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anxiety 03-29-04 08:10 PM

Topical: J-Mob vs. kuniva
 
Regular weed shit
due by midnight est.
16-20 lines
no gay shit
drop a link, well vote

anxiety 03-29-04 08:17 PM

check in so i know u aint no showin

J-Mob 03-29-04 08:26 PM

Im here fool

Lets Reck this shit
show these katz what weeds all about

anxiety 03-29-04 09:46 PM

ill start this shit off with a piece of advice
so if you smoke you can sleep easy at night
never smoke near a burger king near a wendy's
cause you'll leave with your wallet nearly empty
ever find yourself just takin a hit?
whenever your bored, ur bakin and shit
goin to the dinner table, eyes driftin n' red
eatin so much food ur never liftin ya head
get paranoid? walk inside and your scared shitless
parents looken like they know who was their witness
your fuckin starvin, so you decide to feast yourself
on a box of cookies covered with keebler elves
have you ever had the feeling that you just sink in the chair
or something you have is missing tell you blink and its their
i used to be told that i was sure-to-be caught
when in fact you just make sure your door is suc-ur-ely locked
and wash your clothes, just dont do some crazy shit
like leave your pipe on your dresser, and find yourself blaming it
on a friend, just take the blame and dont even ask questions
just blaze while your grounded, and dont regret your confession

some real shit right their

J-Mob 03-29-04 10:05 PM

AWW SHIT!

Dogg I've done cau-sed a gaze, cuz that smoke i exhaled was from that "PURPLE HAZE"-
i hit that dro and that KB too, dont get it twisted, cuz when Im blown its like watchin a bitch gettin fisted-

bongs, pipes, joints, blunts it dont mat-ter, I toke so hard I make real G's fucken scat-t er-
You know these bitches be wantin to give it up when they was-ted--

lickin ma chops O DAMN! I can already taste-it--

So weed's the topic-I got alot of shit to write- wit ma eyes soo blood-shot-
O fuck I think Im losin my sight-

so many kinds of bud which one do I choose- take a couple of hits then toss my head back an snooze

fuck 5's-10's-and 20's i smoke those halfs and pounds--

need some good THC so when i smoke I shake the grounds--

Take a good wiff- yeah thats that hydro bud--

watchin tha tele trippin off of that Elmer Fudd--

Wit a bong-all u gots ta do is wait for the bub-ble-

after you take a hit and exhale thats when you know you in tro-uble--

Tha Shit that I hit is so good I got tha po-po joinin in- watch as they take a toke, then look over an grin


A lighter an grass its a lethal combi-nation--

haterz get madd when i smoke call me an abombi-nation--

yall brag about how much yall somke but you really a fake--

Got the Munchies so bad I need to bake me a cake--

J-Mob 03-29-04 10:07 PM

I Think We've Done Reck Tha Flow Dogg

This Is Some Hot Shit!

anxiety 03-29-04 10:33 PM

aight, lets get some votes up in here (1)

J-Mob 03-29-04 10:38 PM

for sure yall need ta vote on this shit
some hotness

J-Mob 03-29-04 11:08 PM

Uppin For Some Votes yall can drop a link we'll vote

J-Mob 03-29-04 11:38 PM

Where tha votes at
Damn come on
I vote on yall's
yall vote on mine

accomplishment 03-29-04 11:42 PM

Kuniva's was more of somthin a smart kid would have spit and j mobs sounds like somthin a weed head would spit so i liked his better it flows and the shit is funny as hell my vote goes to J mob return da favor

Gambino 03-29-04 11:47 PM

I like j mobs shit to but both of you did good.......
see its hard to vote on these cause there such a diffrent type of battle....
but i gotta go with j mobs i liked his shit just a little more.......
big ups to both of you this is a good topic yall picked....

vote on my battles.......

one love........

J-Mob 03-29-04 11:51 PM

uppin lets get some more people votin

much love for votin

for sure ill return the favor

DEsTIn2dEsTroY 03-30-04 12:17 AM

yeah i like how you all aproached this battle with a theme in all ! kuniva youstructure was proper and flow was nice !!! i respect your ablities ! but i have to agree with the others on this one ! j-mob had to be actually stoned when he wrote this one ! funny shit ! he get's my vote peace !!!

anxiety 03-30-04 12:25 AM

stoned because he sucked or stoned because it was funny?

