Re$tricted Vs. Aisle Phive
 

Aight Here Is Da Battle..

Rules:
5-10 Bars Max
5 Votez Winz
No Hating, or D/R Votes
Spits Due 15 Minutes After Both Check In

Good Luck

.::Checkity Check Motherfucker!::.

~R~

Here's a quick key for a garbage fuck like yourself.


The fuck is you kid? I'm sick of you bitches
I'll put a hole in ya chest .. then fucking bury you in it
It's plain shit dukes .. but this is what erks me
Your nickname's Rated R, but you can't even watch PG-13
I put hurtin on kids .. and here they're all no names ..
But no worries .. half of em could beat your ass anyway
Your style's gay as fuck .. and ayo it's true
I'd use personals .. but nobody fucking knows you
On the mic I'm cruel .. they say it's fucked up dude
So I'll take your shoes n' socks .. then give you the boot

Bitch.

good vers aisle five..this gon b good


GO VOTE DUDES
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117602
YoungStar* vs. J-Mob
its a good one 3-3..go vote

for real thats a nice flow

lets see how this shit turns out

VOTE ON MIC_RIPPA VS XPLICIT ASSASSIN

Aight..Dropping Dis Ish...
 

Aight...Check Dis...

Yo..Yo..Fucking Bitch..3......2.....1 :gfy:

Why The Fuck You Stressing My Shit, Quit Riding My Dick,
Quit Holding My Mouth, Why You Holding All My Spits?/
You Wish You Had Re$tricted's Intellect and Skills,
I Erect Chills, My Words Will Sevren and Lyrically Kill/
Aisles' The Type Of Guy That Likes To Bone Kids,
This Ain't Murder It's Straight Suicide.. You Chose It/
I Know You Remember Me, R-Rated..Rb.Coms' Orginal King, Lyrical Swings, Merked You Back In The Day, Dont Deny A Thing/
You Couldn't Match My Skills, Let Alone, My Merks and Kills,
You Say You Spit Hot? Stop! Give Me The Mic, Let Me Feel../
Ice Cold, Tight Spit, No!, Gettin Merked Like Gambino,
Forseen Yo, Outcome Of This Battle? Your Gonna Lose Hoe!/
Run Back To The Old RB, Where They Spit Half-Heartedly,
You'll Say "OMG Re$tricteds Sick, My Skill Close To His? Hardly"/
Re$tricted Dropping More Dope Lines Than A Clumsey Coke Head, I Got Pen-Skillz Strong Enough To Break Ya Skull, With Just My Lead/
To Beat Me, Odds Are Slimer Than Anorexics On Dexatrim,
Relapse Your Every Whim, When I Snap Your Neck and Limbs!/
Lyrically Chopped Dis Bitch Up, Call Me LeatherFace, Eat'N You Alive, Have Cprogress Pming The Mods Saying "We Need A Clean Up On Aisle Phive!!"/

Yea...Motherfucker Ain't Ready...Haha...

~R~

Aight Don't Sleep...

Let's Get The Votes In Hurr...

#1----------Uppin---------#1

~R~

nIce book you wrote Restricted i enjoyed it a lot

Restricted: Better Multis, topic, vocab, punches
Aisle: OK punches, great structure.

v/Resticted.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

okay close battle
i was feeln em both to a degree
but heres how it breaks down
Aisle:good structure and flow but ur vocab could use sum work
favourite lines:It's plain shit dukes .. but this is what erks me
Your nickname's Rated R, but you can't even watch PG-13
and
Your style's gay as fuck .. and ayo it's true
I'd use personals .. but nobody fucking knows you

Restricted:alot more than 10 bars but a good spit none the less
good multi's and sum pretty good punches,some shit didnt rhyme tho and i think ur vocab is aight but judgin by ur rhymes id say u could do a lil better keep uppn ur game
favourite line:To Beat Me, Odds Are Slimer Than Anorexics On Dexatrim,
Relapse Your Every Whim, When I Snap Your Neck and Limbs!/
in a tight race v/Restricted

Restricted Lost Cause He Didin't Follow The Rules,but His Rhymes Were Aight.

Vote-aisle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

LMAO WHAT^^^^^

Fucking Hate Vote.....

Delete This Vote Strobe or CProgress...

~R~

fo' real tho dawg
u went over the max on ur own rules u sed 5-10 max
i still gave u my vote but if u play by the rules
u dq'ed bro

I said 10 Bars Max.....10 bars = 20 Lines....

C'mon Now..Ya'll Know Dis...

I Have 20 Lines.....2 Each Bar...Just Sum Of My Bars Went Three Words Into The Next Line....Big Deal..

I Could See If I Spit like 2-5 Bars Over...That Would Be Bullshit...But Not 6 Words LMAO...

Uppin Dis Shit..

~R~

ILLUGIN....How Come You Didn't Pole Vote??!

POLE VOTE!!

~R~

i take back what i sed
and no more freepostin fer me
but let this dawg have his votes ppl

vote on my shit too its on front linez
i juss pole voted
i couldnt b4 cuz i didnt have enuff posts

i say very nice verses by both of y'all n i appreciate a hot battle to c every so often.

aisle:mosdt punches were aigght.tight verse,neat structure hard hittin lines.
mos def...''i'd use personals but nobosy knowz you'' made me really appreciate ur skillz.

