Cythis vs. Brain Surgeon
 

10 bars
No flipping, feeding, countering, recycling, biting, bitching, swaying
No whack, unexpected, d/r, hate or crew votes
Voting is by:

EITHER

1. Opener
Punches
Personals
Multi's
Flow
Creativity
Originality
Meta's
Vocab
Wordplay
Complexity
Aggression
Closer

AND/OR

2. line by line breakdown followed by a final vote

OK whatever just drop your rap

it's 20 lines right

Your call-out!. You drop first!..........................................

Name is Cythis I be ya Crisis I write this..rhymes
cuz they stuck to me like Plug and Play Devices
I’m the Illest Redefined… write only the Sickest lines
grab Ya scalpel and a knife and leave you barely alive
This man think he can read your mind Cause he be a Brainsurgeon
Bitch …you couldn’t define tightness on a Virgin
Ya only became a Surgeon…so you can openly practice with ya tweezers((Tonk Off))
you aint hot… I get more heat from a Deep Freezers
Your flaws pop out like Sumo Bitch Tits in bikini’s
Ya punches turn against Ya ………..like rebels in Tahiti …Ya needy
You think you’re a great MC…Then Proof it
your rhymes like Ya initials BS…Bull Shit
Ya like a picket fence, you think your raps are sharp
cause you got pointy edges…you aint no rapper
You think you got connections cause you got a double Adapter
can you hack this..Your Rap Career like Ya profession.. you still got a PRACTICE
man… I needed a battle… and you were a Lifesaver
now I’m the ungrateful newbie……… giving Ya hart failure
I nailed Ya…………………and your Girl, I didn’t even use a dome
Look I just fucked up two pussies ………………….with One Stone

remember no feeding

oohhh damn cythis...u tore that nigga up...even tho i havent seen his post....if i was him i wouldnt reply...cause theres not much 2 say or do about that 1.....shit was hott...felt it all the way...and no im not ridin any1's dick...just the honest truth....
~1~

sounds like a dick ryder to me????????????? ?????????

uhh no clicks bud...i ride solo so fuck u....i already said i wasnt hatin..i just liked how he spat.....if uve got a problem go suck a cock...im sure u wont have a problem findin 1

B kills more kids than cot death......i'm sickly with couplets
Steaming with Hot Text....IF You beat ME.....They'd be seeing an UPSET
I'll rape this hoe...concave his dome like he were giving me fellatio
Against "THE GREATEST FOE" You'll run the country like Bush.....Racing Home
Even Atlantic Records can't compete with b when he deploys Hits
Getting brain is "A boyish dream".......I'll "put more metal in C" than Oil rigs
Reasons why I'm ill? You'd need over 6 Yrs to be qualified like B
Cythis posting women's clothing & nailfiles hoping to be "Tight" and "SiC" (Silicon Carbide)
You can't Epitomise me Kid THIS BATTLE is only SICK becuz I'm in IT
bare Witness..I'll Detach a Leg & use it to thump Ya Ass Till it's "A Court Exhibit"
I've Fathered more Niggaz than Prison Wardens...B's like a demon working
I'm lifting fuckwits......So fucking High off the Ground They're "Seeing Shuttles"
Your verse is like "Eureka!" I'll break through quick......have this gay like "Shit!!!!"
With his frame in three..worse off than standard etiquettes......"Saying Please"
b'll knife C and call it caesarian..Fill ya head with punches like Nazis to Aryan
This faggot is good Enough......Got your Head in the Clouds.....like living Raelian
You laid on the floor longer than pet food like eye sockets You only get two
This lyricist text's brute....You couldn't par with b if you went to Med School
Sorry soldier........No matter how "...Aight..." You come standard result's "Bkko'd You" like Burger King served Ebola :evilgrin:

man , BrainSurgon u suck dick , i could kick your ass at battlein :shoot: :banghead: :throwup:

it's obvious you didn't read my verse so get the fuck outta here, kid.....

cynthis won dis 1 yo. his shit was tight he had good punches a good opener rhyme combos and his ending was tight as fuck.

anyways some one vote on my wit young kidd vs lilrenegade89 cuz we need some votes.sorry i would put up a link but my copy and paste shit aint workin.

thanx for the vote need more pls vote
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping votes

hey comon vote on this battle
why dont people vote on this fucking site

i do

yo, its because you got a whack vote requirement... line by line. maybe i'll put in the effort if you drop some votes on my battles.. but seriously try just using house rules for votes.

Yo This Battle Was Heated' .... Checck Cythis's Lines

Name is Cythis I be ya Crisis I write this..rhymes
cuz they stuck to me like Plug and Play Devices
I’m the Illest Redefined… write only the Sickest lines
grab Ya scalpel and a knife and leave you barely alive
This man think he can read your mind Cause he be a Brainsurgeon
Bitch …you couldn’t define tightness on a Virgin
Ya only became a Surgeon…so you can openly practice with ya tweezers((Tonk Off))
you aint hot… I get more heat from a Deep Freezers

^^Shit's Funny As Hell' ..

