Triple_N vs SSupreme
 

Option #1 SSupreme
Option #2 Triple_N

Ah'ight son 10-20 line spits
No d/r votes
Crew votes allowed


You drop first

Check In...
Ill Drop First...
Scary Cat......
Bout To Think Of Some Shit...
Drop When Done...

My Bad My Computer Was Fucking Up.....
I Aint Finish....

Continued......

7. So You Like To Spit-all-the-time//
You Couldn't Hit-a-bar If You Were In Jail Trying To Take A Bite-outta-crime

Thats the best you could do I feel sorry for you but it won't stop me from ripin' ya ass bitch!!!!


Your past is catchin' up on ya', for you thats scary/
Cuz u aint from killafornia, morelike the "house on the prarie"/
Stop hidin' in da closet, you gay just face reality/
An ugly as fuck, u fucked a dog an she was arrested for beastiality/
U the type faggot bitch, that likes to get arrested at every month's last/
Just to paly dress up in jail, and get fucked in the ass/
This guy jocks crazy cocks, I mean why would I lie/
I can't knock much props, for landin the lead in "queer eye"/
I'm blowin' up ya spot, cuz u not hot, stop tryin' to be 2pac/
If you fell off the grand canyon you still couldn't drop/
U always tryin to act like you the hardest thug/
Everytime u stub your finger u need mommie to kiss it an give u a hug/
Your whole verse was wack an unclear, an u mad cuz its u to blame/
Cuz if you had an erection u still couldn't properly aim/


Too bad youngster but nice try...If at first u don't succeed try, try again....lmao

Fuck It Im Bout To Re Write That Shit....
The Same Shit Jus Different Structure...

TRIPLE N DOESN'T DO NO DAMAGE WIT A PEN*
THIS PUSSY IS SOFTER THEN NUNS AFTER HE BATTLES HE ASK GOD 4 FORGIVENESS OF HIS SINS*

TRIPLE: STANDS FOR HIS 3 LOSSES "_" THAT STANDS FOR THE WINS HE
GOT UNDER HIS BELT*
THIS KID NEEDS HELP LIKE SLITING-YA-WRIST YOUR ONLY HURTING YO SELF*

YOU MUST THINK THE GAME HATES YOU... YOU'VE BEEN ON SINCE A YOUNG BUCK AND YOU STILL AINT GOT A VOTE*
BETTER CHANCE OF WINNING DA LOTTERY YA STYLE IS CUT-THROAT*

CONFUSED?? N.Y BUT U REP CHICAGO... YOU CANT RECIEVE-HOMAGE BY ASKING-4-RESPECT*
THAT CAN-I-BITCH SHIT WILL ONLY HAVE YOU INTRODUCED 2 THEM TECKS

YOUR A BITCH THINKING IT'S COOL 4 GUYS 2 WEAR MAKE-UP LIKE UGLY-BITCHES WIT MASCRA YOUR HIDIN THE TRUTH..NIGGA ......WAKE-UP!!!!!!!!!!

WE DON'T GO-BACK LIKE CAR-SEATS READING YO PUNCHLINES GOT ME FALLING-TO-SLEEP

So You Like To Spit-all-the-time//
You Couldn't Hit-a-bar If You Were In Jail Trying To Take A Bite-outta-crime

Vooooootttttteeeesssss.....NNNNeeeedddddeeeedddddd

Come on everyone can I get some votes on this shit right here

Triple N- I was feelin your verse more, you came harder an more personal..
an just clowned on dat other guy

SSupreme- Your verse was aight.. but you fell on yo verse..

