CounTREE Jay vs. Triple_N
 

5-10 bars
No d/r or hate votes
No recyclin'
5 votes wins
3-0 ko
U spit first

ah'ight son that shit is cool wit me I'm dropping right now

You wanna fuck wit me, then u leavin' here on a gurney/
Cuz your origins gay, your parents were "bert & ernie"/
I'll crush u, an roll you up in a ball on any given day/
drive down south, take shots on ya court, jus to show off my "countree jay"/
I knew I'd bust ya ass at first glance, face facts u have no chance/
Cuz I'll vandalize ya countree ranch, then hang ya ass from "da branch"/
You say rappin', writin', an recordin is ya life, to me that's funny/
Cuz like a broke ATM you ain't never gon' make no money/
If you sent applications to MTV you'd still never get "made"/
Cuz ya ryhmes got as much substance as da fart I jus laid/

Hold that son, lets me hear sumthin' ^^^^^^^

aight
 

I'm sure it didn't take much time for that rhyme to get written/
You talk so much shit, I thought your face was shittin'/
Nah, Jay ain't from the Southern Region/
But I spit so dirty, I know why niggaz believin'/
Come at Jay, it's ends wit your family grievin'/
Could end up like B.I.G. & 'Pac and just die for MCin'/
Nah, fuck that, they shoes you couldn't even shine/
My lyrics like guns, they be blowin' your mind./
Nigga I give you credit, I can tell you gave it your all/
But I you got a small dick, so why you can't find your balls?/
You a classic example of a nigga that bark but don't bite./
And seem more lost than a deer caught in the headlites./
This nigga most be from the KKK, sayin' he gonna lynch me,/
Jay lose a battle, nah I'm stuck in this niggaz dream, somebody pinch me./

aight

uppin' 4 votes, holla

Really good battle nigga, you came wit it

Ya son, you had a tight verse ya self playa much respect

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Can I get some votes on this come on y'all^^^^^^^^

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it's usually quality...not quantity...but both of you had imagery...punches..personals...it was a tie..but Jays verse was longer...and i really liked this line by Jay

This nigga most be from the KKK, sayin' he gonna lynch me,/
Jay lose a battle, nah I'm stuck in this niggaz dream, somebody pinch me./

my vote: jay...good battle

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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

You know I had to check this battle out since I'm facing you, Triple N, in the league. You brought some tight flows but lacked creativity, so here how it goes.
Triple N
creativity - 6/10
punchlines - 8/10
word usage - 7/10
flow - 7/10 (To original)
control - 8/10
total - 36
Country Jay
creativity - 8/10
punchlines - 8/10
word usage - 7/10
flow - 7/10 (Same as N)
control 8/10
total - 38

You both had real simple flows but Jay won with his punchlines, especially the last one. His ending was hot. Its always good to end like that.

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umm damm niggaz datz votin dotn know whut da fuck a punchline is 4 real

STRUCTURE-shouldn't count...so its a tie
PUNCHLINES-triple n...he was spittin punches..jay u wasn't dogg
WORDPLAY-umm i aint really see nun
CREATIVITY-triple n...he had some clever shit
PERSONALS- triple dis line rite here...I knew I'd bust ya ass at first glance, face facts u have no chance/
Cuz I'll vandalize ya countree ranch, then hang ya ass from "da branch"/
^^^DaTZ HOTT
ENJOYED- triple n.....he got dis shit all around man..i battle in da hood all day so when i vote im votin like how would a nigga verse sound if they was battlin off da net and i think triple got dis
my VOTE -TRIPLE N

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=18442
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118237
^^^^return da favor niggaz and dont give me a fuckin hate cuzz i aint vote 4 u

I Want In
 

I want next on a battle, win or loser, prefferably the winner, I'm new to this so i'm not sure how to battle anyone. Get at me if you feel like you can make me a new victim!

To this nigga Marvelous, I ain't gettin' at you, cause i agree that the votin' on this site is kinda retarded wit the structure and vocab, niggaz vote on stupid shit. But how you can say I didn't have no punchlines in my shit, I think you need to peep that again. And Saddom, if you wanna battle, I ain't sayin' ima rip you or anything, but yeah, I'll battle you fam.

