E 03-26-04 09:26 PM

Limited Edition VS. PROOF
 
A'ight...house rulz, 5 bars (10 lines), due at least 24 hours after check in...

Droppin' soon...

PROOF 03-26-04 09:52 PM

my moms slow at making dinner, here it is...

aiyyo, here it goes, mothafucka, thinkin he can handle me, ha!

its to easy to battle lil nigga limited edition
ill kill this faggot quick, and finish it efficient
in his sig, faggot quoten jimmy smith
you dont deserve the mic quere, gimme it
u should quit this battle, bounce like a rabbit
oh, thats your idol, haha, you fuckin faggot
and you been livin down their all your life (his sig)
suckin dick is what you do, all your nights
if we lived closer, id make you feel my full effect
but im only 14, and im not walkin to quebec

L.E 03-26-04 09:58 PM

LE's Verse
 
Yo...check it...

Yo, damn this must be a joke, but let it begin
You got 370 posts, and only accumulated 1 win

Shit, pointless battles, damn, 1 win and 11 losses
If I was wack, compared to you, I'd still be awesome

You from Denver aka South Park, you ain' gangsta stupid
Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'

You spin around, call me down, Candian, eh, try to start a brawl
Fuck you for hatin', I'd merk your ass from Edmonton to Montreal

No matter how wack I may be, PROOF is definetly wacker
'Lil nigga Limited Edition?' Open your eyes bitch...

...You have been merk'd by a kracker...

PROOF 03-26-04 10:32 PM

^^ lol, and just so you know, maybe canadians dont know this, but no one considers south park denver, no one, their like an hour and a half away from each other

L.E 03-26-04 10:33 PM

W/e...lets get some votez on this shit...

Uppin' 1.

Red Dogg420 03-26-04 10:36 PM

my votes on proof, wat tha fuck was u thinkin edition, stop spittin nursery rymes, lil bych

PROOF 03-26-04 11:30 PM

^^ dr, been doin it all night, did tha shit with my battle vs. Big'N, i hadnt even dropped ma verse yet

PROOF 03-26-04 11:43 PM

limited, if u have any other active battles ill peep them, could you drop an honest vote on this though

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117357

ill ask him to drop an honest vote here

L.E 03-27-04 12:08 AM

A'ight heres a link to my battle wit that Red Dogg kid... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...738#post1212738

Check it out...

Uppin' 2.

PROOF 03-27-04 10:12 AM

uppin

Enygma 03-27-04 10:21 AM

Not bad..........I gotta give this one to Limited though. He came wit better punches and that is pretty much what a battle is all about. Proof, work a few punches and some wordplay in there and you'll be alright.........

Vote - Limited Edition

Return the favor wit some honest votes........

PROOF 03-27-04 10:29 AM

i truly dont care who you vote for, but you cant say i didnt come with punches

Enygma 03-27-04 11:09 AM

^^^^Your punches were weak as hell...........oh, thanks for the hate vote asshole!

PROOF 03-27-04 11:12 AM

that wasnt a hate vote, you kinda suck, im much, much better, hell even limited knows my punches werent weak, haha!

L.E 03-27-04 01:26 PM

A'ight...you guys take this shit somehwere else...

Uppin' 3.

L.E 03-28-04 02:47 PM

A'ight...thsi is beein' slept on hard...leave a link, and I will hit your's up...

Uppin' 4.

Willa 03-28-04 02:57 PM

vote le
opener le
punches le
flow tie
vocab tie
personals tie
closer by a mile le
le came 10 times harde

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

VitaL 03-29-04 08:02 AM


[PROOF]
Open: 5/10 Ok... nothin special
Close: 4/10 Weak...
Personals: 5/10 Weak...
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 You had sum goin on... not bad.
Punches: 5/10 Dint have enough... goes hand in hand with personals...
Multis: 5/10 Both had same amount...
Lines That Stuck Out:
"if we lived closer, id make you feel my full effect
but im only 14, and im not walkin to quebec"

Overall: wasnt really feelin this verse... u got potential tho... 29/60 Ouch...

[LIMITED EDITION]
Open: 6/10 Nice... Felt it.
Close: 4/10 On the weak side...
Personals: 6/10 High School Shootin line was nice...
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 not bad, not nice
Punches: 6/10 Felt it...
Multis: 5/10 Didnt have alot...
Lines That Stuck Out:
"Fuck you for hatin', I'd merk your ass from Edmonton to Montreal"
"Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'"

Overall: Felt ya verse KiKo... jus work on ya closers... 33/60

My Vote - Limited Edition

dope_emcee 03-29-04 05:26 PM

I like proofs better. he's got more rhyme and flow...edition, i like yours too, but spit some elevated shit....work on vocab, flow, and punches....

dope_emcee 03-29-04 05:28 PM

need some votes on dope_emcee vs. enygma....

www.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117379

dope_emcee 03-29-04 05:34 PM

my bad....that's not the right link....just look for dope_emcee vs. enygma in frontlines....