VOTE= Triple N

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

vote/triple n solid all around punchz structure flow and personalz and ssupreme dog u messed up way 2 much in this and u didnt even bring it your hardest

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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Uppin for vote____________________________________

triple_n got this one with better wordplay and punches, ssupreme, you kinda just rampled on and on about shit, but triple_n, gotta trie and lay off tha gay jokes, those are mad played on this website.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118285

hit this shit up^^^^^

Some votes would be much appreciated on this one y'all

yo I need some votes an explain yo shit ah'ight^^^^

Uppin for some well explained votes y'all, no more d'ques y'all

uppin 4 votes
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holy shit dis was a good as battle diggin both verses 4reel
triple n love reading yo stuff homie u always amaze me
supreme yos hit was crazy lyrical tight yo 4 reel lol

best lines-This guy jocks crazy cocks, I mean why would I lie/
I can't knock much props, for landin the lead in "queer eye"/
I'm blowin' up ya spot, cuz u not hot, stop tryin' to be 2pac/
If you fell off the grand canyon you still couldn't drop/

dat was crazy triple

best line-TRIPLE: STANDS FOR HIS 3 LOSSES "_" THAT STANDS FOR THE WINS HE
GOT UNDER HIS BELT*
THIS KID NEEDS HELP LIKE SLITING-YA-WRIST YOUR ONLY HURTING YO SELF*

u had more but dat was tight

punches-triple
personal-supreme
multis-supreme-
flow-supreme
opening-triple
closing-supreme
structure-triple
#1 contender-supreme barley
supreme-8.2/10
triple-8.1/10
vote-supreme
good battle triple loved it pimp

My Vote
 

Ok:

$$UPREME- I was feelin' ya flow. Your structure was good and you had some nice hard punches. Your personly's were not as good as Triple N I thought, you had some fiction in there as he had some facts. I like your style though.

Triple N - Nice opener dawg, Its always a great start to kick it off with a rhyme like that. Your vocab. was by far better in this battle, you stuck with your rhymes and dropped your lines properly. Your structure was nice and solid

Flow/Structure- Tie
Punches- $$UPREME
Personlys- Triple N
Multi's- Tie
Vocab.- Triple N
Wordplay- Triple N

Very good battle, but i'll have to give it to Triple N. Good Battle.

Uppin 4 Votes....................
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Uppin for votes^^^^^^^well explained votes needed^^^

Supreme

dunnof I felt the whole strucutre.. it flowed ok.. nothing incredible tho.. and some of the punches were nice.. overall u did okay

Triple i liked ur flow a bit better and ur strucutre too... overall I felt urs a bit more

both were aight.. but triple's took it.. peace homies..

vote: triple

$$umpreme-
i always feel ya structure when you do it like the second one i think that''s the one but u got my vote for that one...but your punches only half way hit, this was not one of your better battles you understand...and you had ok flo and shit

Triple_N-
i hated ya verse honestly, i didn't feel it at all....but as it is you had better opener and your's flowed better...its punches weren't any better than his because they wurr played..all they wurr wurr GAY punches and thosed r PLAYED punches...u need to catch a different ship wit that...

but as it is
i gotta give my vote to
Triple_N

CLASS SIC LOVE

triple had a tight flow...
$$upreme came good...too
i wasn't feelin 3n's punchlines... that much
flow-3n
vocab-$$
punchlines-$$
structure-$$ on the 2nd..one
vote-$$upreme

Alright Checcckity Checck

Check Triple_N's Lines:

Your past is catchin' up on ya', for you thats scary/
Cuz u aint from killafornia, morelike the "house on the prarie"/

^Weak Opener - - - 6/10

Stop hidin' in da closet, you gay just face reality/
An ugly as fuck, u fucked a dog an she was arrested for beastiality/

^WTF? lol ..... (Thinkin)

U the type faggot bitch, that likes to get arrested at every month's last/
Just to paly dress up in jail, and get fucked in the ass/

^Good Punch.. 8/10

This guy jocks crazy cocks, I mean why would I lie/
I can't knock much props, for landin the lead in "queer eye"/
I'm blowin' up ya spot, cuz u not hot, stop tryin' to be 2pac/
If you fell off the grand canyon you still couldn't drop/

^Dropping Decent Bar's... And Good PunchLines' ..!! 10/10

Your whole verse was wack an unclear, an u mad cuz its u to blame/
Cuz if you had an erection u still couldn't properly aim/

