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DisasterPeice420 Vs. GUNFAMGENERAL254
Set Up The Rules!!
& You Spit First Playa!!!!!!!!! -Would Highly Appriciate It- lol |
Naw Nigga U Spit 1st And 10 Lines Minimum No Biting Or Crrew Votes
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I'll Spit Tonight Cuz I G2g
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Alright Playa' ..
First Off: Get Your Facts Straight Playa Im A "Female" Best Recognize The Siggy!! I Guess I'll Drop First!!!! ... |
Listen Up Playa, I Havent Even Read Your Fuckin 'Bullshit-A$$-Rhymes',/
I Figured "What The Fuck?" .. Why Should I 'Waste-My-Time?',/ I Know You Spit It 'Weak', Like A Granny A$$ Antique,/ Sore Loser Mother-Fucker Who Could Accept Defeat,/ Your Fhymes Are Fuckin Whack GUNFIRE Please Sit Back,/ Watch My Rhymes Stack, And How I Build Up My Attack,/ Your Momma Calls Are Gettin Old, The Jokes Gone Its 'Been-Sold',/ Hip-Hop Has Moved On I Can See That You 'Werent-Told',/ You Spit Rediculous, You'll Be In A Predicament,/ Give Up Rap Gay Boy, No One Feels Ur Shit,/ Man You Make Me Laugh, You Help Me 'Pass-The-Time',/ You A Rapper?, Nah Faggot You A 'Comedian-In-Denial',/ Where Are Your Punchlines? You Dont Know How To Free,/ Only Real Emcees Can Compete With Me You See?,/ Oh Well It Was Fun, I Can Hit Where It Hurt,/ The Doctor Slapped Your Mother On The Day Of Birth,/ Playa I Could Care Less, Who Spits First, Nigga Please Just Bow Down and Fold,/ Don't Preach Something That You Have Not Been Told,/ |
Spit When'Eva Playa!
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As Soon As Possible Though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol' ......!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Iight Here We Go Again/
Your Rhymes Are Garbage/ Me Writn 4 U Is The Only Way U Could Win/ U Already Kno That My Flow Is Sick/ And I Dont Kno Y I'm Battlin A Chic Wit A Dick/ I'm Schoolin U In This Rappin/ So Sit Bac And Let Me Teach This Lesson/ You Prolly Burnin Wit A Terrible Yeast Infection/ You Beatin Me Yeah Right U Wish/ I Kno U Stank Cuz Online I Smell Fish/ U Cant Rap So U Might As Well Stop/ I Would Call U A B*tch But That Would Be Givin U Too Much Props/ And U Betta Kno Lrycally I'm A Beast/ Put The Gage To Yo Bac Then U Can Say U Felt A (disasterpiece)/ Matter Of A Fact U Prolly A Man/ Nvm Cuz U Be Fingerin Yo Self So Much/ Yo Pussy Got A Restrainin Order On Yo Hand/ The Moral Of This Story Is Wash Yo Ass Everyday/ Cuz Between Yo Legs Holds More Fish Than The Chesapeekbay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Iight Uppin 4 Votes
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Nice Verse Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Upppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!
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Uppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppppin 4 Votes
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disaster piece: okay ya verse was aight but i seen better from u. you were lacking in punchlines, but vocab was aight and the structure was okay. but it was a good verse
gunfam: i thought u were goin to take it after i read disaster's verse. but your punchline werent hittin, u lacked vocab, but ur structure was good. elevate with stronger punchlines and u should be good. v/disaster p |
Vote: GUNFAMGENERAL254
ReasoN:This Was A Very Hard Choice, And When I Mean Hard Im Talkin Like Micheal Jackson's Dick In A Day Care, I Feel Gun Had Better Punches, See Disaster Flow Fuck'd His Punches Up.. For Example: Man You Make Me Laugh, You Help Me 'Pass-The-Time',/ You A Rapper?, Nah Faggot You A 'Comedian-In-Denial',/ The UnderLined Words Dont Rhyme Wit Eachother And Same Wit Everyother Bar..Then On This Other Side Gun's Flowed Real Well.. D's Vocab Was Stronger Than Guns, And He Also Had Better Structure, But In The End I Feel Gun Won... |
Disasterpiece was you taking this battle seriously? C'mon gurl you have dropped shit way better than that. Disaster had the vocab on lock. But Gun had the punches and flow a little better, I didn't want this to be my vote but had to be honest so I give it to
Vote:GunFam |
vote gun he hit just a lil harder
dp what happened i no ur alot better than that both could work on structure a lil vocab and personals 2 |
(Laugh My A$$ Off) ' .. DAMN!!!! WTF' ... Alright All My Shit Can't Be Good' You Know But I Thought This Shit Was A Bit Better Then My Last 2Battles' But I Guess Not!!' ...
!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ahhh Let Me Evelate |
Yo, I tought it was a close battle, i wasn't really feelin' gun flow that much though. D Peice killed me wit this shit Man You Make Me Laugh, You Help Me 'Pass-The-Time',/
You A Rapper?, Nah Faggot You A 'Comedian-In-Denial',/. I don't even care if it don't rhyme all that nice. This nigga gun fam's first three lines had me madd confused to how they fit together too. But, I think she came harder, and smacked a lil' more, her flow was better, and punches, and I give it to her. |
Awwwwww :) Appriciate The Vote!!!!!! .... It Was Highly Needed.. Even Though I May Loose This Battle!
Upppppppppin 4 More Votes!!!!!!!!!!!! People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
I liked both of your verses. But some of DP's lines didn't flow all that well. I've seen some of her stuff and it is pretty hot, but this wasn't one of the hottest. Some shit didn't rhyme. As for Gun, liked your flo and vocab. So u got my vote by a little. Keep droppin', both of you. PEACE
Also, return the favor. It's my battle with Stabbolical in my sig. |
close battle but it came to first 3 lines of Gunfam's verse not connectin in anyway
that wuz the only reason DP won..becuz her verse wuz weak comparably if gunfam's first 3 lines wurr a mediocre opener he wudda had the vote cuz their punches wurr evenly matched gunfam tole me to vote so i did..truth told and here iz the painful part... VOTE:DISASTERP |
Gun had pretty decent flow ,aight vocab and better punches
Disasterp you surprised me i thought ud come out stronger than that your punchlines need work but i like yer flow still and i know ur talented from ur other verses ive read still im gonna have to say v/GunFam |
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