accomplishment vs Cife
 

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Check in bro, this is my check in. Time limit starts when you check in.

aight bitch glad ya set ths up wit my consentin but whateva i'll drop in a lil bit

Kid You Talkin' Bout "Cars" When You Ain't Neva Seen a "Senital"
Cuz Kid You Can't "Beat Me" Like "Microscopic Genitals"
I'm Simply Incredible "Eatin" Ya Cuz Ya "Edible" - Fuckin' Fag
Only Time You Ever Got "Pussy" Was Fucking Your "Cat"
It's A "Wrap" Like A "Subway Sandwich" - Dawg It's Over
Cuz I'm "Built To Destroy" Like A Fuckin "Bull Dozer"
I'm "Rockin This Bitch" Face It You'll Never Be "Toppin My Hits"
Getting A Job At "Mcdonalds" Would Be Your Biggest "Accomplishment"
I Got This Shit On Lock While I'm Leaving This Bitch's Face Distorted
Cuz He Can't Come "Close To Me" Like A Fuckin "Restraining Order"

Bitch.

ight i'll hit this battle up after the otha kat drops...mean while can u both me a favor hit this battle up with ur honest votes and explain whyhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118332

Whoa...Whoa....Fuck Italics......Fuck Bold Letter.....I'ma get Cold.....Like Michagans Weather....

whatcha life, dats right i use cife for targets...
accomplishment a.k.a. known for Felony charges.../

un-depicted, like nostrodamous all ya rhymes i predicted...
get wit it, like da leader of "undestructable emcees", all my rhymes "Re$tricted".../

one toss and u dead, yo rhymes so minute i'll "floss" wit dis "thread"...
shit, was ur verse that i read, cuz i'll have my dawg LOT bring da-fiths-to-ur-head.../

I'm swifty when hitten, gotcha trapped in my "cife"er coughtcha slippen...
your cooked, you couldnt be more prepared if ya verse was pre-written.../

stop drop, whatchmy cosmic reaction, couldnt hitcha quicker like verbs-in-action...
herbs-i'm-jackin, my rhymes is diseases, but my illness is non-contractin.../

Ayo Whoa Whoa

Uppin this shit drop a link!




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i think accomplished took this just cause of nice punches...cife ur shit was sick too i really enjoyed both....structure wordplay and vocab on bath battles was sick....cife ur str8 so keep it up

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wow, close battle, i think that accomp had more punches, but the ones that cife landed were good, exept maybe that microscopic genitals one, and i think that this was cife's best line

I'm "Rockin This Bitch" Face It You'll Never Be "Toppin My Hits"
Getting A Job At "Mcdonalds" Would Be Your Biggest "Accomplishment"

accomp, also a nice verse, more punches, all of them above average, all of your lines were good, and even though you didnt have the one great line like cife had, u were more consistent and therefor get ma vote.

by tha way, if u could hit this up that would be great

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118285

thank you gentlemen

yo uppppppin for votes yo

upppin for votes

yo hit up dis battle witcha'll votes

uppin for votes

Uppin this shit.........................................

whoa......whoa, hot battle, both y'all:

cife: damn ya personals, and meta4s were ill, and punches were nasty. 8/10

accomp.: man I hate to vote against ya, but i've seen ya come wit much, much better shit, ya punces didn't hit as hard to me as cife's did but still ya shit was tight 7/10

win:cife
no beef y'all(just spittin my opinion)
return da favor and check mine:
baller vs. mc_doom
baller vs. disasterpeice420

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aight aight still uppin

nice battle
in my opinion accomplishment had a nice flow and sick punches 8/10 .
cife had fresh pesonals 8/10
hard choice though...

vote:accomplishment

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its hard to git in punches bout acc's name
and tha mcdonald's has been used b4 so its played a lil

tha genital punch wuz nuttin

accomp flo wuzn't as good but it wuz over clouded by his personals and punches

VOTE- ACCOMPLISHMENT, but not by a lot

i like this shit rite here goin at each otherz throatz hard to pick a choice both hard tite punchz like other 1 said some were used before and get old from hearin so not az strong cife had more personalz but used up punchz and acc had better punchz but az many personalz and it waz kinda off to have an hour to post

no bad blood though tite battle
vote/accomplishment

hit mine up

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I don't know if my vote counts for anything, but here is what i think...

Cifes punches were a little bit below accomplishments...but cifes flow was a lot better...could be just the way that i read..but thatds how i feel..i also feel that vcifes imagery was better...so i'ma give to cife...good battle though...Much love and respect

Still upppin kiddies need one vote to close this shit maine

Punches: Cife
Metas: Cife
Wordplay: Cife
Nameplay: Tie
Personals: Tie
Creativeness: Cife
Enjoyable: Cife
Opener: Cife
Finisher: Cife
OveraLL Verse: Cife


Comments:
Pretty much one sided.. it wasn't all that close.. and it was pretty weak... accomp.. you need to up your punches N' add some more complex shit with creative meta's.. all your shit seemed like nonsense to me... and to cife.. that fancy text n shit stuff i ain't feelin'.. i admit i italics my verses.. but don't try to explain ya wordplay n punches N' try to make them stand out. REAL MC's will be able to figure out what your gettin' at... to both.. elevation is quite essential to you both... cife.. i see some good talent.. and accomp... keep droppin' N' practicin'... you got some potential as well.. but this battle as i said was just one-sided...



Vote: Cife...


SoLo Whun...

yeah ok still upppin for votes

accomplished you had better punches. comgrats. nice battle!

I give this one to acc.

Cife's diss on acc's name was weak and really fucked up the flow and the rhyme of the whole thing.. it was ok up until that but at the end all the rhymes are really forced and shit

Acc's stuff was more original at least, the flow was a bit messed up and the third part was just weak. I give it to him for the second bit ("undepicted..").

Vote back on mine:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118472

fuck you gotta suck a mods dick to getta vote man everthing dont count i got this bitch beat like 10-1 hah astill uppin

Cife: good verse, you had some good wordplay but nothing really stuck out. That genitals line wasn't bad but the senital line could have been worded better. One thing I noticed was that you never really came wit any personals. The one personal that you did come with was kinda played. I used it against him in my first battle. I liked the closer though, that shit was pretty tight.

Accomplishment: Another good verse. I liked how you brought all ya boys names in there, that was kinda tight. Wordplay was good and flow was on point!

Overall there were two good verses here but with any battle only one can truely be the winner. This time I had to go with.............
.......Accomplishment

one vote das all crack addicts

Need One Vote People And Oh Yeah Kuniva Is A Pussy Bitch

can i getta vote is it that hard yo

whoa uppppppppppppppppppppppppin neeed one vote people just check dis shit out

vote oon dis ish right hur

need one vote right here

yo im with accomp. on this one
his shyt was more on point, better flow, aight transitions, and just more affective

"whatcha life, dats right i use cife for targets...
accomplishment a.k.a. known for Felony charges.../

un-depicted, like nostrodamous all ya rhymes i predicted...
get wit it, like da leader of "undestructable emcees", all my rhymes "Re$tricted".../"
hottt shyt famm

cife u came decent but uppin ya lyrical devices

peace