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guyver4mk check in first...spit first if ur feeling confident othawise i'll go first
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Not one for confidence, not one for patience either. So I'll so spit first. |
I take this rhyme one stage at a time/
Spit lyrics like grime that fuck with ya mind/ Take one look at you an take out my 9/ Blast holes in ya shirt have ya land on the dirt/ Lyrically you'sa flirt, go to cook-outs in skirts/ Givin rim-jobs that hurt, to ya cousin kurt/ I spit lyrics to prophecise the end of ya days/ Make way for the slayer in you practical gay/ To beat you ain't no competition at all/ You like a midget playin basketball, it won't work at all/ I spit to enthrall the over confident nigga with a piece/ Can't fight with his mind so he always got beef/ Nigga ya shit is see-through, like all'a ya teeth/ When I kick 'em out wiv my studs an fill ya with grief/ Break ya legs an then ya arms, an leave ya on a beach thats calm/ Wait for high tide ta see ya body ride out to sea/ And slowly drown ya, in my preverbial dream/ |
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in ur second line u say u i spit lyrics like grime
u a retard mk that doesn't even work den u later u spit crap about a my a cousin called kurt please tell me ur joking...that can't be a lyrical assault u called me a midget playing b-ball...you call that an insult it's confusing/ this wigga be using/ random words, and still think i'm losing u need to rethink your "punches" u be using cause your lyrics are crap and have no effect but then again what can you expect from a man who took advice from micheal jackson after a heated round of gang bang action cause this pathetic shit was ment to b freestyle came from a man who was abused as a child using a signature This ain't a game it's a way of life well let me end your game while u meet my knife and do rapbattles a favour...please ur mum's impregnater-s none of them wanted u, u were a mistake and no one thought that the condom would brake |
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Im voting "More L" for better punches, better lines, better rymes etc. It was just all over alot better, I'm not creeping or no shit, but "guyver4mk" was ok... (np rhyme intended) but his punches just didnt take as much effect, wheras MoreL's were alot funnier and I dunno, despite the fact MoreL had the advantage I think he would have won anyways, it seems he just has a better way with words... Good Spitting! |
He Fed half his verse off mine. If u call that a fair victory then everyone please vote for him. At least mine was my own.
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I go with guyver on this one. More L's has no rhyme or flow at all and even though the second half is pretty good the first half just fucks it up, imo. Some good punches in there, but mostly weak stuff. guy's stuff has kinda a poetic flow, which is good and equally good punches, so I give it to guy for the superior flow/rhymes and for having to go first and not feed all his lines.
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more l was better
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good battle
Opener:guyver4mk closer:More L punches:More L personal:guyver4mk vocab:More L flow:guyver4mk style:guyver4mk |
I take this rhyme one stage at a time/
Spit lyrics like grime that fuck with ya mind/ Take one look at you an take out my 9/ This is an ok punch Blast holes in ya shirt have ya land on the dirt/ Lyrically you'sa flirt, go to cook-outs in skirts/ Givin rim-jobs that hurt, to ya cousin kurt/ It was good till you got to his cousin kurt I spit lyrics to prophecise the end of ya days/ Make way for the slayer in you practical gay/ Not really a punch To beat you ain't no competition at all/ You like a midget playin basketball, it won't work at all/ I liked this one I spit to enthrall the over confident nigga with a piece/ Can't fight with his mind so he always got beef/ Eh, not much to say Nigga ya shit is see-through, like all'a ya teeth/ When I kick 'em out wiv my studs an fill ya with grief/ THis is aiight for a punch Break ya legs an then ya arms, an leave ya on a beach thats calm/ Wait for high tide ta see ya body ride out to sea/ And slowly drown ya, in my preverbial dream/ Mediocre closing in ur second line u say u i spit lyrics like grime Why is this in here? u a retard mk that doesn't even work den u later u spit crap about a my a cousin called kurt Choppy as fuck and no point please tell me ur joking...that can't be a lyrical assault u called me a midget playing b-ball...you call that an insult Still watin for tha punch it's confusing/ this wigga be using/ random words, and still think i'm losing u need to rethink your "punches" u be using FINALLY!!! a punch, but it was weak cause your lyrics are crap and have no effect but then again what can you expect Weak-assed punch from a man who took advice from micheal jackson after a heated round of gang bang action Jacko is overplayed man, its an aiight punch tho cause this pathetic shit was ment to b freestyle came from a man who was abused as a child riiiiight using a signature This ain't a game it's a way of life well let me end your game while u meet my knife Good punch and do rapbattles a favour...please ur mum's impregnater-s I dont think thats a word.... none of them wanted u, u were a mistake and no one thought that the condom would brake Ok closer Aiight for spittin second, More L did a horrible job. It got better towards the end, and all you did was feed, AND BADLY AT THAT!! More L-4/10 guyver4mk-7/10 |
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guyver4mk nice verse. you overpowered this guy. nice punches and structure. for a newbe that was a nice flow. nice punches, try to put better mult's in your verses next time. nice battle cuz, keep it up.return the fava
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guyver i felt won this battle
structure:guy flow:guy personals:l overall:guyver can you guys return the fava vote on the battles on my sig and i'll return the fava |
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Flow 7/10 Rhymes 7/10 Structure 5/10 Punches 7/10 Humor 7/10 more Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 6/10 Humor 5/10 v/ guy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
more l had better punches had a better opener and finish so im uppin 4 more L peace out !!!
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blah! have to go with Guyver on this better rhymes in there
better punches, flow, vocab well everything in Guyver's drop was much better than More L did.................................. do a honest vote on my shit the link's in the signature |
heres tha break down
punches:guyver flow:both structure:both wordplay;none personals:guyver overall:guyver can you guys return tha fava and finish the battles on my sig thanks |
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