^^ Lol' An Alright Closer!! 8/10


Checckity Check $$UPREME's Lines:

TRIPLE N DOESN'T DO NO DAMAGE WIT A PEN*
THIS PUSSY IS SOFTER THEN NUNS AFTER HE BATTLES HE ASK GOD 4 FORGIVENESS OF HIS SINS*

^^An Alright Opener Could Have Came A Bit Better!! 8/10

TRIPLE: STANDS FOR HIS 3 LOSSES "_" THAT STANDS FOR THE WINS HE
GOT UNDER HIS BELT*
THIS KID NEEDS HELP LIKE SLITING-YA-WRIST YOUR ONLY HURTING YO SELF*

^Ok Where's The Punchh? 6/10

YOU MUST THINK THE GAME HATES YOU... YOU'VE BEEN ON SINCE A YOUNG BUCK AND YOU STILL AINT GOT A VOTE*
BETTER CHANCE OF WINNING DA LOTTERY YA STYLE IS CUT-THROAT*

^Ok' ... Again Wheres The Punch?? 6/10

So You Like To Spit-all-the-time//
You Couldn't Hit-a-bar If You Were In Jail Trying To Take A Bite-outta-crime

^Nice Closer I Like That 10/10 ...

Over All Im Going To Have To Give This Shit To $$UPREME' .. Because.. I Enjoyed His Verse' .. And Didn't Stumble Over Any Of His Lines' ...!!! But Peice Of Advice.. Improve Your Structure... & Flow

TRIPLE N DOESN'T DO NO DAMAGE WIT A PEN*
THIS PUSSY IS SOFTER THEN NUNS AFTER HE BATTLES HE ASK GOD 4 FORGIVENESS OF HIS SINS*

TRIPLE: STANDS FOR HIS 3 LOSSES "_" THAT STANDS FOR THE WINS HE
GOT UNDER HIS BELT*
THIS KID NEEDS HELP LIKE SLITING-YA-WRIST YOUR ONLY HURTING YO SELF*

YOU MUST THINK THE GAME HATES YOU... YOU'VE BEEN ON SINCE A YOUNG BUCK AND YOU STILL AINT GOT A VOTE*
BETTER CHANCE OF WINNING DA LOTTERY YA STYLE IS CUT-THROAT*

CONFUSED?? N.Y BUT U REP CHICAGO... YOU CANT RECIEVE-HOMAGE BY ASKING-4-RESPECT*
THAT CAN-I-BITCH SHIT WILL ONLY HAVE YOU INTRODUCED 2 THEM TECKS*

YOUR A BITCH THINKING IT'S COOL 4 GUYS 2 WEAR MAKE-UP*
LIKE UGLY-BITCHES WIT MASCRA YOUR HIDIN THE TRUTH..NIGGA ......WAKE-UP*!!!!!!!!!!

WE DON'T GO-BACK LIKE CAR-SEATS*
READING YO PUNCHLINES GOT ME FALLING-TO-SLEEP*

So You Like To Spit-all-the-time*
You Couldn't Hit-a-bar If You Were In Jail Trying To Take A Bite-outta-crime*
THOSE R MY BARS..DP

Uppin for votes y'all, explain ya votes^^^^^^^^^^^

yo breakdown for supreme_ over all 7/10
supreme i wasnt feelin your flow or anything i dont think its good enough to wain this battle
...........on tha other hand u did ok

breakdown fortriple_n he did prolly 9/10
better evrything he did good and my vote swings toward him

vocab 3
multi's 3
structure 3
creativity 3
personals $$$
opener tie i wasnt really feelin either and $$$$ was played out same with 333
closer by far 333 $$$ had the gayest punch ive ever seen
both did good
333 work on vocab and personals also dont use the //// i liked ur creativity and ur multis were excellent
$$$$ work on vocab structure and multis i liked ur i didnt really like anything but good drop
vote 333 he came harder more creative and his multis were excellent