Nae \\s// The INC Killa
 

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no hate/crew/gay votes
due in 20min

Watch me...
Lyrically illustrate my bullets goin' through ya chest//
No need for animation, cartoons, or fake affects//
Heartbeats and "SHOCKS", put you in cardiac arrest//
Go straight to ya chest, no need for ya bulletproof vest//
And by the way you spit i cant tell u have bad taste//
Sounds like you be usin dog sh!t daily for tooth paste//
Comercial ass nigga, this aint no asian avenue//
I dont even know why i took my time to battle you//
lift my 'hundred pound BARS?, i getcha stressin//
you weaker than your own lyrics tryin bench pressin//
Your steps to the top? im gonna have to stop ya//
you havin your own "style"? now nigga thats a "shocker"//
you dont wanna battle me, i lyrcially drop bombs//
you can ask your whole family, cuz i did it in vietnam//
and that weak ass verse: worse rhymes i ever heard in my life//
you lucky i didnt spit into them watts and murder ya mic//
Should i just spit freely? or show a "battle" demonstration//
This nigga is too stupid, where did he get his education?//
He dosent know that my murder intercourse is verbal//
gawd damn, you waker than MC's on Burger King comercials//
dont spit bullshit that no one wants to listen to//
its not that you suck, its just that ya too pitiful//

u betta wish dat u neva fucked wit me/
everytime u rap u think that ur the key/
ur a guy, not a gurl/
when i hear u rap it makes me wanna hurl/
everyone knos that u prolly a known slut/
so what do u plan to be when u grow up/
u prolly listen to dat Backstreet Boy shit/
everytime i hear that music it makes me sick/
u cant always be the best/
when i get done wit u , i'll put u to rest/
while im suckin on your momas breast/
u thought u was kool til u met me/
i'll kick your ass so0o bad dat u wont be able to see/
u prolly so0o poor dat u live in a box/
you'll have fun suckin my cock/
"Holy shit, u fell on a rake"/
"Ohh my god ur bleeding,im gonna throw u in the lake"/
ur not a good MC/
u dont have anything to say against me/
fuck it im done, so0o suck my dick, i kno it'll be fun/

all righty can we get some votes^^^^^^

well then tell peeps to get in here and vote :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

can we get some vote pleazzze

yall vote on here pleazze ill return da favor come'on vote

uppin fo some votes

okay this is how i see it
FLOW-lil nae,you need alittle work cause right now you suck
inc. killer,you did iight could have done better but it waz good jus' not your best
MULTES-lil nae, you jus' pushed them too much (don't push the multes)
inc. killer, good job work on your voc. though you did good
RYHM-lil nae,this waz actally iight if it wazn't for you pushin the multes. it would of been good.
inc. killer,it waz iight i mean not your best but not ur worst
WHO WAS THE BEST- The Inc. Killer (good job man)

can we get some votes on here

hahahahahahahaa i kicked ur ass BIATCH :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

ske u got one fukin vote so shut dat bullshit up

uppin on some votes

u betta wish dat u neva fucked wit me/
everytime u rap u think that ur the key/
this sucks
ur a guy, not a gurl/
when i hear u rap it makes me wanna hurl/
this sucks, no flow, and wtf kinda of punch is the first line?
everyone knos that u prolly a known slut/
so what do u plan to be when u grow up/
wow.. that second line.. sucked.
u prolly listen to dat Backstreet Boy shit/
everytime i hear that music it makes me sick/
ok.. generic diss and then a second line with no punch
u cant always be the best/
when i get done wit u , i'll put u to rest/
while im suckin on your momas breast/
generic diss.. meh
u thought u was kool til u met me/
i'll kick your ass so0o bad dat u wont be able to see/
so0o.. wtf. if you say it like that it fucks up the flow, which is terrible anyway, and the second line had nothing to do with the setup.
u prolly so0o poor dat u live in a box/
you'll have fun suckin my cock/
second line has nothing to do with the first, both are terrible punches
"Holy shit, u fell on a rake"/
"Ohh my god ur bleeding,im gonna throw u in the lake"/
this is terrible, wtf is with the quotation marks, they make no sense.
ur not a good MC/
u dont have anything to say against me/
fuck it im done, so0o suck my dick, i kno it'll be fun
weak as hell.

i don't know why you talk so much smack man, i give this verse a whopping 2 out of 100 just because its written in english.

Lyrically illustrate my bullets goin' through ya chest//
No need for animation, cartoons, or fake affects//
nice rhyme, pretty strong openener.

actually at this point, the battle is over. that one bar is better than the whole INC Killa verse.

vote, lil nae.

thx fo da vote look ppl stop lookin at da sht n vote ill return da favor

lol... get started by returning the vote on my battle vs franchiZe (check my sig) ^

uppin fo votes

I am gun give this battle to nae cuz she came harder. she had some pretty hot shit goin on there and was better then ice the whole way threw, you want some tips ink?.. stop thinkin your the hottest shit, work on your flow.. and throw some harder punches.

Vote - Nae


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can we gt some votes so i can stopp uppin dis shit

Yo
 

Lil Nea 2's punches were way better then the INC's. Lil' Nea, don't try to overdue the multi's, just put your most hard hitting ones in there. INC, your rhymes were too elementary/basic, you need to elevate on your vocab., wordplay, and punches homie. Lil' Nea, your structure was solid but work on your rhyme scheme a bit. Your wordplay was good and vocab was decent, but I think you can elevate on both of these areas. Lil' Nea gets my vote for the punches, multi's and flow. INC you need to elevate on your game dawg.

Vote- Lil' Nea2

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Lil Nae won....better punches,flow was good so was structure...u need to up ur vocab and get more rhymes in there...half ur shit wasnt rhyming much...ur punches hit harder than the otha kats....

OTha Kat-punches was weak mainly cause ur vocab wasnt that strong...uf flow and structure fell a lil short...keep elevating...

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE HONESTLY...AND EXPLAIN UR VOTES LIKE I DID..OTHER WISE IT WONT COUNT

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121649

thx fo da vote uppin on vote

Nae was kilen this kid she had punches and flow basicly it all...inc elevate some

Nae=7/10
Inc=4/10