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DirtBoy69 04-05-04 09:48 AM

restricted vs. lryical mc(forced word match)
 
deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: immortal,surround,centeralize,harmony

Restricted 04-05-04 09:28 PM

Aight....Looking To Be A Hot Battle..

.::Checkity Check Bitches::.

Good Luck Lyrical

~R~

HeXen 04-06-04 06:53 AM

~aiight..checkin' dis is guna be off da hook......good luck Restricted.....~

Dis Is Were Dis League Starts Gettin' Seroius

Pz

HeXen 04-08-04 06:08 AM

Restricted Immortal To Dope He Is Immune,
His Inflicked Rhyme Cetralized Around Out Of Tune,
The ~R~ At The Rear Of Each Post Has 1 Meaning,
~R~ Equals Restricted To Wack A peach Its Seeming,
He Suround By Bitin' He Has Produced,
Found Out By Profound Biting Re-used,
Couldn't Sucker Punch Hosting A Plunger,
The Lyrics Hes Contesting froze As They Cunger,
Your Geens Damaged Kid Dats every Clear,
The Last time you kicked dope no-one was ere,
The way you bring harmony to the stage in rampage,
The crowed go statick raisn' the fact callin' you "sadge",
Restriced Commited to herble verb produce,
The way he spits dumbfuck shows his cell reduce,
13-0 13 is unlucky number to be battlin' riskey,
Verb lumber as his wackness is more powerful than wiskey,
"back of bitch before restricted get his dick out,
Hes Perscripted you like his D/R votes bumbs mcs till cum spout,
Personaly dis-armbin' him self with herb,
Restricted calmin his nevers on his wackest verbs,


Yo Explanation..."sadge" = is a type of herb used for cookin'....
"Back Off bitch" its under his name on this profile...

Restricted 04-08-04 01:09 PM

Aight Check Dis..
 
Aiyo..Aiyo...

Round 3....Yea!

Check Da Mic....3....2...1...

We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day,You Can Command A Win, But Re$tricted Will Just Take It Away/
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air,
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There!/
Performing Lyrical Magic, Just Call Me The Houdini Of This Game, Making This Cat Disappear, No Matter, No One Even Knows Your Name/
Might As Well Call Me LiL-Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse, This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse/
My Verbal Anticts, Putting Lyrical Stress On Ya Heart, Verbal Attack, Cerebal Extract, Lyrical MC Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat/
This Kid Has Repitition, Cause He Spits The Same Shit In Each Verse, Also Has Down-Syndrome, That's Why He Don't Do Audio, Much Slurs To Be Dispersed/
Like Black Nazi's, This Kid Is Getting Denied Acceptance,
Getting Laughed At, Everytime He Try's and Ryhme A Sentence/
Go Back, Relapse, Cause Contesting My Skill Will Led To Death, Need A Rest, My Punches To Your Stomach, Got You Lacking Da Breath/
Can't Fuck With The Best, I'm Immortal, You've Stumbled Upon Greatness, Like Elly'N Nes, I'm An Undestructable Emcee, You Just Can't Faze This/
Listen To The Harmony, This Kid Can Crack Up Sum Funny Ass Lines, But Couldn't Centralize A Ryhme, With The Power Off Dope, Surround'N Ya Mind/

Aight....Just Sumthing Small...

~R~

NiCe DroP LyRicaL!

Enygma 04-08-04 03:00 PM

This was a pretty good battle........

Lyrical MC: Pretty good. You hit some pretty good personals and flow was on point. I was anticipatin something a little bit better though........

Restricted: Same goes for you. Good personals and I liked the flow..........But I was also lookin for somethin a little better from you. It looks like neither of you guys tried that hard.

Anyway, Someone has gotta win so I chose Restricted for........

Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air,
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There!/


Vote: Restricted

HeXen 04-08-04 04:00 PM

yo cant just do i coin toss to see who wins dawg^^^^^

HeXen 04-08-04 04:02 PM

yo cant just do i coin toss to see who wins dawg^^^^^:D

Enygma 04-08-04 04:27 PM

I just thought that he had the best line in the battle. Since the battle was so close I went by the best line......... Therefore, I gave the win to R

Restricted 04-08-04 05:23 PM

Aight...

Respect All Votes..

