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YoungStar* vs. J-Mob
no d/r or b/s votes
crew votes allowed if their not b/s or d/r 10 line minimum but don't have maximum u spit first checkin and spit due 10 mins afta u check in ma spit is due 10 mins afta urs |
Lets do this shit dogg
Im ready No Bad Blood Dogg |
of course no badd blood..only badd blood i got is wit Chalk Clorox..neva did like him
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yo ur 10 mins are up..r u gonna spit or wut
come on and spit |
disaster attacks on the fake ass cats--
gettin ripped up by the pitbull to shreads and scraps-- by hustlas wit dreads and slacks-- what yall know bout them frisco macks-- maken they paper stacks-- pushin these hatas back, money maken is my goal-- yall got haterism in yall soul-- yall finna loose like a 7 on the second roll-- i see more trix in the game than a cereal bowl-- be real, but yall cant feel bout projects and hustlin fo dough-- gettin caught by the rollas cause yall 2 slow-- yall aint rookie nor pro-- u aint a pimp, but a hoe-- gettin knocked out from one blow-- from my fist not from my elbow-- maken yall sad and mellow-- its that asassin fellow-- pack heat, wit a loaded clip-- dont trip off of me, trip off the the trigga i grip-- this fool rhymes about shit cuz he cant get nothin-- better yet he talks wack cuz he cant spit nothin-- jump off tha site wit ya wack rhymes boy you bout to see-- aint even a tight name you just a bitch to me-- this kid prolly never seen a real pussie-- veterans rhymin on posers, and posers be baggin on rookies-- bitch cant you get real wins, instead of cheap ones tryin ta look tuff-- specially when you rhyme wack talkin all that gay stuff-- bag on a bitch like im doin, maybe youll get recognition-- but you stuck steady lookin more stupid than r.kelly in ignition-- get a condom and a porn mag, wack off on ya own time-- too easy to beat, i could beat ya wit no lines-- fuck the bullshit im out, aint even got shit to say-- you cant even rhyme about pussy nigga just swing tha other way-- motherfucker wish me luck?-- you runnin around here like some brand pussy,bout to get fucked-- Its that J so dont try and fuck with me and the back of your eyelids will be the last thing you'll see-- The Mob no hard feelings dogg |
Reck It Youngin
Show em how we do it Let this be a hard battle |
J-Mob..wut tha fuck wuz that
ya shit is so simple, fuck shootin wit ma gat i don't need a weapon, i assault u wit a stare ma spit so hot that it makes tha flames to flare tha J in ya name must b for Jumpin cuz u git preety upset when ma glock is pumpin and tha MOB don't mean a shit means to sit, ur flo is means to spit all ova ya bodi, afta i blast ya dome i have gold on ma car cuz i don't mess wit chrome i disrespek ya whole family cuz ya'll ain't worth ma tyme ya spit is weak wudn't buy ya album fa a dyme neva hard feelings, but i spit like there is wit u spittin erybodi done like soda that don't pop or fizz they call me YOUNGSTAR, cuz i gon b a star that's young u ain't been no wurr wit a gurl,u jus gave ur mom some tongue ur fucked up, ur dumb,and ya shit wuz whack u ain't got no damn Donald's so how tha hell you gon MAC |
Your 10 minutes is almost up dogg
you ready to spit |
no hard feelinngss..fa sho..uppin fa tha votes....
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Tight Battle dogg
Cum on peps lets get those votes |
All You katz thats votin
check ma other battles |
UPPIN MA NIGGA$$$..i'm goin to eat when i git back i want at leat 3 votes totalk
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Damn Where Tha Votes At
Lets Get This Shit On Lock |
A I Give This One To Star Cuz His Punches Were More Effective And His Stucture Was More Put Together
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cuzzes don't sleep on this...vote vote vote..i alwayz vote on ya'll so vote on mine
J-Mob and me did our thang..letsd git some voting happenin |
Ok lets get this straight. Young is a girl. But heres my vote.
