MC_DooM vs L.I.
 

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RULES
No biting
No hate votes
No dickriding
No feeding
10 lines

told me to spit first....ill check in afta u......than ill spit........aight........

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drop yo shit....

aight checked in................be done soon.........werd

My Verse
 

ChEcK iT

Any shit you try to spit, I can out do it...
Im an over acheiver like a straight A student...
Puttin this "MC" in to a real "Moderate Concussion"...
All his lines played like his verse be a percussion...
No discussin me, no need for fussin see, aint tryin to push ya buttons D(DooM)...
I think yall will agree, im merkin MC to the highest degree for a newbie...
20 posts come on, no room to boast, bout rhymes that u cant even host...
You talk the most, end up burnt like toast, ya spits are softer than pot roast...
Chryme sindicate must accept wack newbie's, you could be merked by a UE groupie...
Finished you off wit just multi's, Loss for you is a guarantee, Beat you easily...

aight...

Face it,the only way you'll ever be bigger than me is if ya text was bold...//
Iv seen Cooler shit come out my ass crack and im ice cold...//
id get more pleasure out your raps if i raped myself with a dildo...//
you could join Nsync,leave em and you still wouldnt be shit going solo...//
face it man the truth hurts..this shits lyrically inflicted...//
This guy thought he was the shit until he battled restricted..//
if somehow you won a tournament such as the rap world cup...//
dont get cocky to me your nuffin but an ugly ass fuck up...//
i got 20 posts, so what?? and your lookin for ya 7th win...//
shit when i win keepin this is a waste so im dumpin this shit in the recycle bin...//
Imma newb and your a vet...hold on look what i just wrote...//
its vice versa now bitch so just sit down and take note...//

Aighhht

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Vocabulary- L.I while his vocabulary wasn't that much it was still better than mcdoom and he said a few good words. Mcdoom did not seem to be focusing on vocabulary in his piece just straight dissing. L.I won this one

Punches- Id have to give this one to mcdoom...."the only hed be bigger than me is if ya text was bold". I didnt think the L.I. won butI like "all lines played like his verse is a percussion" its good but Mcdoom takes this one.

Structure and flow was not the same. i found L.I to be more smooth .

Wordplay- L.I.

Vote- L.I

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118298

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Dont sleep on this man.....................

uppin till we get some fuckin votes man.........dont sleep on this battle man.....

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LI - Came hard nice opener nice closer had a nice flow to it everything clicked pretty nicely and punches were definately hitting structure was nice and wordplay was there.......

MC-Doom - Came nicely had some aight punches structure was different but whatever works for you...Opener was a lil weak closer was aight...wordplay that was pretty nice flow was a lil rocky but i could understand where you were tryin to go with it
all in all my vote goes out to li

L.I. Takes This Shit

Punches- L.I. - Alright Punches
Structure- L.I. - Work On It A Bit
Flow- L.I. - Decent Flow
Vocab-L.I. Nice Vocab
WordPlay- L.I. Not much Though

Mc_Doom Your Shit Was A Bit To Basic' .....

Vote: L.I.

ight now i dont think that i have to put out a long description of why L.I gets my ote...he had better everything even if it wasnt his best...dogg try to stay at your own level...thats to the both of ya...he was to hard and he was to easy get it...

anywasy vote=L.I

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yo L.I my bad dogg haha i was kinda in a hurry...(^_^)

li had a good opener and closer and good punchz all the way threw and a good structure which iz overated on this site dotn see how people give votez on structure but anyway he waz solid all around

md doom u waz kinda doomed threw this match up had a few punchz that i waz fealin but they didnt come consistent and u had a good closer bout it

vote/l.i

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