R-1 L-0

Uppin..

streetsweepa 04-08-04 05:28 PM

restricted won no doubt

PoLiFicK 04-08-04 05:32 PM

it was a good battle both of yall really came strong and di ya thing ya ming

lyrical MC-
punches-9/10
flow-9/10
structue-9/10
vocab-9/10
overall-8/10

re$tricted
punches-10/10
flow-9/10
vocab-9/10
structure-9/10
overall-9/10
vote ^^

winner-restricted

DirtBoy69 04-09-04 08:25 AM

breakdown for lyrical mc:

flow:flow was striaght forward you didn't pull anything out that was amazing but good job still 7/10

volcab:good use here 7/10

punches:some good attacks mainly played ideas but they worked my fav,"Couldn't Sucker Punch Hosting A Plunger," 7/10

overall:really solid verse 21/30

breakdown for restricted:

flow:good job not as solid as in the first couple of weeks in this league but still good 7/10

volcab:amazing throughout the entire verse you dropped a good use of words here best part of the verse 10/10

punches:alittle low this week on anything that really stuck i think best line,"Like Black Nazi's, This Kid Is Getting Denied Acceptance" but aside from that it was pretty open no personals really 6/10

overall:23/30 good verse with a solid flow and amazing use of volcab

vote--restricted better volcab and shit the punches were weak but

Restricted 04-09-04 08:34 AM

How Did My Verse End Up 23/30......and His 21/30..

And Him Still Get Ya Vote?

LoL...

~R~

DirtBoy69 04-09-04 08:42 AM

shit i did it again i don't know i look at the thread name and if i liked the verse i read second i put that name i mixed it up did it last week too i'm changing it don't worry

lil jon 04-09-04 02:35 PM

i msorry but restriced is being D/R...you can see dis coz this was a close battle and lyrical mc doesnt deserve to have no votes...lyrical mc did come herder with personals and punches....restricted...ok but not good as mc...
vote = lyrical

Restricted 04-09-04 04:28 PM

LoL Coming From A Herb...YOu Ain't Even Close To Being Able To Vote In Dis League...

Neways...

R-3 L-1

~R~

Rappin' Master 04-10-04 06:22 AM

yo

restricted...I liked your verse, You had a good structure althought i wasnt really feeling your flow that much. your punches and personals hit hard. Your vocab was top but your creativity wasnt really there. Good verse none the less tho

Lyrical...I also liked your verse to. You had a flow that i was feeling and I liked your structure too. You also came hard with your punches and personals and I feel that you came just abit harder but both of ya'll came very hard. you wordplay wasnt as good as restricted but it wa still good but your creativity was better.

Overall it wasd a close battle but lyrical gets my vote as I was feeling his verse abit more

Pz people
vote lyrical

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-10-04 11:02 AM

Aye Yo Check This Shit' ...

Im Going To Tell You "Re$TricTed" You Had Me Lost In Some Lines' ... Because Your Flow, & Your Structure Was Out Of Proportion And Shit' ... But Over All I Liked Your Verse It Was Heated' .. Threw Punches Wich Got Connected... And Hit Hard** But You Do Need To Work On Your Structure A Bit Because It Was A Bit Off Hand' No Disrespect,

Check Re$TricTed's Lines'

Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air,
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There!/

^^Them Lines Are Heated Punches That Got Connected (Most Deff Best Lines)

LyriCal Mc I Like Your Style' .. Its A Bit Like Mine' But, It Seems You Hardly Put Any Effort Into Your Verse I Mean The Punches Are There And They Hit, Your Personals Are.. Tight' .. But Come Harder Next Time, Unlike Re$TricTed Your Flow & Structure' Were Cool,

Check Lyrical MC's Lines

The ~R~ At The Rear Of Each Post Has 1 Meaning,
~R~ Equals Restricted To Wack A peach Its Seeming,
He Suround By Bitin' He Has Produced,
Found Out By Profound Biting Re-used,

^^Dropping Decent Bar's And Good Punches' - Nice'Lines

Punches: Re$TricTed
Personals: Lyrical
Structure: Lyrical
Flow: Lyrical
Creativity: Re$TricTed
Character: Lyrical
Lyrical Content: Re$TricTed

Im Going To Have To Go With Lyrical This Time Around With My "Vote" But Re$TricTed' Didn't Loose By Much' ... I Would Say Both Verses Were Heated!! I Enjoyed Both Of Them

Vote: Lyrical MC

Restricted 04-10-04 11:49 AM

Aight...

3-3....

Upping Dis Shit...

~R~

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-10-04 06:03 PM

Uppppppppppppppin This Shit For My Boy's

Re$TricTed & Lyrical MC

Don't Sleep On This Shit Ya'll

C'Mon Drop Some Honest Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SeRvIcE 04-11-04 05:01 AM

I'm gonna have to go with restricted this was some close shit you two both came through droppin some hot shit but i think restricted got this shit by just a hair big ups to both yall

DirtBoy69 04-12-04 07:54 AM

4-3 restricted wins


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