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PoLiFicK 04-01-04 04:58 PM

DisasterPeice420 vs choppa--city
 
10-15 linez
spit due by 2marr

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 05:06 PM

Spit Due By TODAY? You Cool...!??????????????????????????

PoLiFicK 04-01-04 05:14 PM

check in

choppa-city yea uhhh im fitting 2 handle dis thing no wat im talking bout...do it ohhhh


bitch choppa a killu.... and burry u in da woods.....only reason u wanna battle... cuz last night my nutz was good.....smack yo ass,slap yo ass bitch u aient ready.....she want revenge cuz last night i pissed on her like r.kelly.......yo rhymes is a disater..from my piece a mind.....can u log out faster....and sign da fuck offline....give away da horse hair back u trick....have my money ready u hoe b4 i spank u bitch.....cant fuck wit this....yo spits make me laugh.....like where this bitch come from...please throw her spits in da trash.....delete yo username...and dont rechange.....she put 420 at the end like its a AOL screenname.....retoat this bitch....deep throat this chick....she a dick sucker i kno u kno this trick......i can come harder put da end on u.....i seen more breast on a chicken then i seen on u......kill yo ass throw yo rhymes in a water...how da hell they got me battling shaqulie oneal's daughter....im da champion how u loving it now.....break yo ass apart like 3lw and destinychild....bitttchhh

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 05:23 PM

What The Fuck Is Up With The "Horse Hair" .. lol.. Ok Checkkkkkkin in

& Droppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 05:39 PM

I See You Still Carrying The MandM Want To Be 'Imprint',/
What Do U Use To Suck His Dick A Soap Or A Special Home Made 'Lubricant',/
You Don't Want Me To Get Sinnicale At The Same Time Physical,/
Because I'll Kill You With My Approuach My Rhymes Are Lyrical,/
Patented And Also Historical,/
I'm In A Crew Of My Fans (Class Sic) So Much So That I'm CateGorical,/
Your In A League Of Your Own, Ill Tell You Why,/
Rappers At Your Level Are Dead Long Ago They Died,/
Give Up While You're Ahead, And Stop Giving Head,/
Heavent Your Mother Told You Your Too Young To Be Fooling Around In Bed,/
The 'Faggot' Screamed My Name, Told Me I Got Game,/
Aint It A Shame, I Can't Pass It On To You And Say The Same,/
Yeah Closing Time It Was Fun While It Lasted,/
My Rhymes Solid Stell Your Shit All Made Of Plastic,/

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 05:40 PM

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuupin 4 Votessssssssssssssss People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PoLiFicK 04-01-04 05:50 PM

uppin 4 votes .....................................

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 06:25 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votessssssssssssssssssssssss Ya'll!!!!!!!

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-01-04 07:09 PM

Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-02-04 01:41 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votessssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PoLiFicK 04-02-04 05:34 PM

^^^^^^ uppin 4 votes...............................

Young Kidd 04-02-04 05:50 PM

DISASTER you took him gurl,your flows were tight.i liked your intro your punch lines and your ending.

choppa you waz hot to da i didn't pick you is cuz all that cursin kinda fucked up ya flow you know.

anyways hit up dis battle and vote:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117833

or if dat doesn't work it's young kidd vs lilrenegade89 come people i need votes.

Triple_N 04-02-04 05:56 PM

Yo choppa only had one solid punch in his whole shit, Disaster had him not only wit the punches but vocab and flow too.
Vote: Disaster

G Deuce 04-02-04 06:00 PM

Close battle

DisasterPiece - gots to give it to you gurl. It was hot. It was real laid back, and I'm guessing thats your style, which is cool. But your punchlines werent that good.

Choppa - Your cussing almost got the best of you. But your punchlines were hitting harder than Michael Jackson without lotion. You feel me.

v - Choppa
it was close
still give be ups to D, her shit was tight

Tenken 04-02-04 07:42 PM

aight check it....
this isnt a crew vote or a hate vote this is my honest opinion

Disaster-
flow-6/10
wordplay-5/10
punches-5/10
creativity-6/10
overall-22/40

choppa-
flow-5/10
wordplay-7/10
punches-6/10
creativity-6/10
overall-24/40

thats what i think i dont think i need to add comments
oh and btw choppa...i know you got skill but go against people closer to ur level you got kinda lucky this time wit all the cussin

vote-choppa

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-03-04 12:04 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!'

Thanx For Voting Ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

L.I. 04-03-04 01:09 PM

NICE BATTLE
THE BREAKDOWN

Opener - disaster because hers was more complex n harder than choppas
Flow - choppa's flow was off the hook
Punches - disaster had sum hot punches n hers hit harder
Vocab - disaster had hot vocab and she used it perfectly
Structure - disasters structure was def. better than choppa's
Personals - hardly any personals but choppa had the only ones
Sustainment - disaster kept me readin n hers was at a steady level
Multi's - disaster had the multi's n they were hot
Closer - i felt choppas closer but u shoulda jus had destinychild cuz it sounded stretched wit 3lw but i liked it
Enjoyment - disaster's verse was overall better n she had me into it n i liked it betta than choppas
v/ disaster
return the favor in my battle wit big maze.........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117820

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-03-04 01:30 PM

Daps Thanks L.I. Appriciate The Honest Vote!!!!!

Stilllllllllll Uppin On This SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-03-04 05:07 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votessssssssssssssssssssssssssss

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-03-04 05:37 PM

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votesssssssssssssssssss

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-03-04 06:18 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votesssssssssssssssssssssssssss

PoLiFicK 04-03-04 08:07 PM

^^^^^^^^ uppin 4 votes................................

K33p It Th0r0 04-03-04 08:38 PM

Vote-Choppa City

Punches-Choppa
Wordplay-Choppa
Flow-Tie
Mulis-Tie

Crossword 04-04-04 11:50 AM

-wipes tears from eyes and stops laughing- Well then. I don't understand where these votes came for. But DP took this, Her verse was just all around better. I didn't feel any hard punches from choppa. The structure was fucked up, so it was hard to read. The periods made the flow choppy as fuck. And i didn't see too much creativity. But anyways. DP had harder punches, better structure, flow, creativity. Don't you love it DP, that G:Deuce has voted against you in all of your battles :).

Crossword 04-04-04 11:52 AM

Oh and keep it th0r0's is unexplained.

threatz 04-04-04 11:59 AM

choppa went way da hell harder..

i'm tryna finger out how you gonna be from tha ATL
n into all dah NAS bullshyt, n all dah lyrical non-sense

keep it dirty- 1

Krackmittens 04-04-04 12:51 PM

distater you came with some nice shit but you kinda lost me a lil bit it was hit and miss but overall it was ok no punches that stuck out vocab was good structure decent
5/10

choppa just like everyone else that cussing was cutting it real close your structure was ok some multis and vocab was ok punches were alot harder i like the AOL screenname line i could have twisted the fuck out of that and made some sick shit
overall battle was ok you guys could do alot better but keep dropping shit
choppa6/10
disater5/10
v-choppa

quickpunch 04-04-04 01:27 PM

ight speakin honestly cause dont want no beef

both kats came harder....choppa like said u did cuss alot which threw me off....its ight 2 cuss but not as much makes the flow not so hott....overall id say ur punchlines were hott could have been a lil more creative....and the whole suckin dick thing every1 uses that line...its old

Disater...just like ur name u have potential 2 be a disater...meanin u good
same for u try not 2 use he sucks ur dick and mama jokes shit like that anymore...ur punches i liked alot..especially about the soap lubricant thing

no hating vote goes 2 disater....just better punches


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