yo its insane16 v.s CounTREE Jay bring it
 

yo here it is now or never playa

12-20 lines
u got 1 hr after check in 2 spit
no dr votes
u spit first
no recycle fresh shit only

yo
no crew votes
if i gotz to spit first

This is how it's goin' down
 

Yo, let me just call this nigga beach boy, as a reminder/
That he acts like a girl wit sand in his vagina/
I know when you in touch wit your feminine side, it's hard to be a g/
But that's no reason for you to get pre-menstral on me/
Right now I'm in search of another place that's round and spherical/
Cause i'm tired of the people in earth believin' in miracles/
Niggaz wit no talent str8 think they can be me/
And the name CJ, but you can have eyes, & still not see me/
Don't care if Insanse is the name, cause your style is plain,
Try out for the special Olympics, cause you can't make it in the rap game/
It's sad if to rap is what you desire, cause when the times expired/
A lyrical ass-whoopin' transpired, and Jay didn't even prespire/
I know when i'm comin' on the mic i put the fear of god into ya/
I lessons for life like you in church can i get an amen and a hallelujah/
Go ahead i know you gon try to say this kidd CounTREE ain't nice/
Is that why my words got you scratchin' your head like an outbreak of lice?/
I know why they call you insane cause you gotta be fucked up in the head/
You should know that comin' at niggaz from Da R.I.P. will get a nigga dead./

That's it, touch that shit nigga. R.I.P. & what nigga? :thefinger

This is what's up
 

Yo,
You bounced before i was finished, i posted within' your hour limit. Wheneva you get back on, you can spit, i don't care. just come wit it son, fosho. Cause i don't want no bitch victory, you feel me?

Nigga you lack all talent think u beatin me when u wahed up wit no talent, like u took deep bong hits from a poisonis inhalant/
U couldnt figure me out if u kept my house under total survalance, i knock niggas off and disrupt the balance/
when u come at insane u betta come wit betta game leave u pickin at ur brain like "damn nigga y am i in this rap game?"/
i would spit witout an arm and use my dick 2 hold the mic, yea thats right there some special olimpics shyt for u hope u can sleep iight tonight/
and how long did ur battle take u... prolly an hour i spit in liek 10 minutes and still dis nigga gets devoured/
they call me insane cuz i tap into ur brain no what ur thinkin before u can even figure ur name/
cause destruction from the inside ur breakin down crackin up becomin hard for u to maintain, weight in this rap game/
puttin niggas 2 shame is what i do in this game so as im closin this out try to remember insane is the name/
u a pussy the way u pack a bullet proof vest/
u think it matters firin full clips at ur chest/
my shyts and normal packin holows break vests and enter chests/
u a fukin rookie when this nigga insane is a vet/
heres there thirtenth line im about to tell ya for the thirtenth time this battle is mine thats why i shine for all of time BITCH!!/

iight i spit now lets see who wins this peace playa............................................. .......

uppin 4 some votes............................................. ................................................

TREE Jay Got This Shit! On Lock

He Had The Better Flow, Harder Punches, Good Stucture, Alright Wordplay

I Dont' Know.. lol I Kind Of Got Lost In Your Verse!!!!!!! ' ...

Vote: TREE JAY!!!!!!!!

vote tree jay man that shit was hott punches was off da rip an verse was just on another level than insane no contest

vote tree jay man that shit was hott punches was off da rip an verse was just on another level than insane no contest. Qouted from (Mic-Wrecker)


Nuff Said!

East Miles fa life Detroit whatup!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good look
 

Yo, thanx on the love, but y'all gotta vote at the top too, or it don't count

Aight Check It...

Countree JAy: 6/10
You Had Sum NiCe Punches But You Need To Work On Dem Mulits and Metaphors. Good Drop Though, Elevate Pimpin.

Insane16: 4/10
Hmm...You Had The Right Ideas but You Need To Get Dem Mulits, Word Usuage, Vocab, and Metaphors Down. Elevate My Man.

Vote-Countree Jay

~R~

iight lets end dis uppin for the 2nd time.............................................. ..................

yo mayne ok battle Insane liked ya first line ya just kinda left me at the middle and end TREE JAY nice punches and shyt had a few multiys almost gave up on u wif da first line but u wuz good herer

VOTE=CounTREE JAY

tryin' to get this shit done wit, someone needs to come and vote on this shit, so i can keep shit goin'

Uppin' for more votes to close this damn shit out. Come on and let us cop some love niggaz.

Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Uppin' 4 votes niggaz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

treejay one fosho insane got his shit rocked hes done

yo cj lines were good and his flow wuz iight i love the first line you keep spitin hard and u makin it that was a good battle

I've seen better from C Jay but still he won this with some decent punches but mostly on flow. Insane your first bar just told me that you can't flow.. and you can't. That shit was too long to have no worldplay/multi action, your punch wasn't even that strong so it's just like a long stretched out bar that fucks up your structure. Gotta elevate the technique.. then get the punches rolling.

Vote: CJ

hit up my battles..

Yo CJ takes this shit easy.....
his punches where hot throughout....
Hard hittin personals...
So basically Cj Takes This One.....

Vote :CJ

And the name CJ, but you can have eyes, & still not see me....i really liked that line

countree had better structure, better flow, a few multies, kept punches comin(i liked the openin line a lot) and overall just had a much better verse. Insane - I got confused readin your shit, your bars were way too long, the only way that could possibly sound good is if you had the ability to rap like twista. Besides that, i didn't feel your punches were that strong, as long as your rhymes were.. they had no multies...jay gets this

uppin for some votes lets just end this shyt man............................................... ............

Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

vote jay, aiight battle but jay ripped it..nice punches and an overall better verse. both woz aiight but like other ppl i kinda got lost in insanes verse
props 2 both of ya thought
word up