G Deuce vs Ghost 354
 

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my bad went outside ill spit now

A man, I'm bout to go out to da club. YOu can spit now or tommorrow. I'll spit tommorrow when i get home.

fuck wha u reppin and fuck naptown/
ill leave u takin a permanent nap 72 inchez under ground/
take u out the game just like james worthy/
dog u aint worthy.. send shotz threw ya jersey that make u melt like a hershey/
severe blowz to ya head an shattered bonez in ya facial/
got people voted like god damn that nigga laced you/
im hungry an rite now you in the form of a steak/
get the duck tape and plastic guess ill be nice an let u pick the lake/
dont even say u gonna beat me it will be an unfulfilled prophecy/
leave u wit animosity and chopped up like lil piecez of brocoli/
who fuckin wit I get a knife stuck in ya eye/
so u cant see tha bulletz comin at ya the size of ya thigh/
come on gdeuce or should i say gdeush/(like a bitch on the rag)
cause u alwayz takin it in tha ass like a caboose/

good spit I will hit this up when the other guy gets back, you wanna battle now shost set it up

shosht? iz u talkin to me

yes I am talking to you......

u an post sometime today

spit so we can get votez startin

ight man, dont get your pantys in a knot..................

*jeopardy Music*............................................ ................

I’ll lay back on this while you trying to go all out.
You should have read your avatar before you replied to my call out.
I’ll stick this hoe’s ass in the X Files
And do more “hanging around” then the Salem Witch Trails
I’ll put my pen in your thoughts and rearrange your brain
Cause I can tell you didn’t use your fingers to count them numbers in your name
Realise I battle for fun but I murder to live
You copy and paste, and listen to record my hits
I flow cause I made a promise to my moms and I was born to keep it
It’s like them Bush’s bake beans, you don’t know the secret.
You faced the reaper in a battle, and you bound to lose it.
I ripped his spinal cord out and called it the “SOUND OF MUSIC”
So stop yapping yo gums and lets finish this shit.
Man to man, oh I forgot, I'm the only one wit a dick.

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coo finally uppin this shit dont sleep

let the best man win. Nice drop Ghost...........good luck in future battles

i was feelin Ghost's verse cuz it has traces of da wicked shit and I'm all about that. Plus I personally though his Punches were better. I gotta hand it to G Deuce cuz he had the one personal out of the whole battle but his shit didn't seem too original.

Vote-Ghost

what do you mean not original. Come on now......Uppin for votes

ight well deuce u came of a lil cocky but thats how all battles r....ur punches werent as hard as i imagined em to be....ur flow and structure was good
same thing for ghost both punches werent hott....this is a close battle but my vote goes 2 deuce just cause his shit made more sense....

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Gdeuce's Memorable:

And do more “hanging around” then the Salem Witch Trails
I’ll put my pen in your thoughts and rearrange your brain
Cause I can tell you didn’t use your fingers to count them numbers in your name
Realise I battle for fun but I murder to live
You copy and paste, and listen to record my hits

Ghosts Memorable:

got people voted like god damn that nigga laced you/
im hungry an rite now you in the form of a steak/
get the duck tape and plastic guess ill be nice an let u pick the lake/


Alright. They were evenly matched. Ghost didn't have too good of punches. and i didnt find anything i relly liked in it. But Deuce had a couple more lines i liked which gave him the battle. Ghosts flow was off a bit...

V/ Deuce

cool...we need more votes explained like that....................uppin for votes

uppin aint been payin no attention gettin my ass beat somehow

Aight Check Dis...

Ghost 354: 5/10
Your Flow Was Off, and I Didn't Enjoy Your Verse That Much. Your Punches Were Kinda Sketchy and Your Mulits and Metaphors Weren't Even Considered *Newb* Material. Just Elevate.

G-Duece: 6/10
Seen Harder From You. You Came Weak On Dis Kid, But You Took This Cause I Liked Sum Of The Punches You Threw, They Were Mad Hot, Flow Was DeCent, and The Meta's and Mulits Weren't Really There But Oh Well. Elevate and Stay Dope.

Vote- G-Duece

~R~

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man wtf a 5 my verse waznt no fuckin lil kid shit uppin on these dope headz

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quit sleepin on my versedifferent than wha i usually do but fuck it uppin

Ghost- Came harder, more personals.. he just went at dat nigga..

Gdeuce- Started strong, but feel off.. but still busted a nice flow

vote=ghost, because i felt his verse was harder, an made more sense

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^^ somebody wit sense uppin

aight..
ghost some nice wordplay lacked in punckes and personals had a ok opener and a ok closer...

g.d really nice wordplay on siome lines had a couple good punches and maybe a few personals good opener and a ok closer....

overall vote G.deuce

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Yo, that was a really good battle, y'all both spit shine.

Vocab- Ghost
Structure- G: Deuce
Flow- G: Deuce
Creativity and Punches- G: Deuce

You faced the reaper in a battle, and you bound to lose it.
I ripped his spinal cord out and called it the “SOUND OF MUSIC”

Really liked that bar. It was a closer battle than it looks like I put, but G was just a lil' better in all those categories. This is the first battle i seen of you kidd, & I must say, I'm pretty impressed. Both of y'all just keep doin' what you doin', and hit my battles up, aight?

uppin for votes, only need one more to finish this........

damn this shit got open back up time for a comeback uppin !!!!

uppin for 4 more votez lol leave a link an ill hit u back

umm okay good shit both of ya'll...

STRUCTURE-a tie
PUNCHLINES-ghost...G it look like u was tryin but i wasn't feelin dem shits
WORDPLAY-ghost...
PERSONAL-nun
ENJOYED-ghost354......da reason y i felt ghost shit more is bcuzz it aint take him like 2 days he spit rite on da spot and his shit was type simple but it was enuff da win dis and..g half ya words didn't ryhme so

MY VOTE-GHOST354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?p=118442
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1223071
^^^yo can ya'll hit up dem battles 4 me

anywayz, uppin for some real votes.........................................

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