young kidd vs lilrenegade89
 

young kidd checkin in.

battle rules: 1 verse each.lilrenegade89 goes first.

renegade you have to check in and spit by 4:30 pm central time.

i'm loggin off.so spit and then i'll spit when ever i log on again.

ok sorry my computer at home was occupied checkin in

Make a sacrifice to the antichrist or pay the price and lose your life.
im twice as slice as young kid trippin on acid/
i kill you with my ginsue/
your a blood dressed in blue/
cause your afraid of your own crew/
look at mommey cradlein you/
I gotta be fatal to you/
To be the best you gotta be blessed with this gift/
If you getta record i know you gotta lift.
But im bout to push you off this cliff.
im the grim reaper/
I put u in the sleeper/
your so fat im diggin the whole 6 feet deaper/

I read your line, and there is only one Grim Reaper so watch your mouth

yo dat flow hot but now it's my turn

you say i'm blood
but actually i'm GD,
you on da other hand
are a rappa dats off beat./
see i rep da R.I.P. and da folks nation to da fullest
but da only thing you'll be repin
is a body full of bullets./
but i've got no beef wit chu
your jus my victim on rb,
but your fatal mistake
was thinkin dat you could see me./
i'm new to rappin ta online
but i've been battlin for 7 years,
so your one of many mcs dat i bring ta tears./
your my first victim
but will a peer will be second,
she'll be da next mc dat i start reckin./
but why you diggin my grave
i'm not dyin for a long time,
but you mutha f**ka have till da end of dis line./

who won dis battle yall?
but no matter who wins or loses i had fun lilrenegade89 :thumbup:

yo we need votes.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin

uppin

i think renegade won...not cause im hatin just thought his punchlines were a lil harder.....nice spit by both yall tho...

AY YO RENEGADE CHECK OUT ME VS YOUNG KIDD.....VOte on it....pce

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good battle fellaz..hard decision ya heard me
i think lil rene won becuz of his multies..that's tha only reason y
cuz ya'll both spit very well VOTE:LILRENEGADE

GO VOTE NI99AZ
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117704
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and i don't have the link for it but i need you to vote on YoungStar* vs. J-Mob, its a good battle its 3-3 when i'm typin this

vote please uppin

yo i'm kinda new to dis battlin on line shit,so can some one tell me what multies are?

Yo kid multies are multiple ryhmes in one line, its fully explained in tutorials, but I disagree wit the other kats in here I think young kidd won, holla back

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117947

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yea i feel young kidd took this wit sum punches n better flow............return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117820

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Thought that young won it. Renegade had better mulits, but it was only 1, and it was in the first line. Vocab was about even. Flow goes to Young, and i agree wit him on this line, and it was hott:
you say i'm blood
but actually i'm GD,
you on da other hand
are a rappa dats off beat

Otha nigga was offbeat just to get the multi off, but i think young took it, That's an HONEST vote too. But it was still a pretty good battle.

both mcees where str8 in this battle but u know like every battle one person gotta lose, so here it is

lilrenegade89: u wuz good but i think both mcees could have came wit better punchlines but u had one that i liked,"your so fat im diggin the whole 6 feet deaper" that wuz str8

young kidd: i know u new and the new have to ajust to wut they do so i have some advice cuz i'm kinda new to, u should work on yo punchline game and bring it to yo opponents cuz u didn't have none that really caught my eye

so wit that bein said my vote goes to lilrenegade89

vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117235

you while young kidd suckin i guess i do his uppin

holy shit it isn't done fuck uppin

uppin

uppin

Yo definately Renegade! Mad punches mad flow! Shit Holla at ya boy! I'm impressed!

thanks 4 the vote

can some one please vote and get this shit over with so i can start a new battle

please vote ill return the favor!

yo can u please get me some more votes or him so that way i can end this battle

uppin yo please some one vote or some thing

i think young kid won this battle cause of waaaayyy better style rhymes openers closing....pretty much everything.anyone of yall willing to battle me? if so email me back.i aint very good so ill try to be at your guys' level.please i really wanna battle.

uppin
that was a wack vote ur probally a dr but o well i know im better at audio ne how

yo im uppin

lilrenegade89 good verse can use some elevation in your structure,other then that you did pretty good.

my fav line:
"im the grim reaper/
I put u in the sleeper/
your so fat im diggin the whole 6 feet deaper/"
it wasnt hott but it was the only line i liked.

young kidd elevate please your structure was fucked and your punches wernt hitting hard at all use your word play alittle but better PM me if you need help with any thing..

one sided battle y'all

V/lilrenegade89

come on 1 more vote i need it please help me out

im the grim reaper/
I put u in the sleeper/
your so fat im diggin the whole 6 feet deaper/

nice finshers, and personal.

this has to go to lilren

young ya rhymes were immature, elavate with beter vocab 2