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YoungStar* 04-04-04 09:10 PM

YoungStar* vs. BRi SkEe 42o
 
yo wutup you kno tha rules but for tha record
no hate votes
no b/s votes
no d/r votes
crew votes allowed if they don't contradict above rules
you spit first
check in b4 you spit
best winz..no badd blood

oh and by tha way..youngstar aka thayoungin checkity check

YoungStar* 04-04-04 09:11 PM

and oh yeah u need 75 posts to vote
sorry ppl that don't have that many..

bRi SkEe 42o 04-04-04 09:59 PM

yo im checkin in nigga!!!! here goes!!!

fuck wit me n ya bound ta fall/
cuz my bullets are like pokemon you gotta catch em all/
til u seen me u aint seen a gangsta brawl/
i aint talkin bout wen u was 12, beefin at the mall/
and now ya steppin up to bri skee, so i giva ya madd props/
cuz wat u aint realizin, u bout to get dropped/
im throwin lyrical bows like luda and i cant be stopped/
i kno u tryin 2 bite my style but it cant be copped/
cuz my shit is too fresh, its way above you fella/
u can see me about as well as helen keller/
i feel bad for your mother cuz youre gonna have to tell her/
u cant make it as a rapper so u gotta set up shop in her cellar/
u think your gonna be big, well we all got our own perception/
but im tellin you right now, yours is a deception/
if youre tryin 2 make it as a mc youre goin the wrong direction/
u wanna cap on me, but its all a reflection/
of you as a person, and obviously youre insecure/
thats why wen u step up against me, your speech is gettin slurred/
i thibk its time to admit it, you got beat by a chik/
look rollin on the floor! wats that! o its ya dick!/
im just fuckin playa, but now this battles over/
excuse me, well i roll out in my 2004 range rover

bRi SkEe 42o 04-04-04 09:59 PM

that shit was kinda wack i only had like ten minutes! sry!

YoungStar* 04-04-04 10:08 PM

nice verse
i guess
no badd blood
ima gurl fyi..and wut r u a guy or gurl.

YoungStar* 04-04-04 10:23 PM

checkit
Yo bre skee is a he she a.k.a a shim
ma spit so heavy that it goes thru tha rim

yo ya verse wuz aight..enuff to beat me..NO
ur lower than a bitch, ur a wanna b HO

so wurr is ya flo, i thought that u wud bring her
i called it a she, cuz ya'll wurr on JERRY SPRINGER

ya'll havin a conflict between good and badd
its like dick or clit..and u have only a clit to grab

u call yaself a rappa, i beg to differ
i take more lives than tha old GRIIM REAPER

i broke ma rule to take on a newb and look wut i did
don't pay to 4git wut u say, cuz now there's a missin kid

i'm x rated becuz i'm xtremely insane wit ma game
ma spit is real LIVE wish u cud say tha same dame

neva gittin on ma level remainin tha same trick
do u suck dick...or do u jus bite ur own clit??

Willa 04-04-04 10:38 PM

noth flows were off
both could work on vocab and personals
i think youngs punches hit a lil harder
was a good battle id like 2 c a rematch

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Inception 04-04-04 10:44 PM

vote youngstar had more personalz an harder punchz both had good structure bri skee started off strong but fell off must been cause u only had 10 minutez but thatz my vote

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GUNFAMGENERAL254 04-04-04 10:52 PM

To I Give This One To Skee Even Though Both Structures Were Tight His First Three Or Four Lines Sealed The Deal Good Battle Though
Youngstar U Need To Step It Up I've Seen Better..................and Alot Worse Lmao!!!!!!!!!!

SINISTER 04-04-04 10:53 PM

I think youngstar came lot harder n i was feelin her flow, she had more personals... Good battle tho

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bRi SkEe 42o 04-05-04 11:49 AM

i am a G I R L...yea id like 2 see a rematch as well..it wasnt the best either of us could do i kno that..cmon ppl vote vote vote!!!!!

~Lady Fiya~ 04-05-04 04:55 PM

This pretty close hmm...
 
youngstar ya personals was good but i really wasn't feelin' it, bris kee: i kno ya coulda came a lot harder but it was easy goin'... but overall y'all need a rematch but Skee, fa now ya got mines... bring out ya best cuz we kno it's in ya. Youngstar no bad blood towards ya. Check me out and vote my battle... ppl.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118237

Crossword 04-05-04 05:26 PM

iight. This how it goes. Youngstars and Bri's were close. They both were a little off on flow, and personals were good. But if i had to say, youngin's punches hit harder. THats what gave her the battle.

V/ Youngin

YoungStar* 04-05-04 05:28 PM

aight that wuzn't BS so i don't think there'll b any objections to that vote
VOTE VOTE VOTE
GOOD BATTLE BRI
NO BAD BLOOD

White Light 04-05-04 05:39 PM

ok well good lines from both... but i thought BRI had better flow and structure and personals... but Youngerstar had really good punchlines and pretty good flow...
Winner BRI SKEA

1 VOTE 4 U... U VOTE 4 ME

YoungStar* 04-05-04 05:44 PM

UPPP UPPP UPPPIIJNNNNNNN
UP UP AND AWAY..KUNIVA SED HE CAN'T VOTE CUZ HE AND YOU ON THA SAME CRU AND HE CAN'T VOTE AGAINST HiS OWN CRU MEMBA SO YAH
DON KNO IF HE WUZ GONNA VOTE AGAINST YOU OR NOT BUT YEAH

anxiety 04-05-04 05:46 PM

i havent even peeped the verses in this battle, but could u hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118235
ill hit up a battle of urs u dont have with ma crew member

