Zeet Vs. Youngstar*
 

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The Basic rules,
check-in and i'll spit 1st

yo crew votes are allowed..and lines 10-20
i didn't say i wud battle you but i guess i will
checkity check bro

YoungStar* aka ThaYoungin checkin in
spit bro
nothin personal YET
afta ma spit there mite b
SPIT
u holdin up ma battles..spit

im sorry, i was busy and im kinda new to this forum...

Oh! THIS IS Zeet, with the All~Out~Dictation
im on overdrive, with the Call~Out Notation
No dout sensation with the Paul-Stout-Complextion
Just me, no Immitation, just see my Initiation
Had you pulling ya chair, like the state-wide fair
Amazing site, rephrasing spites throu highest of kites
Flo beyong height, tighter than latex, no need the fake-max
When done with ya, body all wretch-cha, had you doing the twitch-cha


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Time to get serious,time to get down to business
Given you the chance to back off hence
or i'll give you the bullet dance
Spray deep, till you just a flesh-heap
Leap of faith you doing accepting my challenge
like a broad with 15 tods trying to manage
Im unstopable, call me Zeety the terrible
When the popo found you, dont hold me countable
My lyric like a bold-maced assassin
Hit you so hard, feel like the cold-faced Mike Tyson
Your file lock on unsolved crime, sealed forever in the claws of time
Coropted cop cuase i pay they fee, so ain't no one be after me
So think again before you turn the key, you wining is merely a fantasy

Yo youngstar, are you going to reply back? not forfeiting this challenge are ya ?

whoa

i wanna tell a story bout a fag named zeet
ain't got no gurl cuz this fag cain't skeet
beatin this herb will b no acomplished feat
keep spittin shit and ma left click u can meet

all i had to do wuz show up to beat this fella
2 xcited bout gittin beat and he got overly zealous

challenged one who been around fo a while
rap so heavy that i made LLYOD BANKS SMILE

tha price you pay is death for fuckin wit tha YOUNGSTAR
u neva have it in real life, so u got gatz fo ya avatar

but u died cuz they lied and sed zeet cud beat me
rhymes got tha clubs popin,and thugz in xctasy

i keep droppin tha linez, beat me, YEAH YOU BET
consequences of death u faced, and i ain't even a vet yet
[CLOSER]
zeet's world, becuz of me, iz now in unbreakable havoc
put fake niggaz to unrest,cuz this killin is alwayz graphic

yo this wasnt youngstars best and youngin still won this shit

he had better personals,punches,struc,and youngin just hit alot harder

Z you need ta elevate dogg stop usin those big words all tha and keep it real
work on your punches

nice battle

Hit this up

Mic_rippa Vs Xplicit Assassin

UUUUUPPPPPPIIIIIJNHHHH
yep yep not my best..i think its enuff tho

hahaha, rather high of yourself arn't ya? well, this shit aint over yet playboy, Uppin

lmao
naw..i jus don't think you spit that good here
hey ya'll go vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118067
YoungStar* vs Accomplishment

U TOO ZEET LMAO..NO BAD BLOOD

yo this was an alright battle

not tha best ive seen youngin spit but i think it was still enough-he had a better everything in my book- flow it hit harder and he had better punches and character

zeet no disrespect but you need to work on your shit

oh yeah vote goes to youngstar
no hard feelings zeet keep workin on your shit

dawg u alreadi voted lmao thanx tho i appreciate it
GO VOTE at
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118067
YoungStar* vs. Accomplishment

not tha best ive seen by far from youngin dogg you can spit alot better than this but i think it was still enough-he had a better everything in my book- flow it hit harder and he had better punches and character
zeet i think you just need some better punches and vocab and you just might win

I agree with Xplicit vote=youngstar
no bad blood

:laugh: lol this fool already explained his shit twice

funny Kat
for real
lol :laugh:

oh well, i always respect constructive crititism, uppin

youngstar took every category except for multi's.....
zeet- had the mulis n ur flow was tight....get more direct punches....n challenge people on ur leel...ur good but not good enough for young........elevate n ull get betta
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...45&page=1&pp=15

youngstar pretty much wiped him out beat him everyway possible thank zeet made more multiz and a good struc but thatz about it didnt bring it so hard in this battle
vote/youngstar

Youngstar took this.. but I seen better verses comin from him

Zeet just keep at it.. you'll get better eventually