Anomaly 03-29-04 05:36 PM

limited edition looks like u did reaserch and used it agienst. u tore proof up howevr he was shootin awfull good

L.E 03-29-04 11:19 PM

A'ight, lets get some people who can poll vote. dope_emcee...already voted on that battle...........

Uppin' Final.

J-Mob 03-29-04 11:49 PM

yo limited came with better punches vocab and an all-around better flow
you had a lot more personals an it was pretty tight

proof you had some nice shit but i thought it was too normal i think you need some better punchlines and vocab

vote=Limited
no bad blood
nice battle
vote on this return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117604

PROOF 03-30-04 12:36 AM

O.K. not swayin here trust me, but some shit people here need to get through their heads.

1. Yes, i know you people dont always read battles where one of the opponents is from colorado, but i get the columbine shit all the time. Cant think of 2 opponents that havent used that against me. I can see how something like that is original to some people, but because i hear it all the time, it seems like a played out line.
2.Vital, you put my worst line in lines that stuck out, i had better lines than that, maybe you missed them.
3. If i lost i lost, dont say i had a good verse, cause i know that me and Limited aint veteran emcee's yet, and if i had a really good verse then you say he beat me by alot, just do the math, i know neither of us are that good.
4. Dont vote on me just to get me to poll vote on your battle, ill vote if you leave me some info on how to elevate (dope-emcee)

just gettin some shit off my chest, im out, peace.

DEsTIn2dEsTroY 03-30-04 12:42 AM

straight up limited editions flows where way more advanced ! he hit personally attacking proofs sty;e and personality ! plus i'm tierd of fake ass emcee's and these wack ass dick rydeing internet crews following eachother around voteing for one anoter! with out you crew dawg i'm sure you would never get a vote on this one 1 but i could be wrong 1 you all know who my vote goe to ........... let the polls show peace

Sten. Cell 03-30-04 01:18 AM

Breakdown:
Punches: L.E.
Metas: L.E.
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: L.E.
Flow: Tie
Disses: Tie

Limited Takes This One.He Came With Better Punches And More Complexity.Proof Had An 'OK' Verse But Not Strong Enough & Didnt Show Any Complexity.Proof's Strong Point Was His Disses.

Vote-Limited Edition

anxiety 03-30-04 02:59 AM

^ im proof, this is my alias, if my strong point as my disses, you would think i would have won, right?

Kingz 03-30-04 06:14 AM

yo when i read proof's battle i was like damn. it was good for 10 lines. but the gay jokes are played. i expected proo fto win untill i read limited verse. it was hot

'You from Denver aka South Park, you ain' gangsta stupid
Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'

nise line dog

vote: limited edition

hit these battles pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117485
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

VitaL 03-31-04 10:33 AM

Proof... i didnt miss anything in your verse...

jus rating it how i saw it.

No hate...

its all love...

PM me if u got any questions on anythin...

anxiety 04-06-04 12:46 AM

ma bad, uppin this (im proof) and btw, just vote for limited and end this shit, i dont even use the name PROOF anymore, i dont give a fuck, he deserves tha win

Youngenvy 04-06-04 01:07 AM

yo my voe is going to limited edittion. I admit proof was nice but limited was betta today. ya need to have a rematch if u ask me 20-25 lines. go vot on this two batlles-
Young Envy vs. Bowelle
&
Young Renegade vs. Young Envy

Shadows edge 04-09-04 01:21 AM

yeah, LE gets the W even though his middle stuff was real weak.. c'mon PROOF / kuniva.. using faggot like 8 times in 5 bars ain't gonna win a battle... flows and shit was pretty even on both sides so LE wins..

return the favor, close some my battles...

L.I. 04-09-04 01:36 AM

ok i liked this battle....pretty good overall
BREAKDOWN
Opener - Limited...he had a personal in it which added to the effect...proof yours awas aight...
Flow - Limited...his flowed better...proof yours was a fast flow the way i read it n it sorta didnt werk...werk on yea flow...
Punches - Limited...he threw direct punches....proof ur punches were indirect...try usin stronger personals to help wit ur punches...and metaphors too...
Personals - well this was a tie...Limited only had 2 hard personals and proof had alot of weak personals sothat rack up as a tie....
Closer - i liked proof's closer but than limited merked by a kracka had me laughin...Limited got this category...
nice battle overall
v/ Limited
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637


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