Oh and Saddom, if you gonna free post on my shit, at least fukin' vote man.

my vote goes to Jay, but it was a close battle.. both flowed well, I just like Jay's punches a little bit better, step up on the punches Triple_N and you will be dope..
vote-Jay

yo man can you ugys hit up my new battle I need like 3 more votes to K-O him. . thx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

Wow this was a 1 sided battle

Punchs -jay
personals -jay
Flow/Structure-jay
creativity-jay
multi's -jay
metah's-jay

ok triple had a very poor verse really wasn't feelin it thought u had good creativity, but ur punchs where soft, and u talked about what u would do to him haha so ghey. Jay solid verse very creative thought u had the better punchs, and personals I liked that dick to small so u can't find ur ballz line thought that was very funny

my vote-jay

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Ya'll On The Look Out' .. Check This Shit

Ok No Bullshit....

I Like Triple_N's Verse, Now Thats The Sharpest Ive Seen Ya Spit, Pretty Good, I Like From Both Of Ya'll, Haha Nice Nice, This Competition Bringin Out The Best Shit I See in This Site For A While, Triple_N's Cleanest Verse From You So Far lol

Check Triple_N's Lines

You wanna fuck wit me, then u leavin' here on a gurney/
Cuz your origins gay, your parents were "bert & ernie"/

There You Got WordPlay And An Alright Punchline Better Than Most Of Jay's.

These lines below is multis plus a good punch lines.

I'll crush u, an roll you up in a ball on any given day/
drive down south, take shots on ya court, jus to show off my "countree jay"/
I knew I'd bust ya ass at first glance, face facts u have no chance/
Cuz I'll vandalize ya countree ranch, then hang ya ass from "da branch"/


And a strong final verse to finish it all off.

You say rappin', writin', an recordin is ya life, to me that's funny/
Cuz like a broke ATM you ain't never gon' make no money/
If you sent applications to MTV you'd still never get "made"/
Cuz ya ryhmes got as much substance as da fart I jus laid/

See Thats a Proper Verse, Droping Decent Bars

Votes Should Be Conucted on

personals: Jay
punches: Triple_N
Flow: Jay
Multis: Triple_N
Wordplay: Triple_N
Lyrical Content: Triple_N

Its easy to say Over all .....Triple_N

(this is a well explained vote)

how they sayin this iz 1 sided krazy bitchz

tripple n came out tryna k.o. this kid punchz from the opener and closer all threw shit waz hot even had good ass personalz best part of it

I'll crush u, an roll you up in a ball on any given day/
drive down south, take shots on ya court, jus to show off my "countree jay"/
I knew I'd bust ya ass at first glance, face facts u have no chance/
Cuz I'll vandalize ya countree ranch, then hang ya ass from "da branch"/

jayz shit waz tite 2 shit flowed well but the punchz werent az hard az triple nz had some nice personalz though but punchz werent hittin az hard

vote/triple n

yo my man jay spit and kills it um trip u iight but u just not as good as jay so i'm gonna give it to jay

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Uppin for votes, votes needed^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

What I wanna know is how all these niggaz said I won and I only got 2 fuckin' votes? Niggaz need to vote at the top of this shit! Aight, keep those HONEST votes comin, cause that's what we lookin' for here.

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yo y'all lets get somes votes on here, favor will be returned jus leave ya link, holla

CJ Got this shit that dream line was tight and also bout the face shtten..triple N had some decent lines aswell but i just wasnt feelin them as much ..good battle keep droppin



Vote:CJ

You guys have to fuckin' explain your fuckin' votes. I'm startin' to get pissed :cussing:

i say that it's really close, but i could flow out tripple_N's better in my head, so he gets my vote

Well explained vote needed, favor will be returned jus leave a link

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country jay you did it again you amaze me but you need to battle some one good like ME that triple n is a joker hes a clown he syucks

yo this battle is crazy
 

yo jay u spit it real good but you lack in word usage but do'nt get me wrong ya flow was sick.

triple you had good punches but i don't think it was good enought

this battle was a tuff decesion but overall i have to give it to jay

i gotta give this one to triple n to me his verse hit hard from start to finish. no disrespect to jay you laid an insane drop to u both gave it your all. you both had flow you both had structur both of ur punches hit hard. but i geuss that jay lost the battle by bringing up the size of triple ns dick ive been hearing ametuers drop those exact same lines in grade school its the same shit ive heared over and over and over again. so to break it down i wasnt even going to vote on this cuz it was so close but it was that one line that swayed my vote.

no hate here just speaking my mind awsome battle to the both of yous