Jmob- you had a lot of content, but was still a weak verse. You punches were played out and not effective at all. It had a pretty decent flow, and alright structure, some played but shaky metas. No vocab or personals. Young- You came with a decent structure, some iight flow and some ok punches. It was not all that good though. You have to work on getting metas in there along with some personals. I see how ya tried to get at his name, but it didnt really work. You had and alright flow. Ok, this was a close yet wack battle. I would have to say you tied in every aspect you could, but you both didnt have vocab. Youngstar* came with weak but the only personals. So i have to give this to Young for having personals. Elevate both ya'll, Good newbie battle. V/ YoungStar* |
aight we need more votes...g00d battl3 j-mob..may the best man or woman win
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im givin this one to star flowed better 420 represent
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
^ Quik, you have to explain better or your vote wont count.
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very very tight here but my vote goes to j-mob for better punches,flow and personals but multis and vocab goes to youngstar.
v/j-mob |
im give this one to youngstar, his structure was beta and i enjoyed readin his verse
j-mob ya verse was good but it was a bit long and dragged on at the end - make it more to the point and snappy dog time, and u mite get the win. vote - youngstar |
o and can u hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 |
i give ups to both of ya'll ur flows where nice but that last one youngstar spit took this shit
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yall finna loose like a 7 on the second roll--
i see more trix in the game than a cereal bowl-- bag on a bitch like im doin, maybe youll get recognition-- but you stuck steady lookin more stupid than r.kelly in ignition nice lines i think both of yall were even but J came with alot more personals and punchlines he came off harder and I thought he spit the truth just by these two lines by both were tight J just came with more game and tha MOB don't mean a shit means to sit, ur flo is means to spit all ova ya bodi, afta i blast ya dome i have gold on ma car cuz i don't mess wit chrome Vote=J-Mob yall keep doin your thing |
yo man youngstar won that shit. no beef j-mob your shit looked good but once i started reading i was like what the fuck. youngstar is rite that your ryhmes were simple there and you got to put more power in it. you get em next time. today ain't your day.
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DAMN!!
J-Mob came with some heat I think just the fact that that fool came up with all that shit is tight but lets get this straight Flow =J Struc=Y opener=J closer=Y metas=Y personals=J multis=J 4-3 vote J-Mob nice battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
J-Mob we did it dawg....we battled...UPPIN
we done got it goin let's git it movin GO VOTE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117704 YoungStar* vs Chalk Clorox |
Lets Get Some Votes Lets Close This Already
Uppin For Some Votes |
Nice Sweep On That Chalk Kid Dogg
You Took That One Even Though It Wasnt Your Best |
Damn yall need some votes ta close this shit out already
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have you voted bro
go tell ya friends man come vote...only 3 votes at tha most ya heard we need to close this GOOD BATTLE |
Weak Battle -
The Break Down Flow-j-mob Vocab-j-mob- Structure-young Star Punchlines - None In This Battle - Vote Goes 2 J-mob J-mob- Wasn't Really In Battle Mode Young Star - It Was Hard 2 Understand Yo Shit Young Star - Ur Punchlines Didn't Hit Hard J-mob- Was Kinda Weak In The Beginning But Got Better Towards The End |
damn ya'll aiin't like ma closer?
i thought it wuz funny GOOD BATTLE comin down to tha wire whoeva winz we kno we ain't merked tha otha..it wuz a even battle |
er uh UPPIN 2 mor votes at tha most
comeon i do it for ya'll ya'll do it for me VOTING |
yo u both had a gud flow
lyrically i was feelin J-mob a lil more, the verse was pretty hott but it didnt get too personal. and the structure wasnt too great which kinda phuck-it up 4 me ima go with yungstar b/c his shyt seemed more direct, and hit a lil harder althogh the vocab needs to be elevated overall both emcees did they thang vote= yungstar for a lil more flare, with less word usage |
week battle.....star came wid harder punches with out classed other cat.....j-mob...kinda herish man.....punches didnt realy hit...pz out
v/youngstar |
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