Check These Lines For WordPlay, Vocab, & Punches'

Your flaws pop out like Sumo Bitch Tits in bikini’s
Ya punches turn against Ya ………..like rebels in Tahiti …Ya needy
You think you’re a great MC…Then Proof it
your rhymes like Ya initials BS…Bull Shit
Ya like a picket fence, you think your raps are sharp
cause you got pointy edges…you aint no rapper
You think you got connections cause you got a double Adapter
can you hack this..Your Rap Career like Ya profession.. you still got a PRACTICE

^^Nice Punches That Connected' ... Tight Tight'

The Closer Was A Bit Weak But It Took My Vote'..

man… I needed a battle… and you were a Lifesaver
now I’m the ungrateful newbie……… giving Ya hart failure
I nailed Ya…………………and your Girl, I didn’t even use a dome
Look I just fucked up two pussies ………………….with One Stone

Alright Votes Conducted On

Opener - Brain
Punches - Cythis
Personals - Cythis
Multi's - Brain
Flow - Cythis Had The Better Flow
Creativity - Brain - Enjoyed It
Originality - Brain's Was Much More Basic
Meta's - Cythis
Vocab - Cythis
Wordplay - Cythis
Complexity - Cythis
Aggression - Brain Had More'
Closer - Brains Closer Hit Harder' ...

Vote: Cythis' ....

ok im still not posting every thing or using all your whack categories.

shit like this:

"You think you got connections cause you got a double Adapter
can you hack this..Your Rap Career like Ya profession.. you still got a PRACTICE" is tight - it's funny and a good punch.

brain, i thought your shit was all over the place, no real flow, no real structure, not really rhyming all too well. a couple good punches but nothing spectacular to make up for the technique issues, i think.

cyth had some good punches (like above) but a lot of the stuff really missed.. still my vote with cyth.

1. Opener- Brain.. both were dry though
Punches- Brain
Personals- I saw name Play but no personals.
Multi's- Brain
Flow- Cythis
Creativity- Brain
Originality- Brain
Meta's- Cythis
Vocab- Brain
Wordplay- Brain
Complexity- Brain
Aggression- ...
Closer- Neither
Vote- Brain

Brain: I'll "put more metal in C" than Oil rigs

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Great people vote now

HEY was it something i said............................GOOD


thanx 4 the votes

1. Opener- Brain.. both were dry though
Punches- Brain
Personals- I saw name Play but no personals.
Multi's- Brain
Flow- Cythis
Creativity- Brain
Originality- Brain
Meta's- Cythis
Vocab- Brain
Wordplay- Brain
Complexity- Brain
Aggression- ...
Closer- Neither
Vote- Brain

Brain: I'll "put more metal in C" than Oil rigs

Only tight Line I seen from Cythis was the Practice Line.. Everything else was elementary. Both had an awful rhythm but I felt Brain won it with creativity.. This vote better count.. Or I'm knocking strobe lights out Like I was clumsy at raves

ok great now lets get some more votes

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^still upping

ok great now lets get some more votes

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^still upping

ok great now lets get some more votes

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^still upping
i vote all the time......................but no one else does

they should actually make a rule that mc's dont have a choice but 2 vote

Cythis - Good battle, very good punches... awesome flow and some sweet multi's.

Best Line - This man think he can read your mind Cause he be a Brainsurgeon
Bitch …you couldn’t define tightness on a Virgin
Ya only became a Surgeon…so you can openly practice with ya tweezers((Tonk Off))
you aint hot… I get more heat from a Deep Freezers (that was hot)

Worst Line - NONE

brainsurgeon - alright spit, threw some alright punches and flow was pretty good.

Best Line - B kills more kids than cot death......i'm sickly with couplets
Steaming with Hot Text....IF You beat ME.....They'd be seeing an UPSET

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - I gotta give to to C cuz she brought it harder, she had better flow harder punches and sweet multi's ... keep at it brain you will get ill' if you keep tryin work on your flow and punches.

VOTE - Cyt

u kno what u a pain in the ass brain surgeon ur voting rules are long as hell u need to stop bewing a pussy cause i can break it down just like this.......cythis merked ya...
here is ur fukin break down though

Opener brain surgeon
Punches cythis (brain surgeon was drawn out and boring)
Personals cythis
Multi's brain surgeon
Flow cythis (this was an easy choice)
Creativity cythis (brain surgeon based 2 much of his battle of his fukin name, dawg u aint a doctor get over it)
Originality brain surgeon (nobody else is dumb enough to spit about there name)
Meta's cythis
Vocab cythis (small words but efective, remember its not size its how u use it)
Wordplay cythis
Complexity brain surgeon (his battle was very complex and impossible to read)
Aggression cythis
Closer cythis (that shyt was funny as hell)
and a personall column i like to add.....
desperation brain surgeon (lol)

9-5 vote goes to cythis....