DisasterPeice420 Vs. Lil Rip
 

Place The Rules Playa'

And You Spit First!!!!!!!!!

Ill Check In After You Check In!!!!!!!!!

at least 10 lines 20 max
no dickriding crew votes or hate votes
recycle if you want
you drop first
cool with you?

Lol Playa I Specifically Said You Drop First!!' But If You Want To Get It Twisted Yeah Im Cool With That No Disrespect I'll Drop First If Thats What You Want!!

And Nah' Fuck Recycling.. I Mean You Can Recycle If You Would Like!!' .. Its Cool

Im Checkinnnnnnnn In!!!!! ...

Droppin***

I'm The Fuckin General And I'm Pullin My "Rank",/
Lil Rip is a "Little Fish" Get Your A$$ Back in The "Tank",/
Ferocious Like A Rotty, Leave You Crawlin On All 'Fours',/
Another Body On The Shotty, Leave You Sprawled On The Floor,/
Red Dot On Your Back Like A "Dorsal-Fin",/
BuckShot Bend Your A$$ Like A "Convex-Lens",/
When These Disses Hit You Lil Rip, I Bet You Wish For Death,/
And Wish You Was Superman When That SKS Hits Your Chest,/
But Its A Cruel World So Poke Your Lip Out And "Pout",/
Cause You're "Just A Wannabe" And There Aint No "Doubt",/
I Tower Over You Lil Rip With Your Nursery Rappers and Rhymers,/
Even Over "The Net", I Will Tell You Over The Wires,/
You Aint Shit, Your FreeStyle Career is Dead Lil Rip Man "Retire",/
You Desire And Aspire To Be Higher, But No Tools as "Required",/
Fuck I Rap Whack, But That Shit Dont "Even-Matter",/
Wake Up Muther-Fucker Your Rap Dreams Im "Going-To-Shatter",/

Drop Playa................... I Aint Got All Day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rip

that shit was a real DISASTER* pull out my PIECE to blast ya* tha master, at this rap game*live your life a disaster with no name*and get brian from all the girls you kiss*get piss and have your ass dismiss*and this is only tha beginning* and just like rims my revolver is still spining*disaster piece, let change your nam to bullshit right fast* cause that all you spit, is bullshit, like shit out fat basted ass*you can olny defeat me by other haters*cause you couldn't do a punchline if you had a hole puncher and notebook paper*cause i the fucking best so fuck you* run bitch run, while my missle hollow heat seek you*

lame but it should work

Lmfao Well Lets Watch Your Shit Work.......... It Was A Bit Hard For Me To Follow But.. Still!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Flow-dp
Structure- Dp Was Easier 2 Read
Vocab-dp
It Was Easy 2 Say Who Won
Lil Rip - Advise 4 Lil Rip Read Some Good Battles
And Learn How To Elevate

Thanx Playa Appriciate The Honest Vote!!!

Good Lookin Out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo good battle
flow-dp
structure-dp
punches-dp
vocab-dp
over all dp yo shit was easyer to read and funny
lil you got some good rymes but use the same word over and over again use bars makin it so that its easyer to read your stuff good battle

Thanks Playa' Still UUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNN NNNN~~~

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Flow-even tho derr is no flow in text..i say DP got dis
Structure- DP was easier ta read
Vocab-DP again lol
Ceativity-guess who? lol DP

This battle was whack...DP merked ol dude Lil Rip eazy lol

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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dp
 

Yo, disasterpeice had better punches, flow, vocab, multis, basically everything. Lil', you came wit it, but you was just overmatched, just keep goin' and you'll get better homie. vote/dp

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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-Thanks-

C'Mon Ya'll We Need Some Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anybody?

gotta be kidin me this waz a sorry battle dp beat him in every way possible rip dog u aitn even have good strcuture shit took a minute to read space that shit out next time and dp got more punchz and multiz < bout to be ur new nickname multi took it with more personalz

vote dp

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wow y ashouldnt sleep on her yo....i like this battle here

Disas- wow i like the opener alotand its double meaning
You had better vocab (which usually doesnt matter to me but does in this case)
I dont usually judge flow on text but i think it was better considering it was a text

Lil Rip- u kind of got Rip alot there man i think you shouldve put more effort and do your best when versing her. Your voacb wasnt nearly as good and i wasnt really feeling it ...you said like one almost good thing.

Overall vote Disas

Thanx Playa Apppriciate The Votes' .. :) Good Look Out

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Ima do this in a more acceptable way since my explanation was 4 some reason hated on. Yo, disasterpeice had better punches, flow, vocab, multis, basically everything. Lil', you came wit it, but you was just overmatched, just keep goin' and you'll get better homie.

Punches: DPeice
I Tower Over You Lil Rip With Your Nursery Rappers and Rhymers,/
Even Over "The Net", I Will Tell You Over The Wires,/

Vocab: DPeice
Otha nigga just used simplistic shit

Multis: DPeice
Ferocious Like A Rotty, Leave You Crawlin On All 'Fours',/
Another Body On The Shotty, Leave You Sprawled On The Floor,/

Flow: DPeice
Flow was smoother, and easier to read

Good battle, Lil', you just need to use more multis and vocabulary, then you'll be livin' up to your name and rippin' niggaz in no time.

DPeice, U did yo thing fosho shorty

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