D~Illar~1 -vs- Lil Rip
 

aight since u 2 pussy 2 spit 1st...i'll drop wen i get home
verse due in by 11:00 2nite

10 lines
no b/shit, d/ryde votes
may the best man win..lol

just got home...so i'll key this shit....
*smirks*
Fucking herbs these days..... :thefinger

Lil Rip comin to RB.com was the world's worst decision/
He's gonna get the sack, like the blind guy who did his cirumcision/
You're dyin to be a G, prewritin your shit 2 look less whack/
Focussed on your image, when its lyrical skills that you lack/
~Hasty 2 mention~
The only time you see 'pussy' is by looking at your 'reflection'/
You'll get tossed-regardless I promise even if you drop-your-hardest/
Honestly I'll still set this herbicide (herb aside) like cautious-farmers/
So while you're assuming-positions ill formulate an attack-of-my-own/
cuz i'm shitting on this MC like mcdonalds served me a laxative-cone/


*Hands Lil R.I.P his ass*

i didnt see your other thread...
make sure u drop something...
pussy...

rip

it rip time, time to put you in a grave*
if your last name was jesus your ass still couldn't be save*
you the king of puchlines i'm cool with that*
just know if your ass punch i'm gonna punch back*
cause punchlines are ill*
go mo ko then avander hollyfield*
you ain't shit just a bitch that deep throat*
and the only way you can win is by sucking dick for crew votes*
and tell that hoe you call mom to stop changing lipsticks*
cause the bitch is making a rainbow out of my dick*

now what bitch

my bad had so typeos this is how it surpose to look

d~illar: good punches and structure, i liked the line
You're dyin to be a G, prewritin your shit 2 look less whack/
Focussed on your image, when its lyrical skills that you lack/
that shit was tight anyways 7/10

lil rip: ya shit sounds like mine, it rhymes good but ya punches are weak, ya even honored him by saying ya was cool wit him bein the king of punchlines. what the hell are you doing worshipping someone ya battlin? don't drop ya nut like dat, anyways 3/10

win:d~illar

thanks for the advice i'll use it in my next battle ........................mabye you

i vote on battles based on punchlines so here it is

D~Illar~1:u got some skills on the punchline side i can't lie my favor puches were "He's gonna get the sack, like the blind guy who did his cirumcision" that wuz tight and this one "The only time you see 'pussy' is by looking at your 'reflection' that wuz tight to

lil rip:u good to man but u gotta get yo punchline game up cuz u came at him a lil weak but u still had a punch that stood out to me "if your last name was jesus your ass still couldn't be save" that wuz nice but u gotta be constant wit the punches and just so happen he had more that stood out, better luck neck time

so wit that bein said my vote goes to:D~Illar~1

thank for the in put still uppin gor voters

is this a k.o or not..

you ain't shit just a bitch that deep throat*
and the only way you can win is by sucking dick for crew votes
^^ i aint in a crew lol....

hey you got this ya you right to you got a lot of skill most respect

but you still need to more votes right

k i thought it was 1st to 3-0 was k.o

post the thread in battle complaints...

or whuteva...

drop by this thread n drop a vote ...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117553

HoLLaH aTCHa Boi!

they have not closed it yet so i guess we still is uppin for votes

lil rip u need to elavate u gettin better but u ant touch dude on this battle, everything was better vote-ill

Opener - D...was stretched but was hot....
Flow - D had that flow poppin n it werked perfectly....
Punches - D's punches were direct n hit very hard...lil rip u need to werk on them punches
Structure - D...lil rip u had stretched lines n that fucks up flow n structure...
Vote - D
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117820