Atticus VS Kuniva
 

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regular rules apply

check in then drop but its gettin late i gotta wake up early cash my check and cop some gear. we'll finish this pointless shit tommorrow kuniva...

aight, i may not spit tonight, just checkin in so you know i aint gon no show ur ass

so i guess online ima beat the fuckin shit outa atticus
fuck online, lets do this in real life, whats ur address bitch
im battlin atticus, i dont need no more advantages
so imma go first, while u pre-write eatin sandwhices
this mothafucka actually callin me whack? can u believe this
sayin ur not tryin? lets see wut u got then, no lyrical clevage
ok, he cant flow, cant rhyme, cant type, and just cant spit
ur really pissen me off now, ive had enough of ur antics
i know ill win this anyway, so should i got ten lines or more?
i could go for ever, but this guys bed times at 4 (pm)
he is literally haven dreams bout beatin me
but keep dreamin if ur thinken ull be beseatin me
nice, afta this imma be 5-1, sweat dreams kid
i ripped this bitch so hard, aint no need to link this

shit i been done aight i'll drop whatever...

As I approach right now
I see he takes my personality
for one of a rude
I fine tapped your mind
made you think right
slapped U now U orbit the moon
fuck that if u wanna see me lose
how u gonna ask a slew of niggas
for quick votes and judgements if your jaw can't move?
gather your 'peeps' now bitch for 'gang bangs'
they'll see you in the morgue soon
kuniva Your low level of thoughts on a childs plain
couldn't even maintain 1st grade test brains
nigga I 'pop dub's' wit 'sub techs' till the 'clip drains'
like them niggas in your clique you 'hype type' and 'bitch made'
now initiate your lop sided arrogance on this subject
this is 2 any1 in your crew that wanna get rub next
talkin mess when its all just me exposing your dumbness
show U U 'regress' like 'rewound process'
lemme blow your brain factually
N nigga know this I'll stomp your eyes where your mind rest

i thought it would be tommorrow nigga? i was goin wait till tommorrow but i drop when u drop... w/e

i can't believe u dropped at this time... i g2 sleep shit..

Kuniva won this easy atticus ya words didnt even ryhme...some of kuniva's ryhmes where hot so my vote goes to kuniva aiight

do i really need to up this shit?

kuniva: that shit was aight, but still good enough to be atticus 5/10

atticus: i just wasn't feelin it, come wit harder punches and shit that rhymes 3/10

win: kuniva
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damn what level am i on, im losin 2 everybody i battle is my rhymes that corney?.... uppin

seriously dawg, i aint bein mean here, but ur not even rhymin

ALL of urs don't rhyme either nigga...

diagnosis on line 6: this+ 7: clevage(doesn't rhyme correctly), line 8: spit+ 9: antics,(shit don't rhyme right) line 13: kid+ 14: this (another bar that doesn't rhyme)

u r really illiterate...can't help but be a hypocrite huh nigga?... uppin

yeah, but u rhymed "now" with "personality", lol, nice.

aight
 

Both of y'all niggaz need to work on rhymin' your shit better, so flow really goes to no one. Atticus had more multis and better vocab, and his punches was better too. I think both of y'all need to work on the flow and structure a lil' more, but there was some hott shit in both of y'allz shitz. Gotta go wit Atticus on this one though

whoooooooooooooooooooooooooo, multies, he didnt even rhyme, maybe read the battle faggot, CounTREE Jay=blacklist

Att, your structure is so bad, people are not getting your rhyme, i understood all of your verse, but thats only because i knew how to read, keep your rhymes on the same line, and if you gotta stretch it let the 'idiot' know, go out of your way to make it look simple and easy to follow

Your structure now is

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/ - means your rhyme, this is just an example, but you should be able to see what i mean, people arnt going to see where your rhyme is. It needs to be like...

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And if you HAVE to stretch the bar, LET OTHERS KNOW

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^ I wouldn't suggest stretching a bar long then half its length - or it will mess your flow.

Anyway i think K' won this, after reading and getting both, id say att's downfall is (apart from his structure) that its a battle and you need hard punchs and nice little flow, make it funny, i didnt see much, no fresh concepts either... just think of jokes and add em in.... So, i vote KUNIVA

dont know how Atticus got one vote, he is horible man, I didnt even use one punch line when I battled him and I know it sucked but better then what he can do.. you need to work on flow bud and get some rytmes. good job kuniva you get my vote.. dont really need to say anymore

Yo ,ya niggaz is arguing like bitchs.Cut it out kids.Anyway my vote goes to Atticus because Kuniva was stumbling like a motherfcker. respect goes 2 both 4 trying.
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^wtf, i was stumbling like a motherfucker???

I vote Kuniva ..ya both lacked in some of the rhymes....Kuniva was slightly better and i think attica was good overall kuniva wins (but hardly) i

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people, please read the battles, i mean, yall sound like retards sayin barely, and we know u didnt read it aka

FOOLS WUT THA FUCK IS WRONG WIT YA'LL
Kuniva wudda won jus off his rhymes
atticus tha structure dawg..i read yours three tymes and still didn't find them rymes
Kuniva..ur structurew wuzn't that good either but it rhymed and looked betta than ATTICUS
Come fresha both of ya'll..and some stuff that goes HA HA THAT WUZ NICE
u kno keep it interestin
not close VOTE-KUNIVA

y'all ppl and them hate votes, if ya good ya good if ya not ya not... my nigga Kuniva dogged walked this nigga he gon' win and i'm not votin'... Nice try Atticus not hate from this chick... Real f/emcees fa ever reppin' tha crew--

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