Willa 03-30-04 02:55 AM

my vote is 4 kuniva cause his was more realistic
good drop to both u could work on vocab

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Willa 03-30-04 02:56 AM

i di that backwords my vote is 4 j mob get a mod 2 change thet my bad kids

!ceCold 03-30-04 03:01 AM

jesus boys this was 1 hvy battle!
its realy hard to choose...but kuniva has my vote...i just felt his flow better than j.he had better punches but j had better peronals
v/kuniva

anxiety 03-30-04 03:04 AM

haha, fag, this wasnt a battle

Willa 03-30-04 03:06 AM

what a fuckin dumbass he had betteer personals and punches roflmfao damn i think u should report that to a mod lol

anxiety 03-30-04 03:08 AM

^ i already did, dont waste your time

Kingz 03-30-04 05:03 AM

kuniva, his structure was better and i liked his flow but j-mobs flow was hot, kuniva kept it real but j-mob did make me laugh, but kuniva had better punches. although j-mobs was more personal.

damn its hard to choose, i think ima give this to j-mob

hit this battle y'all
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

anxiety 03-30-04 05:06 PM

i think im just going to put this in the RB complaints because of all the people givin this to j-mob because of personals or punches, dont be gay just to get a vote, this is a topical

DeVaZtAtE MinDz 03-31-04 02:21 PM

This competition is fucked.... All muthfukkaz do is look who the first person voted for then follow them. And most of ya'll obviosly dont even read the shyt. lol @ personalz an punches manne FUCK YA'LL

anxiety 03-31-04 08:54 PM

DeVaZtAtE MinDz, could you please vote, drop a link and ill hit it up

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 03-31-04 08:58 PM

LmfaO What Are Ya'll Thinking......?????????

anxiety 03-31-04 09:56 PM

ahhhhhhhhh, why is everyone dissagreeing but not voting, cmon, drop a link

Nephew J 03-31-04 10:24 PM

agiht, both high ass niggas did aight..

ill start this shit off with a piece of advice
so if you smoke you can sleep easy at night
never smoke near a burger king near a wendy's
cause you'll leave with your wallet nearly empty
hahahahahaha
moe realistic, not a battle but
vote:kuniva

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Replay 03-31-04 10:43 PM

yo i think that j-mob got his ass kicked i didn't like thta flow and the punchline suck, try harder. and i tell you work on it. the double indent made it look like you were kicking older shit. however that other dude broke his own rules and spit 21 line, which is mor than 20 :)

anxiety 04-01-04 02:00 AM

no i didnt

LaTiNKiTTeN 04-01-04 08:13 AM

i dont really like writin to topics..they were both aight i guess..jmob's verse spoke to me more though,cant really explain why i was just feelin it a lil more...

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anxiety 04-04-04 01:26 PM

uppin, this baby is reopened, can the people that came in here and said shit like "youre all crazy" drop a vote and a explanation for me please, seems like all the newbs here are the only ones voten, drop a link

GKillaz05 04-04-04 01:48 PM

both did very well.... its hard to pick who won but I think J-Mob won my just a little bit cuz he told it like a tru stonner... everyone hit my battle up wit Street.. peace

anxiety 04-04-04 01:57 PM

give a fuckin reason if i lost, or read the fuckin verses, im sick of this shit, g-killaz, u wrote exactly what everyone else who voted for j-mob wrote, did u read the battle????

Restricted 04-04-04 02:41 PM

Damn...This Battle Is Being Stretched Beyong Belief..

J-Mob: 5/10
Your Structure Was Wack and Your Flow Was Off Like Mad. You Seem To Throw Punches But At Who?? This Was Supposed To Be A Topical!!

Kuniva: 6/10
Your Structure Was More Of A Topical Battle. Your Flow Was Nice But Your Lyrical Content Lacked. You Got This Battle Due To Your Flow Structure.....Your Barely Won.

SHITTY TOPIC YOU TWO PICKED!

Vote- Kuniva

~R~

anxiety 04-04-04 08:27 PM

lets go, get this shit untied

Nope 04-04-04 09:12 PM

aight aight ......
j mob spit like it from a more pot head view point which more people could really vibe too....
kuniva spit it like a story type shit....definately can vibe too it and feel whta hes sayin ......
Both were really hot verses but im a vote for Kuniva cause i felt he came with a different approach that was more enjoyable

Daclassic 04-04-04 09:32 PM

jmob...it was hard for me to maintain a steady flow with your verse. next time right this topical to a beat or something...and maybe it will work out for u. structure it was hard for me to read steadily
kuniva..if this was a battle then maybe. but its a topical and u stuck to it more. structure and flow was the main thing that stood out. but the vocabulary usage jus wasnt up to par.
this is kind of like an indecisive win...but i vote kuniva. for really sticking to what the battle was about..


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