YoungStar* 04-05-04 06:14 PM

WTF those votes wurr ova 1 line and xplained enuff
Bri did you report that or did strobe jus comin pokin in shitt
wtf...i want my damn votes back
if its ova 50 charactaz its postable and if its ova one line its xplained enuff

accomplishment 04-05-04 06:20 PM

Yo two clsoe battle i think they met on all catoagories except i think youngins flow and structre was batter than the other girls you both are elevatin good keep it up

vote younstar

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YoungStar* 04-05-04 06:32 PM

UPITY UP UPPPPIINNNNN
yepper
i play drums, bass, and piano
I GOT MADD SKILLZX

bRi SkEe 42o 04-05-04 07:54 PM

definetly a good battle...neck an` neck!!!!! more votes people!!!!!!!!!!!! no bad blood my nigga we coo we coo!!!

YoungStar* 04-08-04 03:53 AM

hell yeah we cool
but me and that fucker strobe ain't
wut tha fuck y u keep disqualifyin my votess
they meet the rules
ova one line
and well xplained
so wut tha fuck is REALLY goin on

bRi SkEe 42o 04-08-04 11:36 AM

we need this to be a FAIR BATTLE stop disqualifyin votes tht count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yeah and uuuuuuuppin for votes my niggas lets get it really poppin off!!!!

YoungStar* 04-08-04 01:25 PM

THANK YOU BRISKEE
we can't git this fuckin closed becuz he's disqualifyin erything
UPPIN FOR SOME FUCKIN 20LINE XPLAINATIONS CUZ HE DQs ERYTHANG ELSE
damn
pissin me off

Shadows edge 04-08-04 02:24 PM

I think this one was tight, but I give it to skee.

In terms of flow, young had it by a bit, the middle of skee's bit was a little messed up with flow, the words just didn't really fit right, imo.

Punches go to bree though, started off strong and got a bit weak but never let up and always staying fresh, young kinda stuck with the he/she thing and it's kinda old and tired and the punches weren't too original or anything.

I've seen you do better young.

bRi SkEe 42o 04-08-04 04:12 PM

nice nice good feedback people still uppin 4 votes!! STOP DISQUALIFYIN!!!! just for the record lol

bRi SkEe 42o 04-08-04 08:16 PM

yo we need votes in this bitch so we can close this battle!!!!!!!!!! cmon guys!!!! upppppin for votes!

YoungStar* 04-08-04 10:34 PM

lol bRi
uppin
gosh i'm fuckin tired of this battle
wanna git it behind me..no offense bri
but damn
close tha battle people

SPuLâ„¢ 04-09-04 12:32 AM

yo, tight battle. Both of y'all verses were pretty good. You guys, I mean girls, should have a rematch, cuz all those votes gettin' DQed and shit. Anyways, I was feelin' both of y'alls flos. They went nicely. You were even on that. Your punches were both good. But I think Young hit a little harder wit hers. So my vote goes to Young. good battle though. HAve a rematch. Good job by both.

YoungStar* 04-09-04 12:35 AM

if strobe disqualifies that i quit...u can have tha win and we'll do a rematch

L.I. 04-09-04 12:38 AM

ok vote - younstar
bri ya flow was off...u rhymed really bout nothin...u had no punches...u were jus talkin n rhymin......get direct punches....learn personals, multis, and werk on a better structure....young ya shit wasnt too great either....u got the win for havin some ok punches....ive seen better shit by u....should come hard all the time cuz this battle makes u look wack....werk on personals and multis....ok battle
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/forumdisplay.php?f=13

YoungStar* 04-09-04 12:45 AM

acceptable...

bRi SkEe 42o 04-09-04 11:05 AM

haha i kno wat ur sayin this battle has been goin on TOO LONG!!!! cmon people 2 more votes for either one of us and this shit is done!!!! uppin!!!! COME ON!!!

bRi SkEe 42o 04-09-04 12:51 PM

Uppin For Votes People Can We Please Just Get This Battle Done With!

bRi SkEe 42o 04-09-04 02:02 PM

p l e a s e v o t e s o w e c a n g e t t h i s b a t t l e o v e r a n d d o n e

w i t h ! ! ! !

bRi SkEe 42o 04-09-04 10:17 PM

seriously uppin for votes...this is getting ridiculous...

YoungStar* 04-10-04 12:58 AM

this is random illness..jus mean
uppin
pleeeez vote..we will vote on your battles if you PM us wit links
come onnnnn
OMG..ima die b4 this is closed

bRi SkEe 42o 04-10-04 01:49 PM

on doggs!!!! come on just make up some shit if you want like young sed well vote on your battles!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-10-04 02:14 PM

Aye Yo Checkkity Checck It lol

Check Young's Lines:

so wurr is ya flo, i thought that u wud bring her
i called it a she, cuz ya'll wurr on JERRY SPRINGER

ya'll havin a conflict between good and badd
its like dick or clit..and u have only a clit to grab

^^Nice Punches Wich Got Connected And They Heated' .. Also Nice Structure & Flow... Probably The Best Lines Right THere' ...

Vote: Young

bRi SkEe 42o 04-11-04 03:59 PM

uppin for votes good citizens of the rb!!!!


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