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YoungStar* 03-30-04 06:20 PM

YoungStar* vs. LyriCal Havok
 
we alreadi got tha rules..
ur spittin first
no crew votes
no b/s or d/r votes
unlimited bars..but yeah 10 bar minimum
check in b4 u spit
ur herb butt has been beatiin unprepared newbs but i'm different

Raphael 03-30-04 06:24 PM

aight im checkin to let you know im here but i have to type up my spit

YoungStar* 03-30-04 06:30 PM

that's coo
checkin in...waitin on your spit which is due in 10-15

Raphael 03-30-04 06:35 PM

aight check it

Young star this is nothin personal,//
But ur leader got scared of my arsenal//
Coz im 8 and 0, he started to tremble//
But since ur here im bout to dissemble.//
Are you really a recruit bitch don’t lie to me//
I bet ur gonna put my lyrics in ur little diary//
d.j em sce musta been smoking crack//
oh well say it with me youngstars shit is WHACK!!//
Haha the newest recruit to the posse//
Lets revise ur shit, it’s a lil too sloppy//
Forget average this coverage is above ur leverage //
Ur stunted so you cant reach up n’ enjoy the beverage//
Ur shit is weak, and what is wit the name young star//
Your like hilary duff forced at 18 to retire//
But your demise will come sooner than that//
In fact its now bitch, we’ll get you to the hospital stat//
Like I said it was nothing personal, just business//
Go back to d.j em sce and ask for repentance.//

Raphael 03-30-04 06:37 PM

aight like you said ya got 10 min to spit.........

YoungStar* 03-30-04 06:48 PM

i'm bout to drop now
h/o
i type slow
sorry
lol

Raphael 03-30-04 06:59 PM

you like going on 15 min late.......................but thts coo

YoungStar* 03-30-04 07:02 PM

Man u whack as hell,,suprised that the leader wud have it
ur fucked up structure and flo is tha only thing causin havok
lyrically ur a faggot, trynna find ya man's dick to grab it
ur rankin is so low that they still call u a maggot
but i don't wanna ryde ya fake ass herbish skill
i mean ya fake ass repentence is tha only thing i will feel
yet still i spit, constantly fillin in tha gapz of ur mind
i don't kno y i fuck wit herbs like u..i really ain't got tha tyme
i don't like tha fact that u choose young newbs to smack
sound like u scared of vets that's tha fact
ur vocab is whack, its kinda scary
i mean u come as soft as a 10 year olds gums..waitin fo a tooth fairy
but like i sed i gotta end this shit
I'm sik, check ya ass fa STD's az i spit

White Light 03-30-04 07:51 PM

ok well i though Lyrical Havok had better vocab and better flow... but youngstar u stood ok pretty good from both sides...
my vote goes 2 Lrical Havok

YoungStar* 03-30-04 08:41 PM

UPPINNN..pleez expalain more when you vote ya heard...UPP UP UPPPIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

go vote vs chalk clorox..and vs j mob ya heard...do that thurrrrr

LIL JOE 03-30-04 09:04 PM

youngstar hit that shit of
even though lyricals flow had some hits they werent a match
mine goes to young

YoungStar* 03-30-04 09:07 PM

good battle lyrical havok...let's git some votes..*whisper* herb

Raphael 03-30-04 09:16 PM

we need some more votes in this bitch ya know us newbs need some winz too....

Afterword 03-30-04 10:29 PM

yo both verses were koo
gud punches, gud wordplay, gud personals
but i felt like yungstar fell off a lil at the end
and it started to sound repetetive, maybe due to lack of diverse vocab
anyway havoc came smooth and consisitant so he gets my vote
peace

YoungStar* 03-30-04 10:30 PM

aight yeah wuteva
go vote damnit
go vote dudes
youngstar vs snyper
youngstar vs j mob
youngstar vs lyrical havok..but ya'll can't poll vote(CREW)
youngstar vs chalk clorox....ya'll mite b able to vote..i can't member(CREW)
but yeah and i have a open mic entitled..this is ma fourth
go support..i'll support back..jus send a PM

$$UPREME 03-30-04 10:40 PM

Lyrical Havok Had A Good Verse Even Though He Fell Off At The End
Young Star Wasn't As Good A Havok
Flow-havok
Vocab-havok
Structure-havok
Vote Goes 2 Havok
(well Explained) The Truth 1 Luv

YoungStar* 03-30-04 10:48 PM

wow..that wuz preety wrong but wuteva...
real votes..com on ya'll
real votes damnit
go vote dudes
youngstar vs snyper
youngstar vs j mob
youngstar vs lyrical havok..but ya'll can't poll vote(CREW)
youngstar vs chalk clorox....ya'll mite b able to vote..i can't member(CREW)
but yeah and i have a open mic entitled..this is ma fourth
go support..i'll support back..jus send a PM

Red Dogg420 03-30-04 10:57 PM

yo i liked both they were pretty evenly matched except tha last couple lines of young was sick, they had punches pretty even, and structure was bout tha same, both had good personals but i think tha last couple lines did it for young

vote-young

yo no hard feelings just bein honest :thumbup:

shabba ranks 03-31-04 02:07 PM

lyrical havok had this battle made, he had flow and punches. dam lyrical ur geting good. but thats some good stuff u had young. keep it up

vote~Lyrical havok

YuNG TiLT 03-31-04 02:25 PM

i like tha punch lines, and youngstar was gettin it. So was Havok but Havok kinda had more "uh" into it. U gotta get personal


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