*albi Vs. Missfiyagurl*
 

Albi ya kno tha rules...
fa those who don't tha rules are 10-15 lines ta spit, i set it up Albi first...

check in...
VOTE as ya please but drop ya reason off on why ya picked ya favorite one.
Drop tha games and hate votes...

Aight, i'm ready fa this shit.

Yo, Y’all bout to whiteness an apoplexy,//
Cus when I spit my shit, Miss Fiya gonna choke and we only doin text, - see;//
What this bitch don’t realise is that by me spittin first she gets the worst curse, G’//
Worse of all, this bitch has missed who’s she’s battling against, Its me. //

She gonna choke so bad, her shit is broke and just for the note//
-This bitch should have a caveat from me, cus she aint ever gonna get defeat on me, //
“Beware, Wild dog with verbal Attitude” – if she wanna beef with me, yo give me gratitude, //
Cus Miss Fiya is burnt out and cus she cant even a shake some altitude,//
A plane without wings, she’s on a nose dive, shouldn’t even be alive like a plane on 9-11 this bitch should’v been sent to heaven//
Believe me, I have all due respect, but this bitch is like a dick that cant erect,//
She’s useless, and forgive me if I’m not correct, she needs style if she’s gonna do this!//

She need’s a brain if she’s gonna attempt to chew this,//
But maybe her momma and dadda can help her through this… though time//
Cus screw it, the bitch cant rhyme,//

And I’m checking out now, so spit your shit, and give me a shout out//

need a structure? don't give us a story!
 

"albi" seein' ya ass in tha gutter/
knives ta ya arm u swear ya not a cutter/
ready fa suicide? but scared of the world under!/
thoughts of me blazin' her is makin' her wonder/
say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready/
like Nas u claimin' ya stillmatic/
last time i checked this bitch never had it/
like Em i walk tha 8 mile in Detroit,/
Michigan Avenue south side Chi just anotha exploit/
need repairs cuz i rammed ya thoughts/
u keep tossin' out ya words end it wit' dot dot dot/

Ok, I'm upping this, because this is my first battle and i wanna c it have some success!!! Even if it dont go in my favour, i want a result... so erm, Vote! please...

I never thought that i would ever vote quantity over quality but i have to on this one.
The punches were the same no one came harder than the other
The structures were different but none of them flowed better than the other
The wordplay wasnt complicated it was basic on both parts
albi had more multi and i didnt see any in m,issy
they were both the same except abby said more so i
have to vote for abi

great battle but my vote goes for albi .. you were even in almost everything just thought albi brought it harder.. both you great though... good battle.

Hit These Up Peeps:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118165
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Damnit, ive lost 2 of 2votes...

ah well...

I'm upping this thread for votes, so erm, vote, and vote fair, no but sucking, hate or invalid reasons or as you can see, you lose the vote... psht!

Ok, I'm upping for votes, so please vote, i want a restult!

Yo, vote your honest opinion on my battles:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554

So my honest opinion is with miss.

Albi, the problem was mostly with flow, the lines were a bit stretched and didn't go together all that well, miss's flowed nicely and she also had some good punches.


say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready/

That was the best one I saw in the whole battle. Albi, that 9/11 punch was pretty weak and you stretched it out way too far for it to have no bite, really mest up the flow. Keep practicing though. :)

basically....albi SUCKS and miss fyia aint the best either...but i definetly gotta give this one to miss...albis had no flow, or rhyme scheme, its obvious shes extremely new......she had alot of punches but they all sucked and were scrambled in a huge mess of words..so my vote is for missfyia..oh yeah and miss..didnt mic wrecker say u gotta try out b4 u rep A-1? o well wateva

im voting for the second chick, it was shorter but the punches stuck
albi you had alot to say but their wasnt any good punches in their
maby a bit funny but not strong

Vote: Missfiyagurl

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Checck Albi's Lines They Hott

Yo, Y’all bout to whiteness an apoplexy,//
Cus when I spit my shit, Miss Fiya gonna choke and we only doin text, - see;//
What this bitch don’t realise is that by me spittin first she gets the worst curse, G’//
Worse of all, this bitch has missed who’s she’s battling against, Its me. //

^^Better Than Any Of MissFiyas' Lines

Checck These Lines For Punches' & Wordplay

“Beware, Wild dog with verbal Attitude” – if she wanna beef with me, yo give me gratitude, //
Cus Miss Fiya is burnt out and cus she cant even a shake some altitude,//

^Nice Lines Right There' Good Punches' ...

