MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS. Missfiyagurl
 

rules: spit ya lines 15 min- 30 max if ya fall short it's up ta the judges
check in then drop, u first...

yada yada y'all kno the deal vote after ya post ya reasonin'
i'm tired and lazy but i am ready...

Ustedes saben! Tratame...
Y'all know! Try Me.

i'll vote on this after u both drop....have fun wit it and theres noo beefin....holla back kid...pce

I NEED JUST 1 PERSON ONE OF YALL 2 VOTE ON THIS BATTLE...LIKE I SAID I'LL HIT URS UP AFTER UR DONE BUT I NEED THIS HONEST VOTES FROM WHOEVA SO THIS THREAD CAN BE CLOSED CHECK IT OUT.....
(NOT SAYIN U HAVE 2 VOTE FOR ME)http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...045#post1221045

^ but u will, because not much of an opponent

i'm gonna give him some time cuz he is online but 12:30 is my limit i got school in tha mornin' i might drop mine n-e-wayz

missfiyagurl since u waitin for him to spit his stuff can u pleeeeeeeeeeeease pleeeeeeeease check out these 2 battles for me and vote honestly......i need these threads 2 be closed....so if theres anyway u can do that id appreciate it alot....thanks
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118066
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117946

jea..and umm kun or whuteva da fukk his name is cant vote...

u nice? nah first get ya game up then speak..i dont know y dis dame wanna beef //
u cant rap its like u be "NUTTiN CaLENDER'S" cuzz u stay "CUMMiN WEEK" //
i keep heat 2 da guns jay got da army-had-dos //
eva seen da "SiMPSON'S"?? well mah everybody "SLEEPS ON ya BaRS" like "BaRNEy aT MOE'S" //
mah u week and its clear...but keep talkin i'll amke sure a couple bullets reach da hair //
and leave u surronded by "SHELLS" but u aint gon on da "BEaCH iN a CHaiR" //
only way u gon see a "PLaTiNUM-PLaQUE" is if u bit "SiSQO'S HaiR" and didn't "BRUSH ya TEETH 4 a yEaR" //
when im clutchin i'll make sure im bustin da tec u cant fuck with dis vet //
and ya rap career gon like a "SWOOSH" cuzz its "NOTHiN BUT NET" //
i know wish they take marv....but i'll come da chi town with a.r and shells //
but when dem "HaMMER'S" come out i wanna see u play hard as "NaiLS" //
u "SOFT" and like "NaS OLD SONG" mah "iT aiNT HaRD Da TELL" //
but seriously i dont find u hott...fuck around they gon find u shot //
with ya "HEaRT iN OKLaND" so u could "CaLiFORNia LUV" like u "PaC" //
u wastin my time i got papah da get and different tecs da order //
datz y rite now im in a "BENZ" while u stuck on in a "iNTERNET-EXPLORER" //

jea...datz enuff ummm ppl who votin pleez explain ya shit or it wont count

no shit dawg, we dont do crew votes at A-1, but we will comment

ummm r u rappin in here dickhead??? nah i aint think so...1 ya name out dis post pleez we dont no comments just votes

alright i wont comment, ill pm fiya with my comment, but could u drop a vote here, and if u have another active battle drop a link, really wanna close this battle.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118096

fell asleep and shit but here it is
 

don’t quit ya day job, don’t forget to bag it/
“we got a spill in aisle 3, sir, it’s paper not plastic”/
time’s up, say ya last words and phrases/
i’m movin’ up, while ya still on tha lame list/
french kiss my lines right along wit’ my ass/
take ya time, write it again, boo it’s ya last/
ya think ya hot now ur thoughts r bypassed/
say anotha word & question why u replaced by this outcast/
juries call!, judges disagree why?/
ur downfall, evidence tru- ur proof a lie/
enclosed and shipped off into tha land of bullshit/
Jehovah they callin’, u a real witness/
the lord Christ is my passion/
99 sins and fa 1 i’m still fastin’/
this tha real world and it’s daily/
ignore wut ya see ta raise tha baby/
Jezebel’s spirit found me last night/
they say i’m too young fa the spiritual fight/
but it’s ova young gurl? yep it’s fiya/
blazin’ is wut i do, my pride, love and desire/
Diablos can’t get me! Can y’all run that test again?/
under high annointin’, i struggle til my end/
lyrically, this bitch is too gifted/
emotionally, internal cries but smile r presented/
the true me lies straight in tha core/
seizures scramble my brains, but i want more/
breathin’ ain’t easy, respirators r pointless/
life is fa me, now i believe my story is worth it/
spiritually, my soul is liftin’/
physically, my body is driftin’/

good night y'all tell me about it tomorrow...

uppin' ta votes... make sho ya leave ya comments ppl!

................word wake da fuck up ppl.........

my vote goes for marvol, I felt he had better punchs, miss flowed better but didnt have many punches.. everything else is even.. next batle step up on the punches miss!

hit these up please:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...03&page=3&pp=15
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118165
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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my vote goes to marv.. he had better punches/ a better flow and was able to get more across with less in my opinion
miss rapped about herself more and thats not what suppose to gon on in a battle

Vote Marv

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...98&page=2&pp=15

m-a-r-v-o-l-o-u-s had brought it in this battle sick ass metaphorz and punch linez almost every bar didnt see personalz that much and structure waz a lil off but that aint shit aywayz

fiyagirl had better structure a few nice punchz but i dotn thank u waz really into it u almost complimented ur self az much az u dissed him

vote/marvolous

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jea my structure is kind of fucked up...but goodlookin tho i got u

umm uppin 4 votes man niggaz need da wake da fuck up and vote

marv had that really good "platinum" diss, i like the worldplay there, but I think some of the other stuff misses. flow is decent, but could use some work (not too important to many anyway, so whatever). miss had really nice flow and nice rhymes, the rap is readable and everything but it's not really a "battle rap" so I give this one to marv.

My vote goes to marvolous, he had better punches, structure, vocab, flow, I think his verse was all round better.
Missy you had a solid verse but you were just blown away, if you had some better vocab, punches an wordplay you would have stood a chance.
Structure: Marv
Flow: Marv
Punches: Marv
Wordplay: Marv
Vocab: Marv
Personals: Marv
Good Battle
Vote: Marv

jea goodlookin out niggaz........4-0....................

^^^yo can niggaz fuckin vote already damm.............we will return da favor just vote and explain ya shit

yo this battle goes to marvol
Marvol-good rhyme, not enouph punches but over all a good flow i lik the style of your lyrics but you can flow alot better than this good structure i just felt that the rhyme could have went in a better direction
Miss-i only have one thing to say. i like your verse its quick and it gets to the point no bullshit add in words just to take up space. the only problem is that i didnt fell that your lines ryhmed. but still a valient effort. good work both of you