Triple_n vs Afterword
 

Option#1: Afterword
Option#2: Triple_N

Ahight son you drop first
Rules
10-20 line spits
no d/r votes
Crew votes allowed
drop within 45 minutes

yo, son where are you at the battle is here and waiting drop something already, Damn!

Do you plan to drop anything anytime soon or what cause I got better things to do

stop wolfin if u could c i wasnt online
im at work on da grind, i tear u chumps up in my spare time
checkin in
give me less than 10 min

Less than 10 mins huh you pushing fifteen and still and ain't dropped shit

my pen, will penetrate yo head, and leave yo mind numb and blisterin
I enter deadly as a machete, as i cut you in three pieces, so now u actually tripplin/(triple NNN)
I am meant to win, yur just here for entertainment,
like the WWE, and Triple H, because i know thats where u got ur name! (HHH=NNN)
so ima lyrically lazerate yur brain, or with a chair smash yur face-in
just face-it, im makin a tripple play at homeplate kid
so u are out, even if you slide face first,
b/c u boostin ryhmes more than Nextel's chirps
so go dueche yur rhymes b/c their dirt and wen all know
yur rhymes are "Hot(stolen) -dog" like you are polish 4 sho
so u better split, quick like we bowlin
and i hope u are learnin, ya lesson fag
or end up broken up like pretzels, in a stretcher bag
and ima keep writin this bomb shyt b/c thats all i smoke
and we Need No Nonsense(NNN), so like a prom bicth, you choke!

peace

come wit it big talker
my shyt aint prewritten, like some?

look how the tables have turned:
"Less than 10 mins huh you pushing fifteen and still and ain't dropped shit"

stop studying my shit, it aint gonna work
we dont beleive u, u need more people!
post up like shaq
or in yo case, sabonis or somethin
peace

"yo, son where are you at the battle is here and waiting drop something already, Damn!"
"Do you plan to drop anything anytime soon or what cause I got better things to do"
-NNN

u clown ass contridiction!

I'm on the uprise, you a never was...If you lived in a bees nest
You still couldn't get a "buzz"/
Cuz you luv spittin that hard shit, u get plugged quik/
Only time u hard is when u sucking your pop's dick/
Trick bitch/I find you at CVS on any given day/
On aisle 7 holdin' down the title of "Bengay"/
You've rocked more cocks then there are bonds & stocks/
An dropped some much bullshit I had to pull up my socks/
Cuz I'm a one man army, this bitch nigga's gettin' doubled-teamed/
You couldn't spit a strait line if you was on a "balance bleam"/
Get ya mind right, get ya ryhmes tight, cuz u come across as a dummy/
I give ya a swift kick to the head and leave it more lopsided than "gumby's"/
C'mon son your shit cornier than erkul, your ryhmes are on constant rewind...
They just keep going in "crop circles"/
Fuck a afterword your name's afterthought, on camera you was caught...
Your ryhmes are not oriniginal but store bought/
This was just a taste, keep wit da pace, I see you like Michael Jackson...
now you gon' file a case, cuz I left tread marks where I moonwalked on ya face/
I mean its sad, cuz whatever you had my ryhmes just disfigured/
Its too bad, cuz you been forgotten before you could be remembered/


Hold that!!!!^^^^^^^^

Yo That Was A Nyce Battle But I Gotta Give This One To 3n Cuz His Shit Was More Personal He Came Harder But It Was A Good Battle

You sitting talkin bout my contradictions what about your lies you were online the whole time I was saying that shit cuz i was staring at who's on line and you were viewing this thread for like an hour behand, bullshitter!!

that vote was b.s. like yo flow
and y the phuck would i view the post for an hour, wen i flowed first you dunce
but i aint madd over no internet bullshyt
i dont really give a phuck whos wins, it dont inhance, or depleat my flow none
u the one that needs the votes and comments you bum ass wanna be cannibus
but no hard feelings though, im just here to rap, cali
peace

Ok I don't what you on, I need the votes and comments, nigga have you looked at your record, your 0-6. I'm the bum you lost six times in a row, oh my bad I mean seven. But no hard feelings though.....lmao

c the fact that u brought that up prooves my point already u simple ass nigga.
u live off yur i-net rep, and reccord, i do this for kicks.( i rap 4 the dough, u can have the net.)
my record dont change, the fact that i spit flames( and u know-it)
i could loose this battle, go (0-7), and still have mo flow than u, chump
now get yur last rebuttle out, b/c im done clownin with u

some people juss get on dah computer and then turn off the internet but if you dont log off den ur name is still at the bottom but i gotta give this vote to tripple N cuz his flow was coo and his punches were koo as well as personals but tite battle both ya come through koo

keep da votes commin
with some god comments
uppin

Looking for some more votes come on y'all^^^^^^^^^^^^

Yea Both Verses Were Nice'

But Triple_N Got This Shit!!! He Had A Nice Flow, Better & Harder Punches, Good Structure, Alright Personals' ... And Alright Vocab... Wordplay Was A Bit Effortless!!!..

Afterword Ive Seen Better From You!!!!!

Vote: Triple_N

Votes needed, votes needed, votes needed...................

Votes y'all post some votes so this can be closed out already

yo let me hit this up

flow- afterword
punches-triple.n
struture-afterword
vocab-3n
opener-afterword
-closer-3n

it was pretty even, so it was an awsome battle, but i think that afterword kinda fell off at the end, just keep at it i no ur a good emcee, so just keep spittin :thumbup:

yo gud lookin on the feedback
lets gets some votes
uppin

Come on y'all just won more vote y'all, votes needed^^^^^^^

uppin
so i can be the first to overcum a 4-0 defeceit

uppin
so i can be the first to overcum a 4-0 defeceit

UUUPPPPIIIINNNN for votes come on y'all I need to close this out

yo i give my vote to tripple N he had way harder punches and a better fow that i could understand afterword youe shit was koo but you juss need to elevate

Yo I Give This One To Triple N Cuz His Punches Hit Harder And After Wood He Just More Punches Than U And U Were Just Rappin In General You Were Good But He Was Better Vote Goes To Triple N

yo...i think tripple n got u on this one....my vote goes to him for better punchlines, better vocab and flow....keep wit it afterword....