Closer- Was Not The Best But It Works For The Vote

Believe me, I have all due respect, but this bitch is like a dick that cant erect,//
She’s useless, and forgive me if I’m not correct, she needs style if she’s gonna do this!//

She need’s a brain if she’s gonna attempt to chew this,//
But maybe her momma and dadda can help her through this… though time//
Cus screw it, the bitch cant rhyme,//

^^Shit Was Aight' ....

Vote: Albi

But A Peice Of Advice Albi' ... Work On Your "Structure" - It Needs Some Serious Help

Will do! Thanks for the advice, constructive critisime is always better than total disses, so thanks yo'

albi takes this..i was feelin her flow and lines alot more..she was more complex and it seemed like iss fiya girl wasnt takin this shit to serously and should have made more effort.....

Vote:Albi...

Return favour and vote on Rollin Deep Vs Atticus...........

hittin this up for votes on the account that I want to get this over and done with, wether the result is something i want or not... please vote and leave a valid reason... no hate votes or all that shit...

thank u those who have already voted and i thank those who will vote in advance

^Yes I Totally Agree On That, And Your Most Deff, Welcome

my vote got kicked out.. so ill try again

albi-i thought ya verse was weak, you could drop that rap on anyone +
ya flow was ok, could be alot better, i didnt c alot of good punches
there was like one,
"Believe me, I have all due respect, but this bitch is like a dick that cant erect"
that was nice would enjoy to c more of those, all and all i give you 3/10

miss- i thought ya rap was short and to the point, nice flow, a couple of solid punches

"say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready"

ya ending was not as good, i acctually expected alot more
all over it was a tight battle but you got my vote, for straight punches
and good text structure, hope to see you improve on ur meti's to punches
6/10

vote Missfiyagurl

Ok, this is the last time I can UP for votes... so erm, can y'all hit this up to get a quick result, I would apriciate it... see, I even asked nicely without climbing up y'alls asses and whiping them clean with my tongue...

Albi
Ya structure was a bit stretched and dragged punches on till they barely scratched the surface. I liked the consistency in the rhyme but it was made harder to read. If ya dim down ya line lengh a bit and just go for straight punches u'll do better. u don't have to explain ya punches, would you explain to a nigga why you punched him in the face? lol. I got a lot to work with especially for ya first try.


Miss
I preferred the structure and flow. had a better punch.
say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready/
Thats the best punch i seen in the whole thing. She kept her line lengths to a minimum, i like that. Makes it easier to evaluate. I was feelin ya consistant rhymin steady flow too. Ran at a steady pace too.

I'd say Miss takes it, it was pretty even, but miss had a better punch and structure.

Return the favour http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118473
Thanks guys. Great battle

Fa those that don't know, the first day i got on here Kuniva was the one who told me to spit and immediately added me ta the crew A-1 Lyricists when i didn't know anything about it if ya don't believe me y'all get at him...

iight thyz iz goin ta mi55y, 5he kept her flow an 5trukture kon5tint an it waz 5weet an 5imple... albi gurl i ain't haten on u er nuthin, but ya gotta work on ya flow, allya linez were dragged out, an mabey it would get the point akkro5 without da - an //...thaz juz annoyin, ya got 5ome good 5hyt if ya kan ¢enter out. but ya w/e my Vote mi55y

ok both could work on structure especially the first 1 missy u need to work on vocab really bad the other guy does 2 and both could work on multis
vote goes to albi he simply came harder better punches and better vocab u both need to really elevate though

okay good shit...i think fiya girl u came real week mah it aint even look like u was tryin...and al ya shit was hott i dont know if u a dude or a girl lol but i felt ya shit more u aint have dat many punches but u had enuff da win dis battle

my vote-al