SPuL v.s baller_84106
 

ill vote when the battles done until then vote an honest vote on these...

MC DooM Vs L.I
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305

Mc DooM Vs Baller
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118270

He Is Invisible It Looks Like LMAO!' .......

yo yo ill =vote on this right afta he spits....sorry for freepostin...but on ur spare time check out my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305

Lol' I Can't Be Bothered Right Now I Will In A Bit...

aight.....my bad for takin so long, here it is:

yo i'ma finally drop my shit, sorry I delayed ya loss/
now i'm comin, gonna crucifix ya, and leave ya on da cross/
now u lookin like a controversial movie about christ's passion/
but u and ya raps are whack and outta fashion/
baller comin wit rhymes to make ya bedroom shake/ harder than earthquakes/
only way ya gonna beat me is if the votes are errors or mistakes/
still aint gonna beat me, even if ya was da ref/
got retards, blind peeps, and people that are def/ to say i'm still da best/
spul, u a bitch, ya never gonna beat me/
i'ma spit disses to turn ya 360 degree/
spin ya and slap ya, whatchya gonna come wit spul?/
nuttin is da answer, cuz i got my nines and triggers pulled/
got 9 lyrical bullets flyin in ya heads direction/
ya gonna be beat hard and left in manic depression/
ya just a rappin freshman in this rappin school/
my rhymes are hotta than fire ignitin airplane fuel/
look at me, i got spul in check ready to retaliate/
calm down dog, ya shoulda know this was predetermined fate/

ok this was an alright battle.

Creativity - Baller
Personals - neither
Punchs - Spul
flow/Structure - spul
Meta's - baller
multi's - baller

Spul - I liked yah flow/structure very we'll done some of ur punchs where weak, and others good at best. You did however do 1 thing that must not be done in a battle talk about how ur going to defeat ur opponent thats wack man u can't do that, and expect to win

Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall?
The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall

^was a decent finisher very creative

You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy
I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy

^made me laugh

I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty
I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city

^another decent punch not bad

Baller - ur verse contained alot of filler, but u had better creativity, and multi's/metah's in ur flow. Punchs where decent, but ur flow/structure through u off.

My vote=Spul why we'll from how I broke it down above it seemed like baller had the edge, but spul dropped an all around good verse contained very little filler, and punchs where decent I liked his multi's(altho i thought baller edged him out), but his punchs where stronger which won him this. Baller fix yah rhyme structure, and try not to have so much filler ur verse was decent. Spul stop with this me me I I, and explaining how ur going to kill him u just JUST edged out a win in my books with this battle

hmmmm ok says I need to have 50 posts before I can vote sry guys guess my vote don't count

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spul wins this some fo his punchlines were hot...i could flow to ballers but it didnt seem to flow as well a spuls any way that was an aight battle but spul takes the win....

Vote:Spul..

i voted on urs...return the favour and vote on....Rollin_Deep Vs Atticus...Aiiight

yo i'ma finally drop my shit, sorry I delayed ya loss/
now i'm comin, gonna crucifix ya, and leave ya on da cross/
Started out good but then it fell off
now u lookin like a controversial movie about christ's passion/
but u and ya raps are whack and outta fashion/
Ehh....
baller comin wit rhymes to make ya bedroom shake/ harder than earthquakes/
only way ya gonna beat me is if the votes are errors or mistakes/
???? Didn't really make too much sense.
still aint gonna beat me, even if ya was da ref/
got retards, blind peeps, and people that are def/ to say i'm still da best/
That was a punch against yourself
spul, u a bitch, ya never gonna beat me/
i'ma spit disses to turn ya 360 degree/
Once again, not really a punch
spin ya and slap ya, whatchya gonna come wit spul?/
nuttin is da answer, cuz i got my nines and triggers pulled/
Weak.......
got 9 lyrical bullets flyin in ya heads direction/
ya gonna be beat hard and left in manic depression/
Blah, blah, blah......
ya just a rappin freshman in this rappin school/
my rhymes are hotta than fire ignitin airplane fuel/
When will this end?
look at me, i got spul in check ready to retaliate/
calm down dog, ya shoulda know this was predetermined fate/
Weak closer


You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy
I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy
Not bad, could have been worded better
I’ll make you so stiff… jus like a toy soldier
Cuz I be the devil… sittin’ on yo left shoulder
You forgot the punch
I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty
I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city
Weak attempt at a personal, but it was an attempt
Your punches are so shitty… you don’t kno when to hit
Jus like George Bush… you’re all fart and no shit
I just didn't get it
SPuL is here to kick yo ass… and make you so soft
If I were you… I’d tell your f**kin’ man, to back off
Ehh.....
Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall?
The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall
Finally a personal that hits a little!


