Accomplishment V.S. K.o.
 

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Accomplished aint acocomplished shit, the nerve of this dude/
10-8 record? You gotta be the herb of your crew
Michigan cat now next he'll be from Detroit/
I'm gettin it now, why this fag perfers to be with the boys/
But Smooth stay nice I'll write life in my lines/
You garbarge no reason for you to fight for your pride/
This kid can't spit if lame was more words hed be the acronym/
Battlin with adjective and lyrical javelins tills he walks away furious cause his boy are laughin at him/
What thought I only kept one in the clip/
I keep styles reserved trash the last one that I spit/
And this is for your kid's kid's to really get/
Trust it'll be 10 more years for u to understand if I really spit/

Corrections
The very first Accomplished(word) should be Accomplishment

Killen I'ma bring dis herb-to-his-fame, outcome of dis battle are da words in his name...
I'm workin-his-game, cuz each "letter" i'm typen is just a "Key"-to-my-flame.../

Steppin an settin da bill, like porky this bitch got murd..murde...murde..i mean KILLED...
Next i get ill cuz my verses contain some excellent skill.../

I kill dis bitch da worst-way he jacks off in his thesaurses to say he gets word-play...
I merk gays and rap da shit outya ass like its ya birthday.../

Diss my crew we leave ya in plastic bags, blastin fags, fuck ya lil 9 we all packin 4-5's and mags...
we like to cutcha and leave a mess of who dress in drags,.../

non-stoppin leave ya body rocked cuz my ten lines is i'll like you bar-hoppin...
finisher is murderin glock-lockin shott ya in ya face gotya brain matter drip-droppin.../

YO dats it ten lines getcha votes in hurr people

VOTES VOTES VOTES .... I need some Kool-aid

Accomplishment Took This Battles Fairly Easy He Had Better Flow, Structure, Punches, and Vocab!!!!

K.O. - You Need Some More Practice!!!!!!!!! Wasnt Really Feeling Your Shit!!

Vote: Accomplishment

yo thanx uppinf or votes yo

aight the breakdown........

Opener - Accomplishment...the words in your name shit was hot
Flow - none...didnt feel neither of ya flow
Punches - Accomplishment....the proky line was hot n ur otha punches hit way harder than k.o.'s
Personels - neitha of ya had any or decent personels
Multi's - k.o. had the better multi's so he got that category
Closer - Accomplishment had the better closer just because it rhymed but it was hot neways
Sustainment - Accomplishment kept the pace up the whole time so he got this
Enjoyment - Accomplishment had the overall better verse n came way harder n i liked his betta

ADVICE....

Accomplishment work on not stretchin ya lines (only a couple were stretched), you had nice structure,punches, n u had the sustainment. work on the flow, it woulda flowed but u had sum stretched lines. otha than that if u keep gettin betta u could be 1 of the top heads on here.

K.o. - id say u shouldnt battle a cat of his level of skill. u had a nice verse overall. work on not stretchin ya lines n that will help ya flow. your verse started off hot n afta 4 lines it jus fell of the cliff. u need the sustainment to get that categort n enjoyment. ya structure is straight. deliver harder punches n that will get u wins. ur llast 4 lines jus clinched a loss for ya so jus work on sustainment. aight man elevate n ull get betta. no hating jus givin advice. goodluck

VOTE - Accomplishment

return the favor please........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117844

thanx yo uppin you know we be poppin dem thangs haha

yes could not agree more with everyone here accomplishment you definitely deserve my vote on this one 1 i'm not going to give you much advise due to the fact that i feel that i am not much better than you peace

aight thanx for da votes stilll uppin yo

yo upppppppppn

uppppppppppin folks i'll return da favor

YO two more votes ya'll comeon

accomplishment getz my vote he had solid punchz and good structure and k.o. fucked at like he waz nervous or suntin

yeh i gotta give this to accomp - his flow was good - his structure and punches were hot- he was in a different class to K.O had better vocab

K.O you had the fundamentals - you jus need to be more personal and improve vocab

vote - accomplishment