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Sten. Cell Vs. DEsTIn2dEsTroY
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No Crew Votes No DR Votes No Feedin Due Date Tom. By Midnight |
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checkin in but not sure how much time i have left proball not enough i can get on the computer tommarro and we can finnish the battle 1 post your verse and i'll try to respond tonight but definitly by tommarow peace
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No Checkin Past Wins Cuz Im Erasin W's,Heed Your Destiny/
This Herbs' Posts Wreck-Less See,Hence His Weak Tendency/ Next Please...This Kid Cant Impress Me With Wack Frees/ His Ac-Needs Less "Candy" Bars In OrderTo Blemish Me/ Ill Exceed Your Speed,This Bugs' Tryin To Be A Hard-Cor-Vet/ Im Rippin His Scripts,Tearin His Parts And Closing This Set/ . . . Like Sucking Off A Preacher,Its Time You Face The Truth/ You've Been Abused By Boos(e) Like People In A.A Groups/ Delaying My Win Still Leaves You The Beginning Of Last/ Swayin In The End Entices No One,Ya Only Shakin Like An Ass/ Get It? |
yo really i have not alot of time to post on here sorry bro for laggin i'm a spit some off the dome right now fast peace good verse !
peep this sten-cel, stepping up to me will get U snaped in half like a pencil// fake cat's try to spit oh soo~intelectual~ but really relate more with a homosexual// you look like willlow attacking with textual rymes that hit softer than feather pillows// i'll pill thoughs wack fruits and expose the cold truth, while your mind thinks of holly men molesting our young youths // my punches prove that you are not bullet proof hold up "as i pick an object up" is this your tooth // after this battle you'll have no haert , now watch me reach inside you and rip it apart// your rhymes stink worse than a diarea fart, twice as annoying as that kid named bart// makeing classics in this game like the first mario kart// while your ass be fruity and ~pop~ like the tart// i was winning in this battle from the very start // there sorry for laggin peace good battle i'm out ! |
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uppin for feed back and some votes please peace !!!
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i have no idea y i'm upping this post in hope that i will recieve some feed back peace !@
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feed back would be nice you all peace !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin votes please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Hot battle yo god its hard decision but stencil takes this one cuz of his wordplay everthing else ya'll tied so my vote sten cil return da favor thanx
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hey thanx for the feed back plus vote g !!!!! finally ! yeah i lagged on posting on this one ! but now everyone seems to be sleeping on this battle peace i'm going to vote on others now !
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Sten Cil,
Killed it again man, your verse was fukin' John Blaze man. I think your style and the way you flip your words is real original and sic wit it. Destined, You madd nice too. It ain't really that you wasn't hott, just this nigga sten been str8 bodyin' niggaz. The wordplay was ridiculous, flow was good, punches was serious, and just overall delivery was what's up. Sten- If you don't have a crew, SERIOUSLY come to Da R.I.P. son, you'll definately have a home there. Yo, I was madd honest, and if y'all could go to my battles, post some HONEST votes, it would be appreciated, hollatchaboy |
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yo i gotta give this one to d2d..some of his lines had me surprised like oh! take those and pass em! better punch lines i give this one to d2d
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thanx man i got some luv here 1-2 stencils winning upping for more votes plus feed back peace !
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Alright, I think this one was pretty even.. slight edge in punches to d2d, edge in wordplay to cell, he had a bit more originaliy too. Y'all had pretty even flow, so basically all things even I go with sten. cuz i'm pretty sick of seeing verses that are 50% gay jokes.. grow a fucking nutsack, god damn. oh.. and wtf i like the simpsons.
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BREAKDOWN Opener - Sten...had a decent punch with sum mnice multi's...nice opener Flow - Sten...His flowed better because of the syllables being close to the same amount...destin ur shit may have lined up but the syllables made it stretched...werk on that Punches - tie...both had good punches and the same amount.... Personals - destin had better personals that hit harder... Multi's - Sten had more and better multis...destin werk on ur multis Closer - Sten...that shit was pretty hot...destin i didnt like ur closer... talleys up as... Sten - 5 Destin - 2 vote - Sten good battle both of yall stay at this level of opponents return the favor on my topical with nope.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637 |
LoL Shit's Funny A$ Hell
Alright No BullShit Check This Shit!!' Its Hott Check Sten. Cell's Lines: No Checkin Past Wins Cuz Im Erasin W's,Heed Your Destiny/ This Herbs' Posts Wreck-Less See,Hence His Weak Tendency/ ^^Dropping Decent Bar's And Tight Punches' Nice Playa Next Please...This Kid Cant Impress Me With Wack Frees/ His Ac-Needs Less "Candy" Bars In OrderTo Blemish Me/ ^ Again Nice Punches & Decent Bar's With Sum Good Multie's... Enjoyable :) Ill Exceed Your Speed,This Bugs' Tryin To Be A Hard-Cor-Vet/ Im Rippin His Scripts,Tearin His Parts And Closing This Set/ ^Once Yet Again Tight "Bars/Lines" ... With Good Punches' an Multies.. Delaying My Win Still Leaves You The Beginning Of Last/ Swayin In The End Entices No One,Ya Only Shakin Like An Ass/ ^And Last But Not Least.. An Alright Punchline' Could Use Some Work But.. Overall Shit Was "Tight" ... And Nice Structure & Flow' .... It Got You The Vote Vote: Cell |
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