Baller: You didn't have anything that stood out. A bunch of empty punches and weak wordplay (if there was any) isn't gonna get you a win. This is a battle so you gotta throw a few blows.......

Spul: You didn't really come that hard either but you had better flow and personals. Keep it up and strive to get better.

Vote: Spul

my vote goes to spul. better punches multies and his verse was better overall
good job by baller but spul came a lil harder and bought his A game

vote Spul

Punches: balla for sure. wtf "tushy" .. that's just weak. spul's whole rhyme is just a bit of new shit and mostly overplayed crap... Props for a nice personal at the end, but still felt weak. balla kept it coming, some of his rhymes were a bit weak but still wins.

Flow: pretty even.. balla mixed it up a bit which is nice, but both slipped a bit imo.

Vote: balla

Return the favor, vote honest on my battles (check the sig).

yo i'ma finally drop my shit, sorry I delayed ya loss/
now i'm comin, gonna crucifix ya, and leave ya on da cross/
Started out good but then it fell off
now u lookin like a controversial movie about christ's passion/
but u and ya raps are whack and outta fashion/
Ehh....
baller comin wit rhymes to make ya bedroom shake/ harder than earthquakes/
only way ya gonna beat me is if the votes are errors or mistakes/
???? Didn't really make too much sense.
still aint gonna beat me, even if ya was da ref/
got retards, blind peeps, and people that are def/ to say i'm still da best/
That was a punch against yourself
spul, u a bitch, ya never gonna beat me/
i'ma spit disses to turn ya 360 degree/
Once again, not really a punch
spin ya and slap ya, whatchya gonna come wit spul?/
nuttin is da answer, cuz i got my nines and triggers pulled/
Weak.......
got 9 lyrical bullets flyin in ya heads direction/
ya gonna be beat hard and left in manic depression/
Blah, blah, blah......
ya just a rappin freshman in this rappin school/
my rhymes are hotta than fire ignitin airplane fuel/
When will this end?
look at me, i got spul in check ready to retaliate/
calm down dog, ya shoulda know this was predetermined fate/
Weak closer


You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy
I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy
Not bad, could have been worded better
I’ll make you so stiff… jus like a toy soldier
Cuz I be the devil… sittin’ on yo left shoulder
You forgot the punch
I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty
I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city
Weak attempt at a personal, but it was an attempt
Your punches are so shitty… you don’t kno when to hit
Jus like George Bush… you’re all fart and no shit
I just didn't get it
SPuL is here to kick yo ass… and make you so soft
If I were you… I’d tell your f**kin’ man, to back off
Ehh.....
Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall?
The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall
Finally a personal that hits a little!


Baller: You didn't have anything that stood out. A bunch of empty punches and weak wordplay (if there was any) isn't gonna get you a win. This is a battle so you gotta throw a few blows.......

Spul: You didn't really come that hard either but you had better flow and personals. Keep it up and strive to get better.

Vote: Spul

Vote SPul

Opener- tha baller dude gits it...i liked tha christ thingy that wuz crunk

Closer-Sebastian gits it..LMAO-I CALLED YOU OUTTTT.....it wuz crunk play on his name

VOcab-both cud use betta vocab and meta4s too

now to tha deciding factor-PUNCHES-spul killed em wit them punches...but baller wuz hittin hard too...ya''ll are mean to each other :-/

wordplay..spul gits it for that thing wit tha numbers in ya name..that wuz krunk word play to meeeee

MY VOTE IS TO SPUL..FOR PUNCHES AND CLOSER
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118208
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aight close shit

Baller...although yoru verse came wit more punches they werent strong this is because your rhymes were played like whoa not to shabby though, you need to elavate...

Spul..more amusing than harmful your verse was it flowed well and your structre helped though your verse was shorter than ballers the few lines you had came much harder compared to ballers overall you killed him with ease

Vote spul

Baller the first thing I noticed about your rhyme was that you had entertainment longevity, average complexity, cool structure. Spul, you came with low complexity, not much of a entertainment factor, pleasable punches and above average structure. final judgment is this - Spul, your rhymes didn't contain much liveliness, in the process of constructing your rhymes this factor ill presented in your structure, watering down your complexity... and for Baller, I enjoyed ballers expression especially in his fourth bar though it was fucked up, you presented good complexity and you systematically added that entertainment in and thats really attracted me.

vote:baller_84106