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GKillaz05 04-04-04 12:07 PM

$treet*Thug VS GKillaz05
 
10-15 Lines
you spit 1st
no dick rida votes

GKillaz05 04-04-04 12:28 PM

check in man.. im waiting.. lets go!!!

$treet*Thug 04-04-04 12:53 PM

yo this guys like crack n weed, cuz hes always gettin smoked//
when hes got the mic hes greedy, thats y he always chokes//
G(ranny)Killaz05, shit this means theres another 4 before him//
he only tells us he kills grannys, cuz we'll believe they adore him//
shit son, u should stop ya mom, tellin her friends your hansome//
coz when they see you, they could mistake you for maralin manson//
gkillaz wanted me to spit first so he can take words from a dictionary//
now he dont want a txt battle, he wants to draw it like pictionary//
your flow is like alcohol, wen we cant take no more we fall//
my words will leave your tongue cut off like the end of a fone call//

GKillaz05 04-04-04 01:25 PM

you thought your spit was ill' and you think that your a thug//
I bet once your spit was done you ran to your mom for a hug//
I own you dawg I would probally get 5000 more votes then you//
and you know what that means dawg I'd prolly get about 5002//
man after I read your shit I wanted to leave your ass all hollow//
cuz I realized you couldnt spit so that must mean your swallow//
man your ass was right my flow is just like alcohol is adicting//
I dont think your gun get one vote cuz your shit is sickening//
ayo dawg its pretty bad when your only fan is your mother//
get off the net go to the kitchen and tell her you love her//

Inception 04-04-04 01:28 PM

my vote goez to street scrub he had ok vocab some good punchz both had good structure and gkillaz i already seen this shit in your last battle

I own you dawg I would probally get 5000 more votes then you//
and you know what that means dawg I'd prolly get about 5002//

come on dog think of suntin new

GKillaz05 04-04-04 01:28 PM

hit this battle up peeps... we need some votes!!!!!

anxiety 04-04-04 01:31 PM

both verses were nothing out of the ordinary, but street thug, you cant rhyme words like dictionary and pictionary, just too easy. Imma give this to GKillaz05 for better punches and better rhymes, hit this up.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117604

GKillaz05 04-04-04 01:42 PM

we need some more votes people, leave a link for your battle and I will hit it up

anxiety 04-04-04 01:42 PM

^ u havent hit mine up yet

$treet*Thug 04-04-04 01:52 PM

yo uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

Inception 04-04-04 01:58 PM

havent hit my shit up yet either and i accepted ur call out so wassup

GKillaz05 04-04-04 02:06 PM

vote man! get this ova wit.. leave a link and i will hit up yours...

GKillaz05 04-04-04 02:28 PM

why wont anyone hit this up, I will hit yours up!! just vote! and leave a link!

anxiety 04-04-04 02:40 PM

cause u dont know how to vote when people leave a link, u didnt even read my topical

GKillaz05 04-04-04 02:46 PM

what are you talking about, yes I did.. and I voted on who I thought was better.. UPPIN!

$treet*Thug 04-04-04 02:47 PM

man stop bitchin wit each other, we jus need some votes so this shit can be closed aight, uppin

Triple_N 04-04-04 02:59 PM

yo this was an ok battle both guys need alot of work I'm give it to street thug neither one really had any punches so I had to vote on vocab and just how solid the verse was an street thug was alittle better
Vote: Street thug

Holla back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117955

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$treet*Thug 04-04-04 04:42 PM

uppin for votes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,

GKillaz05 04-04-04 05:15 PM

UPPIN peeps.... lets get some votes goin...........

threatz 04-04-04 05:25 PM

vote=gkilla

i felt his verse made more sense.. good structure
an his disses was funny

L.I. 04-04-04 05:34 PM

ok breakdown!!........
Opener - street
Punches - street
Flow - street
Personals - street
Multi's - street
Closer - street
Sustainment - street
Enjoyment - street
v/street
street...dont get cocky cuz u swept him in ery category...u need mad elevation....ur opener was bout the only good 2 lines in ur verse....the opener is where you had your multi....you had a WEAK personal but G had no personals so u go tthat category...ur punches sucked n were indirect...use personals for direct punches....your flow was actually good....aight good win bro keep up tha good werk....
G...u need to werk on punches....use personals...u can go talkin bout his mom cuz that shit makes u get laughed at....use drect punches...come at the boy wit force....use multis....go to tutorials n learn sum stuff...stick on the newbie battle level n keep elevatin....ull get betta...holla wun
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118045

L.I. 04-04-04 05:35 PM

fuck i hit the wrong vote button...........hold on i gotta go report it so the mods will fix it..........

