Maku JaiiLiin vs. d.j em sce
 

Rules

8 bar mini
20 max
no crew vote
no dickriding vote
no biting
no recycling
blind spit

check in d.j em sce

i dont think oyu did it right

alrite he we go im checkin in...you spit first alite..then i'l drop after you alrite,..............

you is takin to long kid.....hurry up...i got to go in like 30 mins.

alright, chump...let us go.


Like CyPHiLis,
in tENeMEntS, ya kids back//
Leave d.j em sce touched like hands on Skidmats//

The drama never ends, so tell ya mama not to sing//

Cotton mouth? no, have to spit//
Trick you into getting fucked up, like casting calls for M. Jackson Flicks//

Acid raps, wrap to ya, eAtIN yA TeaM//
Have Half you stabbed now, the rest later like a sequel to Scream//

Injure you so bad, you'll flow with your own nurse//
To patch you up after the battle, cuz you told me to go first//

This penny rhymer can't hang with aces//
Sprewell movements, got me SeRVinG him cIrCulAR Strangulation//

Nod ya head d.j em sce, cuz my speach is the truth//
Till ya neck gets stretched like slaves in a sequel to roots//

You couldn't be precise if i built you a laser//
This soft bastard can't stomach me, he has to drink milk with a chaser!//

We look a like and Thats No surpise//
I been fucking ya fam's girls for years, ya dad got my nose and eyes//

I'll serve you with Mic-illingus, but it's a pleasure to me//
I'm like Helen Keller at your party, [COLOR=Navy]WHAT'S A RECORD TO ME?[/COLOR]//

After this battle, you're likely a corpse//
and more pissed than unrecognized, unsigned hypes in the source//

let's go

took you an hour damn....thats crazy..................

sorry i had to talk to like, a half dozen other people pming me and shit, about battling and stuff and tryna set shit up

aight rite now im school and the period is about to change so i got to go,.....but i'll be back lke in 15 mins ya feel and belive this shit will only tak eme like 20 mins max....ya feel.......but i'll be back....i thought for a second you was a no sho.....

oh shit just realized that it says 8 bar min..i thought it said 8 line min......oh shit it mite take me a lil longer than 30......but please believe its nuffin but heat......

alrite im back checkin in..............im bout to spit....

yo....yo...
 

Look this kid tryn to get his chance at the D.J EM SCE….. I already no he cant see me..like bulimics at jenny craig


On rb Im a cearal killa the way I pop like rice crispies//
u da type of kid to go clubbin wit j kwon and 4get to get tipsy//

I thought u new I can kill 2 m.cs wit 1 ryme like win I slaughter butcha//
look after dis you’ll b d/r dis kid like demi moore on ashton kutcher//

I will stick your whole uppa body up yo ass so u can shit clear//
But u cant see me cuz like an apparition I appear and disappear//

C you mite say Im an Ill blacksmith the way I com wit sic bars//
When dis verbal massacre occurs Maku JaiiLiin is left wit thick scars//

Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track//
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks//

I smak rapperz 4 drillin me, Lyrically da hardcore metaphor war Trilogy//
Wif verbal kemistry, ta drive u crazier than a crakhead on methanphedamine//

god stepped onto rb and was like "nigga you the next me"//
many tryn ta battle,i kill em 1 by 1 so dey all feel da rath of d.j em sce//

for those who don’t understand……slaughter and butcher were the same people………..

this is a close one but i aint voting on it htought G.L both of u................

uppin for votes.......

upppin for votes

can we get some votes on dis.........................................uppin

alright everybody we are now UPPIN 4 FuKKIN VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alright everybody we are now UPPIN 4 FuKKIN VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It took some time to decide but i'll have to give it to Maku because he had interesting punclines.

damn...overall id se dj got this but he sorta bit a line from dmx - where the hood at "Shove ya head up ya ass, have you seein shit clearly".............but dj took this wit better punches, flow, multi's,structure, and vocab....maku u need to not stretch yo lines...it fucks up flow....i didnt feel ya punches....v/dj
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305

This was quite good. Everybody came solid and had some interesting lines, so here's the breakdown...

Maku: Blazin punchlines period. Through every bar you had somethin very clever to say and your setup made it perfect. Not alot of multis, but the ones you did have made ya verse flow well.

Em Sce: You had better multis and vocab but thats about it. And in a battle, especially text, doesn't mean shit...

Winner: Maku

uppin this bitch.............................................

uppin this bitch

Maku JaiiLiin-ya shit was tight, but very weak, too much boasting
too little punches, this is the only line that stood out

"Nod ya head d.j em sce, cuz my speach is the truth//
Till ya neck gets stretched like slaves in a sequel to roots"
i liked that, but all over a very weak verse, nice flow but its the punches that aint there4/10

d.j- ya rap was nice, but besides for adding his name to ya shit
their wernt any great personals, you killed him with meti's, wordplay
and punches, i thought wit a name like his you would of hammered more on it
i thought you did very wellll. 7/10

"C you mite say Im an Ill blacksmith the way I com wit sic bars
When dis verbal massacre occurs Maku JaiiLiin is left wit thick scars"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nameplay^^^^^weak

vote D.j em sce

uppin for votes..........ive upped this to much...maku you need to up this now

ok ok listen

Dj em sce: Maku Jaiiliin:
Flow 6/10 Flow 6/10
Wordplay 6/10 Wordplay 5/10
Punches 7/10 Punches 5/10
Creativity 8/10 Creativity 9/10


Do the Fuckin MAth
Stay in school

uppin 4 votes...........................................

good battle..
the break down
flow-DJ EMSCE-8
MAKU JALIN-8
VOCAB- DJ EMSCE-7
MAKU JAILIN-8
STRUCTURE-DJ EMSCE-7
MAKU JALIN- 6/ DIFFERENT FONTS
PUNCHLINES-DJ EMSCE-8
MAKU JAILIN- 7
VOTE GOES TO DJ EMSCE
$$

uppin for votes.....finally just one more.........

uppin again............................................. ......last time im goin to do this

uppin............................................. .

uppin for votes......................come on just need won mo

uppin....were are the votes...i just need one mo vote...this battle hasd been on for about three weeks

maku:...okay u had an interesting verse. u might not be a newb. but u need to work on structure and flow. u came with a lot of punchlines and thats good but they were not personal at all....i couldnt tell if this was written or freestyled. and no multies were involved. but your verse was good...jus need to work on your structure and dont have one line real short and the other one long ass hell.

damn my badd for the other post....

maku:...okay u had an interesting verse. u might not be a newb. but u need to work on structure and flow. u came with a lot of punchlines and thats good but they were not personal at all....i couldnt tell if this was written or freestyled. and no multies were involved. but your verse was good...jus need to work on your structure and dont have one line real short and the other one long ass hell

dj. okay u had a good verse too. vocab and wordplay were there. and u came with a lot of punches also. structure and flow was aight alot better then maku...u need to jus come up with more multies and you probably could of got every vote.

v/dj