DisasterPeice420 Vs. CounTREE Jay
 

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You Drop First Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gettin' on the mic, wanna spit at Jay,
Think you walked into mcdonald's cause you can have it your way.
That's alright though, CounTREE gon serve you wit a smile,
Then laugh when you choke on the mic like Em in 8 mile.
I guess in you upbringin', sometin' was missin',
And your parents didn't teach you a girls place is in the kitchen.
Jay love the ladies, but right now i ain't lookin',
So why don't you put the mic down and get my dinner cookin'.

Lmfao Playa' A'right!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

Checkkkkkkkkin In and Droppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Quit With The Rap, Your Crap This Is What I 'Recommend',/
You Were Never a Contender So Why Do You Still 'Pretend',/
We Will Never Be Friends, This Shit And Going To -End-,/
Cause Your Too Stupid To Understand and You Cant -Comprehend-,/
You Losin, Your Bruised And You Got Nothin To Prove,/
Even With Time Allens Help Bitch You Could Never Improve,/
Oh So My Rhymes Are Shit? Bitch Im The "Rhyming-Machine",/
I Put 10 In Your Face, Then You'll See Realy "Shit-On-Your-Screen",/
Your Shit When You 'Spit', Clown Ice-T Shut The Fuck Up,/
You Wanna 'Peice', You Couldnt Cut It, Ill Cut You Up! What?,/

Uppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Would Highly Appriciate Them-

D.P. Takes this one easy as hell Umm Vocab Flow Punches Personals Multis and Metas Everything Other Guy Elavate

Thanx Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol

:)

Otha guy "elevate"?- What's that mean fam?

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Shit, let me up 4 some mufukin' votes.
HOLLATCHABOY!!!!!!!!

Are you serious? She would have won if it wasnt for that last line, Homie. She messed up fa sho. Gots to give it to CJ cause he actually had punch lines.

I Respect The Honest Vote "Deuce" ..!! lol' But I Really Didn't Think I Needed To Come That Hard!! But Its What Ever' Its Cool' ... And Appriciate The Votes People

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yo ok well i though u both had good vocab and structure but Disasterpiece had better flow so over all Disasterpiece........
ma vote goes 2 Disasterpiece........

I VOTE 4 U... U VOTE 4 ME :thumbup:

Thanks Boi' Appriciate The Vote!!!!!!!!!

& Still Uppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!

-Appriciate The Honest Votes-

Uppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks

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Alright. I like Deuces 'honest' vote there. But anyways.

CounTREE, or however you spell it. You had a pretty nice verse. Your punches weren't all there. You pretty much just told her to go in the kitchen. That's the only good punch.oh yes and the weak mcdonalds punch. You had a nice flow, but need vocab and complexity. Not too bad. And Elevate means Get better, but in nicer terms.

DP, You brought it nice here. You had nice vocab and better punches. I could tell ya didn't come hard, which kind of dissapointed me. and Deuce mentioned the last line, it was wack ending with What?, but definantly didnt lose you the battle. I smell a crew d/r? But anyways. you complexity and wordplay took this from him.

V/ DP.

Thanx Tears Appriciate The Vote!!!!!!!!!!! :) ....


Uppppppppppppppppin 4 More Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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i vote for CJ..better punch lines yo..just yea better punch lines

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Uppin' 4 fuckin' votes.

Even if i lose, it was my first battle, and just let's get this shit done wit!

Drop Some Votes In Here Ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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One Of Ya'll Hit This Battle Up And "Drop-a-Vote" ... Thanks!!!!

Some One Close This Shit' And "Vote" ..... Up Upp Uppin!!

Can A Person Get Some Damn VOTES' Around Here!!' lol...


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vote for dp countree brought it though but wit comic punchz she brought it at u wit punchz just az hard and she had more personalz structure and multiz go to dp opened up wit a bunch of em

vote dp

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