CounTREE Jay 04-05-04 02:41 PM

Ima give this one to GKilla, neither one really blew me away, but he had better flow and i thought his punces was better. That's about it. Both of y'all need some work, i think

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GKillaz05 04-05-04 04:22 PM

UPPIN for votes. I should have 3 now but oh well...

ProjectGhost 04-05-04 04:31 PM

Both of you took it there,it was a good quick battle.My vote goes to Gkillaz for that shit about Streetthug's hugging his mother.
----Project

GKillaz05 04-05-04 04:39 PM

there is my 4th vote, yet stil only 2 on the poll :( can a mod or something gimmie them votes.. lets get one more vote here peeps!

GKillaz05 04-05-04 05:07 PM

uppin!!!! plz hit this up take 2 secounds to enter feedback and vote

GKillaz05 04-05-04 10:02 PM

uppin for some votes, goin to bed now.. hope some peoples will get this closed!

GKillaz05 04-06-04 04:41 PM

I was at 4 votes in this battle.. but ah well.. lets finish this off..

GKillaz05 04-07-04 12:23 PM

I was up to like 4 votes at one point man, now down to one?.. lol, hit this up peeps and get it ova wit

HeXen 04-08-04 04:48 PM

good battle....
Punches:GKillaz05
flow:Street thug
Structure:Street thug
Personals:GKillaz05
Wordplay:GKillaz05
Vocab:GKillaz05
Creativity: GKillaz05
I ogta give dis to GKillaz05...coz he simple came harder and his punches and personals were a bit stronger....over cat was nice but didnt cut da gragde...pz out
v/ GKillaz05

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streetsweepa 04-08-04 06:15 PM

gkillaz won no doubt he kiicked his ass fo sho he won

Restricted 04-08-04 06:26 PM

Check It...

StreetThug: 5/10
Flow Was Aight, Structure Was Aight, Punches Were Decent but Lacked Mulits and Metaphors. Just Keep Elevating and Dropping Dope Ish.

GKillaz05: 4/10
You Recite The Same Shit Over and OVer Again, Plus You Use Bars From Other Battles. Newayz, None Of Your Ish Was Original Plus You Feed Off His Verse. No Multis or Metaphors. Keep Elevating.

Vote - Street

~R~

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bRi SkEe 42o 04-08-04 07:02 PM

yo ima give this one to gkilla cuz basically this otha dudes punches were pretty wack, some of g's wasnt exactly enticing, but wat can you do, g's punches hit harder and mroe often, my vote goes to gkilla

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$treet*Thug 04-09-04 03:52 PM

uppin for the votes people, happy easter, lol,

GKillaz05 04-10-04 05:30 PM

yo didnt even know this battle was still goin, someone hit this up wit I have got over 5 votes alrdy but they kept getttin DQ'd . UPPIN!

GKillaz05 04-11-04 09:34 AM

uppin for some votes peeps.. lets get this battled closed

Kingz 04-11-04 09:38 AM

this gotta go to G kilaz. thug u were too simple man

dictionary and pictionary ha ha

that was quite funny, but in a rele childish way

none of you come hard but i think this was the best line
you thought your spit was ill' and you think that your a thug//
I bet once your spit was done you ran to your mom for a hug//
wasent gr8 but enuf to make me laugh

vote gkillaz

Killah Bwoy 04-11-04 09:42 AM

imma give this one to gkillaz he won this he had better structure this was an ok battle.....gkillah jus had a lil bit better words and his words came harder

can yall return the favour and give an honest vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118742

mcnotorious 04-11-04 10:46 AM

man after I read your shit I wanted to leave your ass all hollow//
cuz I realized you couldnt spit so that must mean your swallow//

hot line right there^^^^

gkillaz had the better attack and better closure, streetthug you need to work on your structure.....


vote: GKillaz05


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