Ghost354 vs GKillaz05
 

ite i set up now go head an spit

Camera, Lights, Action you just like Micheal Jackson//
You grab a tiny little kid by the dick and start waxin'//
jerking off every single person who gets your vote//
you keep on cumming as it runs down your throat//
you callin' yourself ghost you white from all that cum//
you came to front lines everyone knew you were dumb//
you like to use big words you dont know what they mean//
I also noticed you got the biggest cum stain on your jeans//
you said you were gun rip me so I sat here and waited//
your ass didnt say shit you must be veribally constipated//
you got onto your crew cuz the leader said bend over//
now your silly ass wont be able to sit down for a week//
and your little dick burns every time you take a leak//
gimmie a fuckin break dawg your one pathetic netcee//
your style is like pop you could do a comerical for pepsi//
you just like brittany spears man you singing like a chick//
your whole crew loves you cuz you the only one wit a clit//

holla back...

that waz nice 4 a prewrote piece but ima go head an keystyle real quick

prewrote eh?.. man your a joke.. lets see what you got

on the real dog u bout rappin about to much penis/
u punchz so weak they couldnt hit if i waz a yankee an u waz pedro martinez/
u just a comical cat that got ahold of sum bad crack/
i'll leave ya face in ya lap an put ya tounge on ya sack/
ill whoop yo ass like steven segal on tha pepsi commercial/
without even tryn.. casue u aint shit but a rappin urkel/
that should be singin background for prince in the color of purple/
told u i'd merk u..got batz made out of wrigley pine/
that end up leavin u hooked to that machine wit squigily linez/
talk tuff on the net but u aint shit in the physical form/
u not even luke warm my punchz stingin u more than a bee swarm/
leave u laid out wit paramedicz pumpin air threw ya body/
life took by tha shotty so i guess billy blankz didnt teach u much karate/
got bulletz big enough to knock shaq off hiz pivot/
resurected like michael meyerz go head and reach for yo throat cause u just slit it/

wow dawg you writing a book or something?.. you should focus on writing not runnin your mouth

no 2 battlez in a row pussy boi and noone said how many linez bitch so i just put 15 cocksmoker

wow dawg nice recylced shit, and dont flow to well.. uppin for votes!!

recycled u post tha same shit in everybattle thatz why u alwayz lose bitch

every line u have startz wit you or your an u think that shit waz tite

oh well bitch as nigga uppin 4 votez niggaz need to see threw the fog uppin

your a lil bitch and I took it EZ on you cuz you sounded like a bitch in all your other battles.. win or lose I will take you again

stfu im surpised u didnt use ur i got 1 more vote than u or make that 2 so that makez it 2002 <<< ur famous fuckin line why didnt u use it this time bitch nigga

Gkillaz05 took this just for a better punches.....ghost urs was ight but u seemed a lil lost....i guess its cause uve been battlin alot so i kno how it feels 2 not 2 be able 2 come up wit any good punches....overall pretty good battle could have been better....cant wait 2 see yalls next one...pce

cuz un-like you I dont I can think of new shit, so shut you mouth dawg..

tru back to back battlez drainin fo sho we rematchin regardless thankz for votin

yall can stop freepostin and arguin...
Structure: GKillaz, structure was next to perfect. u got this one
Punches: Ghost, punches were a bit harder, I definitely felt em more.
Flow: GKillaz, I spit em both in my head, and GKillaz's just rolled off the tounge better.
Vocab: Tie.. both ya vocab wasnt nutin special

this was a close battle.. nutin great from both of yall and Ghost's punches were better, but I still feel that the flow is more important so Im a give this to GKillaz...

ghost went way harder.. nice structure.. keept it gangsta an still acked a ass wit tha flow..

gkilla keep workin at it doe

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VOTE GHOST
Y:
gkill came wit preety general flo and didn't seem to personalize it much..no play on name or nuttin like that so u cudda spit that same one against me and i wudn't have known it wuzn't meant for me..plus u used cum too much..that word is played now

Ghost-liked tha way u flowed..i jus felt ya verse more...u used betta punches than gkillaz and ya vocab wuz tha same
NO HATIN GOOD PEOPLE
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118055
YoungStar* vs. Zeet

threatz and ghost35hoe both from TX go fuckin figure

and? u hatin on tx? uppin 4 votez

no I hatin on dick riding votes .... uppin!!!!!!!!!!!

come on peeps... we need 3 more votes... lets go!!!

come on man, all those peoples sittin around doin nothing.. hit this up!

mayn hold up.. who you callin a dick ryder my nigga

uppi n4 votez get this shit over wit

uppin get this shit done wit

uppin for votez leave a link an ill hit your shit up

man hit this up plz.. I will hit yours up only need 3 mre votes .. wont kill 3 of you's to vote

Yo ,this battle was good .Gkillaz that shit about being constipated was funny,
so you get the vote.I'd like to see both of you go at it again.
---Project

uppin!!!! plz hit this up take 2 secounds to enter feedback and vote

if i got a dq vote this one should be 2 ^^ no explaination

first off, you both should be dq'ed for upping so fucking much. Second off you write, this battle is getting slept on hard. Third off, GKillaz05, never say the word "cum" again, sounded like u used it in every other line. Structure, i would say GKillaz, both of u had good stucture, but ghost had one or two stretched out lines (not a big deal)
Personals, Ghosts, GKillaz, ur only one was the one about cum and him being a ghost, and u ruined it with saying that damn word again. Punches, even, both came with a load of decent punches.

v/ghost

for his personals

i always forget ma fuckin link...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118285

ma bad fellas

good battle though

ghOst got this wun........Gkillaz05 u said cum waaaaaaaay 2 much..

da cOnstipated shyt was tigh....buh na, muh vOte go 2 ghOst

Yea I Got To Give This One To The Friendly Ghost :) He Had Better Punches, Personals, Structure, and He Had The Way Better Flow!!!!! ...

Vote: Ghost

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^^ uppin but i aitn knowi waz that friendly lol

Lmfao I Was Fucking With You' ... Your Safe Boi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I liked both of the verses but Gkillaz shit is kinda redundant and I was feelin Ghost on the vocab that and the punchline switcharound is tight as long as it's not an opener. i was definately feelin' Ghost alot more in this battle.

coo explain votez like they are uppin dont sleep