HOWEVER

Restricted:ur lines had all his qualities but elevated,ur punches bout equal but had so much more added wordplay and ur verse was very clever n as a lyricist u seemed to ave a gr8 deal of skillz!

my vote: Restricted

Peace y'all

A-Cubed

P.S.Hit this up bak plz bro's http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...ghlight=a-cubed thnx.........

Uppin Dis Bitch...

3-1 Me.....

Holla Atcha Boi

~R~

aight.......close battle........
restricted - you had better punches cuz they were direct, ur mulitis were hot, n ur structure n sustainment was better....i enjoyed urs the most
aisle - your flow was sick but u only had a few hard punches includin the personal punch....flow doesnt win the battle but punches do n thats why restricted got this

vote - restricted

return the favor.........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117844

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

close battle
restricted pulled it out wit better punches and wordplay they both had good structures vote restricted

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

hey re$tricted, it helps to throw punches. Aisle took this one with a shit load more punches, better wordplay, better flow. Now re$tricted, u got the section of multies, way ta go man, like those matter. Aisle's best line
"Your style's gay as fuck .. and ayo it's true
I'd use personals .. but nobody fucking knows you"
Re$triced's best line
"Lyrically Chopped Dis Bitch Up, Call Me LeatherFace, Eat'N You Alive, Have Cprogress Pming The Mods Saying "We Need A Clean Up On Aisle Phive!!"

WTF?? BullShit Inadiquit Fucking Votes...

Why Is Strobe Riding Original Rb.com's Dick Now..

I Won This Fair And Square A Week Back...

Neways Uppin Dis Den..

~R~

Aight Fucck This Canceling Votes Shitt LoL This Vote Best Count

Re$TricTed Got This Shit' No Doubt

Check Re$TricTed Lines

Why The Fuck You Stressing My Shit, Quit Riding My Dick,
Quit Holding My Mouth, Why You Holding All My Spits?/
You Wish You Had Re$tricted's Intellect and Skills,
I Erect Chills, My Words Will Sevren and Lyrically Kill/


Thats Some Strong Wordplay And Nice Vocab Better Than Any Of Aisle's Lines

This Line Is A Good & Consistant Punch Lines'

I Know You Remember Me, R-Rated..Rb.Coms' Orginal King, Lyrical Swings, Merked You Back In The Day, Dont Deny A Thing/
You Couldn't Match My Skills, Let Alone, My Merks and Kills,
You Say You Spit Hot? Stop! Give Me The Mic, Let Me Feel../
Ice Cold, Tight Spit, No!, Gettin Merked Like Gambino,
Forseen Yo, Outcome Of This Battle? Your Gonna Lose Hoe!/

And A Strong Final Verse To Finish The Verse Off' And Take The Steal/Win

Run Back To The Old RB, Where They Spit Half-Heartedly,
You'll Say "OMG Re$tricteds Sick, My Skill Close To His? Hardly"/
Re$tricted Dropping More Dope Lines Than A Clumsey Coke Head, I Got Pen-Skillz Strong Enough To Break Ya Skull, With Just My Lead/
To Beat Me, Odds Are Slimer Than Anorexics On Dexatrim,
Relapse Your Every Whim, When I Snap Your Neck and Limbs!/
Lyrically Chopped Dis Bitch Up, Call Me LeatherFace, Eat'N You Alive, Have Cprogress Pming The Mods Saying "We Need A Clean Up On Aisle Phive!!"/

^Thats A Proper Verse With Decent Bars & Wordplay & Vocab

Votes Conducted On:

Punches: Re$TricTed
Flow: Re$TricTed
Multis: Re$TricTed
Werdplay: Re$TriCted
Lyrical Content: Re$TricTed

Re$TricTed Took The Kill On This Battle

(Well Explained Vote)

YO verse goes to restricted check da breakdonw

Stict....verse constantly punchin at this other dude, it flowed good, and i liked da structre good, your personals came hard throughout the battle

your Finisher...Lyrically Chopped Dis Bitch Up, Call Me LeatherFace, Eat'N You Alive, Have Cprogress Pming The Mods Saying "We Need A Clean Up On Aisle Phive!!"/

^^ shit was like WHOA

Aisle phive...Notta bad verse flowed well but i didnt see no puches or personals but ur use of muties was good

Fave Line..It's plain shit dukes .. but this is what erks me
Your nickname's Rated R, but you can't even watch PG-13

^^shit was aight

VOTE STRICTED

yo hit up my battle plz

^ this should be some inadequate feedback (not a well explained vote) just so ya know

This is how it goes

AP
creativity - 7/10
flow 8/10
punchlines - 8/10
word usage - 7/10
total - 30

Its was cool but just too short. The max was 10 bars, and you wrote 10 lines. Thats only 5 bars. Your flow was to simple and lacked metas.

Restricted

creativity - 8/10
flow 8/10
punchlines - 8/10
word usage - 7/10
total - 32

Yours was also cool also but won this one with your use of metas and creativity. The comparison with AP and Gambino was funny. No offense big G.

v - R

Strobe is not D/Ring the original RB people. A vote is considered unexplained if all it says is better wordplay, punches, metas, flow, etc etc etc... That doesn't tell anybody anything. We would not even know if you read the verses or if you just listed out those explanations. Easiest way for a vote to count is to show us that you read it... can be simple as quoting a bar or two and say why you liked it..