M.o.s Vz. Threatz
 

sPIT sInCe u FuCkEd uP ThE LaSt oNe
(by the way M.O.S. is for momentofsilence remember this bitch)

as seen in the other thread (god i hate dumbasses)
First of all my name is M.O.S i will post asap so stay online make sure you post by tonite GooD LucK
preachin to the people my niggas refer to me as the "clergy", but i will leave you scared ("watchin your ass") cause i leave little boys like you shitted because im a disturbed "preist", beat me, i want to see, cause i garuntee, your pants will be "peed" before you can touch this "G", cause to no degree, are you an eemcee, *u beg plead and disagree*, need some vitamin "C", open ur mouth time for your daily treatment of "flaming pee" thats it im out ur rhymes stink like cheap "potpurrey "
ok thus is my first battle that was gay but im in the middle of booking all my crap to go on vacation so i couldnt write a novel LMFAO latez
SPiT u better not get offline after challenging me come on that shit i spat was gay i just wanna see you post man

ok so people dont think of it he wrong way what i meant by "need some vitamin "C", open ur mouth time for your daily treatment of "flaming pee" is that the only time his rhymes will be hott is if he swallowed some flaming pee i dont know it was a cheap atempt at humor that kinda made me look gay im just trying to clarify IM NOT GAY later

u need to re write ya shit strait down or separated by / or something or git a lose off of badd structure
jus trynna help ya fo u can't b helped

u happy now^^^^^^^^^^^
preachin to the people my niggas refer to me as the "clergy", but i will leave you scared ("watchin your ass") cause i leave little boys like you shitted because im a disturbed "preist",

beat me, i want to see, cause i garuntee, your pants will be "peed" before you can touch this "G",

cause to no degree, are you an eemcee, *u beg plead and disagree*,

need some vitamin "C", open ur mouth time for your daily treatment of "flaming pee" thats it im out ur rhymes stink like cheap "potpurrey"

Yo whole verse was garbage, be honest
you don't kno whatchu started, Threatz don't play
even you said yo own shyt was gay
I'm never scared, like them boys in dat ATL
yo names misspelled.. but do you think I care
tha answers no, shub a callico down ya throat
snatch ya ho, an then I rock tha boat
you ain't a G, ol fraud ass nigga
i see tha braud in ya, stay in yo place
fo I put them thangs all in yo face

umm..

when ever ya'll ready 2 vote my niggaz

threatz had better structure couldnt hradly read ol dudez shit

punchz where both no where around that good

mos need to improve some spelling shit didnt rhyme half the time

mos had more mulitz but thatz bout it nothin impressive

so..

dah should make it 1-0 i thank... come'on with tha rest of dem votes

blah i dunno where to start with the other guy
upp yer structure and >>FLOW<<
not tryn to be a dickhead but it needs work
threatz u aint need shit to rip up this guy but u shoulda picked up yer game regardless
bro
v/threatz

already..

dat makes it 2-0.. lets get mo votez in

yea my vote waz for that bitch threatz i forgot to put it

aight..


lets get some mo votez in so i can juhz move already

mayn hurry tha fuck up an vote...


ya'll niggaz ack lyke ya'll can't vote

i said id vote on this...but to be honest you both garbage.....like seriously didnt see any good punchlines and thats what ppl wanna see PUNCHES.....Threatz u basically fed off M.O.S and used everything he said against him u wont win that way....be creative...anyways after reading this i didnt see anything i liked...

M.O.S took this just cause he had a lil of multies....
besides that this was shit on the real....

come'on

somebody vote

uppin diz..

VOTE 4 dis battle my niggaz.. drop a link to yo shyt an I'll hit it up fa'sho- 1

still uppin

uppin diz...

uppin diz..


come'on people VOTE!!, drop a link 2 your battle or whatever an i'll get 2 it..

just vote

dayum diz battle been open 4 tha longest..

just start votin so it can get closed already..

leave a link 2 your battle an i'll go check it out..

who is gonna win this battle ????????????????????????????????????????? :thumbup:

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both was pretty bad but threatz had better flow and strucutre so he gtes my vote

Threat=4/10
MOS=1/10

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M.O.S had a chance of win'n anyway
he won caus he had a better structure
and flow he came much harder Threatz
and he kept it com'in

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damn this was wack.....structure goes to threatz....no punches were thrown....AT ALL!!.....everything was lacked....but mos will take this despite his structure....he rhymed...threatz didnt....simple as that.....both need to go to tutorials and learn a few things....

vote - mos

what happen to the game,are ya realy serious//
most are pussies they battle on there period//
picture perfect i take you order//
call me the the chef,caues iam your life suppourt//
most mc think they got me hunted//
but really they look like the guy from malbuis-most-wanted//
best belive fresh run the curics//
i could pay your mother off and make her tell you that your lief is worth//
on purpus i am not trien to pleaz ya//
but dont cross my path befor i forced to swiss chees you//

threatz i like you verse better. even though your structure was better. youe lines were way to short and lacked hard hitting punchez. M.O.S. your verse was kind of hard to read but you had decent punchez. you structure was a little out of order.threatz next time make you lines longer and come with stronger punchez. M.O.S. you get my vote b/c you had better punchez, period.

vote=M.O.S

structure-young
flow-young
punches-young
like m.o.s said his verse was gay
its obvious where my vote goes

structure-Threatz
Flow-THREATZ
PUNCHES-threatz
i think u know who won this

p.s in case u didnt understand i voted 4 Threatz this was a easy win 4 u

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on my first post i was high and i put tha wrong name that was my mistake

Man dis battle sucked. Threatz ya came weak, and Mos whole flow and structure were fucked but I was feeling M.O.S. a lot more. He landed more punches.

VOte-M.O.S.

Return da favor (in ma sig)

yup, I wasnt really feelin this but ill vote, both yall need work in all areas, but hey I aint the best either....with that said ima havta go with Threatz jus cause of beter structure...punches werent that great tho...

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vote= threatz

threatz metal won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad had nasty punchlines for it to be offended or evem take you serious. threatz won dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

v/ threatz because he fucmin sonned him on that gangsta shit
lol
seriously
threatz actually had some punches in his verse.
M.OS. was wack and some of it didnt even rhyme