QuiKhit vs. accomplishment
 

10 - 20 linez no d/r

man u suck at this game i think another career is what u should seek/
man i heard u where so gay that they call ur mouth sperm creek/
nigga u aint shit to me/
trust me im a tru mutha fuckin P.I.M.P/
im reppin the 420 crew from the chi/
thats how i get around man thats how i get by/
all day walk around look for people to kill/
man im good at what i do yea mutha fuckin it wat god gave me my skill/
so knowin u not goin to win jus chill/
im comin at ya ass in all different directions cummin at ya ass like a penis erection/
dont be ahshamed u use the viagra shit/
but dont see why u aint never gon hit/
yo ight ill stop wastin my time/
cause u an me both kno that i won this ryme

yo man nice punchlines lines that shyt bout tha sperm creek was great, now just wait this boi

YO check dis one out for all my Dirtas in De-Tweezy for all dem Damn Haters In Chi-Town Bitches and for all my People in Clas sic

Yo yo spits get ripped yo must be "quick" to get "hit"...
fuck wit da sic..no ya 420 riders accountin of only one in ya clique.../

Fuck dis homo-sexual cuz he can rhyme two words bitch thinks he's Textual...
Fragmented Rhymes hit me so little i could say yo verse is sensual...
Hand ya ass my dick tell ya its the mic put it to ya mouth I-Betcha-Will...
This mofucker thaught 21 questions was a way for fifty to Test-Yo-Skills.../

My rhymes outa dis world more like lyrically intergalatic....
Cuz when ya here da click of a mack bitch run cuz i'ma blast it.../

Slain by da keystyles of a lyrically enhanced emcee...
Put ya to sleep peacefully, bliss filled kill cuz my versus is called Text-ta-cee.../

yo fin get some votes holla

see i dont even no bout that shyt^^ hata thas all, but ne ways i liked quiks stuff he flowed easier, and it was more personal, u had nice punchlines but u dissed tha chi, cant let that ride :nono:

Dude quit wit da fucken hate votes man you vote against me on every single one of my battle you honestly read that guys shit i think he wrote P.I.M.P in one of his lines he's a joke dawg i could understand daclassic but shit man quit wit da hate votes damn

yo dawg this aint noo hate vote, no bad blood goin on here u just battlin tha wrong ppl, u hatin tryna dis tha shy

lets get some more votes in this bitch 420 represent mutha fuckas

yeah hate vote my verse is so much hotter and cuz i dis da chi you hatin you know no fuckin real rappers commin outa fuckin chicago anyways kanye west dats it da bitch dont even rhyme he makes beats look da mo fuckas commin outa detroit WHAT

Yo bitch dont hate the chi come n beat cha ass besides we got more than kanye and just cause u live up in the troit dont be u raw u punk ass bitch

quit ya bull shit freepost fuck chicago uppin yo get some fo real votes in hurr

fuck up punk quit cha cryin cause u behind in the votes

^^^All herb votes.

This battle has a clear winner...and it ain' Quickhit. Accomplisment came wit harder punches, some fuckin' mad ass dope multies, and one of the best vocabs I have seen...Damn, gonna be tough battlin' you dawg in the leauge...

Vote- Accomplishment

Hit these up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

Yo Uppin fo votes

Breakdown:

Punches: Accom
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay:Accom
Flow:Accom
Disses: Tie

Overall This Battle Was A Landslide.Accomplishments Takes This One With Ease.His Verse Was Stronger And Had A Bit Of Complexity.Quik Came Too Weak On This One.He Talked A Bit Too Much About Himself Than His Opponent.His Punches Were Weak & Most Of His Lines Were Played

Vote-Accomplishment

Quickhit your flow was way to basic compared to accomplishment 1 his vocab flow structure is just incredibly more mature than yours was for that reason my vote goes too!!!!.............................

accomplish merked him
with better everything
structure flow punches vocab

props yo need one more vote get this shit closed

damn nice one here but here it is

quikhit's only line worth shit:
man i heard u where so gay that they call ur mouth sperm creek/

tha good shit from accomplishment:
Fuck dis homo-sexual cuz he can rhyme two words bitch thinks he's Textual...
Fragmented Rhymes hit me so little i could say yo verse is sensual...
Hand ya ass my dick tell ya its the mic put it to ya mouth I-Betcha-Will...
This mofucker thaught 21 questions was a way for fifty to Test-Yo-Skills.../

quikhit needa work on structure so it'll be more appealin' to read

Vote:accomplishment