(my bitch)poetictendenceez vs Gambino(The Don)
 

you alredy know the rules.........


16 lines at the most.....
no crew votes.......
no hater votes......
no dick riding votes......
versus do by midnight tonight......


lets go bitch......

alright whore...here it is.....

I got BETTER-TEXT to SEVER-NECKS; leave a MESS-OF-RED/
BEST-IN-JEST, even if I jot my 'notes high' like TREBLE-CLEFS/
NEVER-REST, I'm CHOSEN-SIMPLY to ROAST-THIS-EMCEE/
And my 'talk shows skills' like murdering OPRAH-WINFREY (talk shows kills)/
GO-AND-TEMPT-ME, I HATE-FAKERS with GREAT-ANGER/
So I'll put 'metal to your chest' like a fuckin PACEMAKER/
I carry EIGHT-LAZERS, ROASTIN-FOLKS, you KNOW-YOU'RE-TOAST/
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
Everyone VOTING-KNOWS Gambino ain't a THREAT-TO-ME/
I'm the BEST-EMCEE, and 'you ain't fuckin with it' like VASECTOMIES!/
REST-AS-EASE, coz my VERSE-IS-SCARING this PERSON-DARING/
Fight me? Kid I'm the 'best in the ring' like a PERFECT-MARRIAGE! (think)/
This CURSING-BARON, will grab your body, TURN-AND-TEAR-IT/
Coz your rhymes ain't makin sense like having VIRGIN-PARENTS/
My talent? No WORDS-CAN-BARE-IT, coz POETIC'S-ONE-DOPE-EMCEE/
And Gambino's like Phone Sex... kid, you'll 'NEVER-CUM-CLOSE-TO-ME' (lol)/

whats up bitch!

how you gonna try and FIGHT GAM when you already know you loosin TONIGHT FAM//
cause you couldn' beat me if I was peewee herman and you was my RIGHT HAND//

so stop the COMMOTION this bitch should just stop fuckin' POSTIN'//
he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//

and this cats overrated because in real life he has no NET WORTH//
but on the other hand I got more variety than the home shopping NETWORK//

this nigga likes to start shit out loud so we know he's not DISCREET THEN//
so we started BEEF'N and he put a 12 hour time limit cause he knows i'll MISTREAT HIM//

so for now on i aint gotta chase after these bitches like CATTLE//
cause he's a pussy so there's already enough bitch in this BATTLE//

and yeah he is a pussy! and he sucks so he's always SITTIN' on his KNEES//
but like jessica simpson the question is, is it fish or is it CHICKEN of the SEA//

and now I just killed this cat cause this bitch wanted to start a FIGHT with ME//
so its like the sequel cause i just made another addition to the dead poets SOCIETY//

fuck you poetic.......

one love to all the other cats on this site..........

i'm out lets git some votes.......

uppin^^^for votes................

one love..........

uppin^^^for votes............

one love............

up this shit for the murder it is..no fuckn contest...bow down

man fuck you nigga^^^

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YO Check da break

Structre-Gam
Flow-Gam
Punches-Poetic
Multis-Poetic
Metas Poetic

Vote Poetic liked your vrese a bit more yo hit up my battle

how he got better punches^^^^^^



one love.......

I carry EIGHT-LAZERS, ROASTIN-FOLKS, you KNOW-YOU'RE-TOAST/
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
My fav line hot punch right there

Breakdown:

Punches: Poetic
Metas: Poetic
Multies: Poetic
Wordplay: Poetic
Flow: Tie
Disses: Tie

By Far Poetic Takes This One With Ease.He Had A Strong Opening And Ending.His Punches Were Strong And He Showed Some Tight Complexity.Gambino Was Well Out-Matched In This One

Vote-Poetic

this is some gay shit..................................

you bowing down yet? what's gay about it, you're merked...i'm too lyrically advanced for your ass

man fuck that your just an ass no lyrically nothin

i need some real ass votes not a bunch of dick ridin'

vote poetic
better punches and multis
both could work on vocab and personals a lil

willl where's the vote?? uppin for 3 more votes to ko this kat

I liked Gam's structure an punches more, no disrspect

vote = gam

^....haha

upp some shit....get some more votes on this piece...

muh vote goes to tha nigga Gam

pretty clean line:
so stop the COMMOTION this bitch should just stop fuckin' POSTIN'//
he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//

Best line in battle:
I carry EIGHT-LAZERS, ROASTIN-FOLKS, you KNOW-YOU'RE-TOAST/
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/

nice one:
and yeah he is a pussy! and he sucks so he's always SITTIN' on his KNEES//
but like jessica simpson the question is, is it fish or is it CHICKEN of the SEA//

but still, it goes to Gam

BEST-IN-JEST, even if I jot my 'notes high' like TREBLE-CLEFS/
i know i asked u to clarify this line,but i wasnt feelin it
And my 'talk shows skills' like murdering OPRAH-WINFREY (talk shows kills
i know what u was tryna say,but...i think it was weak wordplay
So I'll put 'metal to your chest' like a fuckin PACEMAKER/
i liked this
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
i liked this too
I'm the BEST-EMCEE, and 'you ain't fuckin with it' like VASECTOMIES!/
i know i've seen this before
And Gambino's like Phone Sex... kid, you'll 'NEVER-CUM-CLOSE-TO-ME'
i liked this
Fight me? Kid I'm the 'best in the ring' like a PERFECT-MARRIAGE! (think)/
this isnt really a good meta...i get it,but...
Coz your rhymes ain't makin sense like having VIRGIN-PARENTS/
nice line


but..most of ur punches i've seen before,at least the concept
n i think u were tryna emphasize ur multies wayyyy too much
ur flow was fell off a lot,n u shouldnt use all those dashes

gambino

cause you couldn' beat me if I was peewee herman and you was my RIGHT HAND//


he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//
these are prolly ur best punches,but the concept is played
and here's some advice....u should't put 2 lines with the same content side by side at least spread it out
n that chicken of the sea line...BOOOOOOOO


aight,i mean,gambino tried to be more original...but those lines sucked..he had better flow,but no multies...poetic had better punches,but concepts were played on most of them,n multies were forced n the flow fell off here n there,but over all it was better


so vote=poetic

uppin for one more vote.....bitch

im givin u that last vote fam, this battle wasnt even close all gambino had was punches poetic had better flow multies, but i do agree w/ the chic u kinda did over use them but it still raised yo flow over this cat battle over vote poetic