C_R_E_A_M Vs CounTREE JAY
 

8 Barz
first to 5 votes wins
3-0 KO
u spit first
dead line is tonite at 1:00am

aight
 

Fam's sig says death is not a choice, it just happens,/
That's the future for you if continue rappin'/
It proably hit's home when you pick up a pen,/
Cause Like ya avatar, all your ex-girls was X-men./
Is that why you madd cause I wouldn't give you my digits./
U ain't never won the lottery, now you think you gonna hit it?/
Your flows couldn't be hott, if U took some paper and penned it./
Cause you spit in incoherent outbursts, like a rappin' skitsofrenic./

Aight, do you fam.

thats only 4 barz playa...but uh

h0w u claim ta be da greatest when ya havent yet beat-cream//
u winin this battle? like "fabolous" its only ya "street dream"//---1

dawg i g0t ratchets and tools ta blast-quick//
u'd think "gymnastics" how shells have u doin back-flips//---2

u shouldve came tough,but i see u just beginin//
like genisis this the "beginin" of "armagaden" for ya "endin"//---3

its like "holy scriptures" when im spitn,im typen da "truth"//
juzt think,if i did "audios" bet my flow sounds betta den you//---4

*note:ya 8 lines equal to 4 barz...so i just gave u for barz of mine instead of 8 ta be fair for now.

upin this

upin for sum fuckin votes

both of ya had sum good punches and vocab although cream got the vocab nod i gave the punches to Jay and u both had good structure and flow so i think it came down to who's verse made me drool more
and id have to say cuz of this line
It proably hit's home when you pick up a pen,/
Cause Like ya avatar, all your ex-girls was X-men./

my vote = CounTREE Jay
no hard feelinz

iight fam thankz for voten

1-0 Jay

LMAO.. CounTREE Jay took dis 1
dat shyt was funny.. he was clownin on dat other nigga
n tha other niggaz shyt dident really rhyme on parts..

Lolol ok...thankz for voten

2-0 Jay

vote for cj it waz close on the frist 2 barz but cream melted under heat cause u feal off bad cj kept hiz punchz flowin nice both had good structure though

these votes will be deleted becuz yall muhfuckaz aint voten correctly....ya not explainin enuff like the rules say...errr duh lol

dont cry cause u gettin beat step ya game up if it waz reversed u would be thinkin u waz the shit u got beat quit cryin

C_R_E_A_M won because counTREE used the word X-men.
easy victory.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Yall ni99az shytty lol str8 up...fuck ya unexplained votes....and ghost354....lol sdfu boi. and guyver4mk...explain ya vote muhfucka

sorry man. Jus a bit of pay back for ya boy.
Thats as much explination as he gave me so. U won this hands down.

Want some?
 

Yo, Guyver, you got shitted on in that battle, plus, you ripped a line off 2pac, the greatest rapper of all time, from the song hit 'em up. So let me take a line from that song too & say "U best back the fuk up 4 U get smacked the fuk up, that's how we do it on our side, any of y'all niggaz that wanna bring it, bring it." So why don't you step up and get knocked the fuck off the high horse you think you rode in on. Cause i'll serve you any day of the week. And if you wanna be a lil' bitch about votin', then be a lil' bitch. You could neva come at me, if it was the best day U ever lived and it was the worst i had ever lived at the same exact time. Touch that nigga, I'm callin' U out.

STRUCTURE-cream
PUNCHLINES-cream
FLOW-countree
WORDPLAY-...nun of u niggaz
PERSONAL- nun
ENJOYED-CREAM...cream u a had a few nice punches in here there dunn even tho they was madd old...and countree ya verse was just 2 simple..no hate

my vote-CREAM

yo jay won this becuz he had better and more consistent punches. but both of y'all got potential. if y'all wanna be part of "D-Elite" drop by in "crews and Collaborations" and let me know. or u can pm me. holla back

Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Lol muhfuckaz dont vote often round herre.
upin

Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

i sorry but cj killed this shit it was serious. that ws some sick shit, cream u had so good lines but you just didn't follow threw my vote goes to jay

Man, You gotta explain your votes. I don't know why y'all even bother if you ain't gonna explain, cause that shit just gonna get dq'd anyway. WTF?

C Jay had this for sure.. anytime you got a line with x-men in it like that... it's over. that was a hard punch, CREAM just had nothing to match it and when there's a punch like that and the rest is pretty even, gotta give props. good battle on both sides though, respect for both.

vote back on my battles...

yo and in case that wasn't enough.. both y'all had good flow but kinda weak closers... C Jay that "hot" line didn't make sense to me (maybe im missing something ;) ), CREAM your close had nice multis but no real punch.. i'd put the worldplay shit in the middle and try to end with a nice punch... :shrug: