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Limited Edition VS. PROOF
A'ight...house rulz, 5 bars (10 lines), due at least 24 hours after check in...
Droppin' soon... |
my moms slow at making dinner, here it is...
aiyyo, here it goes, mothafucka, thinkin he can handle me, ha! its to easy to battle lil nigga limited edition ill kill this faggot quick, and finish it efficient in his sig, faggot quoten jimmy smith you dont deserve the mic quere, gimme it u should quit this battle, bounce like a rabbit oh, thats your idol, haha, you fuckin faggot and you been livin down their all your life (his sig) suckin dick is what you do, all your nights if we lived closer, id make you feel my full effect but im only 14, and im not walkin to quebec |
LE's Verse
Yo...check it...
Yo, damn this must be a joke, but let it begin You got 370 posts, and only accumulated 1 win Shit, pointless battles, damn, 1 win and 11 losses If I was wack, compared to you, I'd still be awesome You from Denver aka South Park, you ain' gangsta stupid Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin' You spin around, call me down, Candian, eh, try to start a brawl Fuck you for hatin', I'd merk your ass from Edmonton to Montreal No matter how wack I may be, PROOF is definetly wacker 'Lil nigga Limited Edition?' Open your eyes bitch... ...You have been merk'd by a kracker... |
^^ lol, and just so you know, maybe canadians dont know this, but no one considers south park denver, no one, their like an hour and a half away from each other
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W/e...lets get some votez on this shit...
Uppin' 1. |
my votes on proof, wat tha fuck was u thinkin edition, stop spittin nursery rymes, lil bych
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^^ dr, been doin it all night, did tha shit with my battle vs. Big'N, i hadnt even dropped ma verse yet
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limited, if u have any other active battles ill peep them, could you drop an honest vote on this though
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117357 ill ask him to drop an honest vote here |
A'ight heres a link to my battle wit that Red Dogg kid... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...738#post1212738
Check it out... Uppin' 2. |
uppin
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Not bad..........I gotta give this one to Limited though. He came wit better punches and that is pretty much what a battle is all about. Proof, work a few punches and some wordplay in there and you'll be alright.........
Vote - Limited Edition Return the favor wit some honest votes........ |
i truly dont care who you vote for, but you cant say i didnt come with punches
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^^^^Your punches were weak as hell...........oh, thanks for the hate vote asshole!
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that wasnt a hate vote, you kinda suck, im much, much better, hell even limited knows my punches werent weak, haha!
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A'ight...you guys take this shit somehwere else...
Uppin' 3. |
A'ight...thsi is beein' slept on hard...leave a link, and I will hit your's up...
Uppin' 4. |
vote le
opener le punches le flow tie vocab tie personals tie closer by a mile le le came 10 times harde Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
[PROOF] Open: 5/10 Ok... nothin special Close: 4/10 Weak... Personals: 5/10 Weak... Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 You had sum goin on... not bad. Punches: 5/10 Dint have enough... goes hand in hand with personals... Multis: 5/10 Both had same amount... Lines That Stuck Out: "if we lived closer, id make you feel my full effect but im only 14, and im not walkin to quebec" Overall: wasnt really feelin this verse... u got potential tho... 29/60 Ouch... [LIMITED EDITION] Open: 6/10 Nice... Felt it. Close: 4/10 On the weak side... Personals: 6/10 High School Shootin line was nice... Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 not bad, not nice Punches: 6/10 Felt it... Multis: 5/10 Didnt have alot... Lines That Stuck Out: "Fuck you for hatin', I'd merk your ass from Edmonton to Montreal" "Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'" Overall: Felt ya verse KiKo... jus work on ya closers... 33/60 My Vote - Limited Edition |
I like proofs better. he's got more rhyme and flow...edition, i like yours too, but spit some elevated shit....work on vocab, flow, and punches....
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my bad....that's not the right link....just look for dope_emcee vs. enygma in frontlines....
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limited edition looks like u did reaserch and used it agienst. u tore proof up howevr he was shootin awfull good
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A'ight, lets get some people who can poll vote. dope_emcee...already voted on that battle...........
Uppin' Final. |
yo limited came with better punches vocab and an all-around better flow
you had a lot more personals an it was pretty tight proof you had some nice shit but i thought it was too normal i think you need some better punchlines and vocab vote=Limited no bad blood nice battle vote on this return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117604 |
O.K. not swayin here trust me, but some shit people here need to get through their heads.
1. Yes, i know you people dont always read battles where one of the opponents is from colorado, but i get the columbine shit all the time. Cant think of 2 opponents that havent used that against me. I can see how something like that is original to some people, but because i hear it all the time, it seems like a played out line. 2.Vital, you put my worst line in lines that stuck out, i had better lines than that, maybe you missed them. 3. If i lost i lost, dont say i had a good verse, cause i know that me and Limited aint veteran emcee's yet, and if i had a really good verse then you say he beat me by alot, just do the math, i know neither of us are that good. 4. Dont vote on me just to get me to poll vote on your battle, ill vote if you leave me some info on how to elevate (dope-emcee) just gettin some shit off my chest, im out, peace. |
straight up limited editions flows where way more advanced ! he hit personally attacking proofs sty;e and personality ! plus i'm tierd of fake ass emcee's and these wack ass dick rydeing internet crews following eachother around voteing for one anoter! with out you crew dawg i'm sure you would never get a vote on this one 1 but i could be wrong 1 you all know who my vote goe to ........... let the polls show peace
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Breakdown:
Punches: L.E. Metas: L.E. Multies: Neither Wordplay: L.E. Flow: Tie Disses: Tie Limited Takes This One.He Came With Better Punches And More Complexity.Proof Had An 'OK' Verse But Not Strong Enough & Didnt Show Any Complexity.Proof's Strong Point Was His Disses. Vote-Limited Edition |
^ im proof, this is my alias, if my strong point as my disses, you would think i would have won, right?
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yo when i read proof's battle i was like damn. it was good for 10 lines. but the gay jokes are played. i expected proo fto win untill i read limited verse. it was hot
'You from Denver aka South Park, you ain' gangsta stupid Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin' nise line dog vote: limited edition hit these battles pls http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117485 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 |
Proof... i didnt miss anything in your verse...
jus rating it how i saw it. No hate... its all love... PM me if u got any questions on anythin... |
ma bad, uppin this (im proof) and btw, just vote for limited and end this shit, i dont even use the name PROOF anymore, i dont give a fuck, he deserves tha win
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yo my voe is going to limited edittion. I admit proof was nice but limited was betta today. ya need to have a rematch if u ask me 20-25 lines. go vot on this two batlles-
Young Envy vs. Bowelle & Young Renegade vs. Young Envy |
yeah, LE gets the W even though his middle stuff was real weak.. c'mon PROOF / kuniva.. using faggot like 8 times in 5 bars ain't gonna win a battle... flows and shit was pretty even on both sides so LE wins..
return the favor, close some my battles... |
ok i liked this battle....pretty good overall
BREAKDOWN Opener - Limited...he had a personal in it which added to the effect...proof yours awas aight... Flow - Limited...his flowed better...proof yours was a fast flow the way i read it n it sorta didnt werk...werk on yea flow... Punches - Limited...he threw direct punches....proof ur punches were indirect...try usin stronger personals to help wit ur punches...and metaphors too... Personals - well this was a tie...Limited only had 2 hard personals and proof had alot of weak personals sothat rack up as a tie.... Closer - i liked proof's closer but than limited merked by a kracka had me laughin...Limited got this category... nice battle overall v/ Limited return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637 |
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