A.K.A. Vs Dragon
 

10 Lines

No Bullshit

Due By Midnight

YO I'LL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AFTER UVE BOTH SPAT...MEANWHILE HIT THIS BATTLE UP PLEASE IT NEEDS VOTEShttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118332

This Brittle~Reject Get Embarrassed Like The Pimple~Effect/
My Riddles~Connect With Ya Chest So Hard Ya Nipples~Eject/

You Got KO’ed 30 Seconds Into The 1st Round, So You’re Back Now? Like An "Adhesive Rug" You Should "Stay~Down"/
Your "Clichéd Monkey Bars" Are More "Played~Out" Than "Rusted Equipment" On The "Play~Ground"/

Lyrically Leave You Battered, Beaten, And Broken Motionless On Ice Like Bertuzzi~Did/ (happened in a hockey game)
This Kid’s Fruity In The Booty Dick Ridin Dicks And Doin His Duty, AKA Stays On That Groupie~Shit/

All Your One Sided Battles Are So Damn~Lame When I Read Em, I Reported Them Us Spam~Mayn/
AKA Is Way To Young To Drink, So I’ll "Bottle Up All My Punches" So He Can Taste My "Cham~Pain" (Champagne)

When It Comes To The Dick, This Bitch "Gobbles" Like A "Turkey"/
Ur So Full Of Std's Even Ya Fuckin Crabs Have Herpes/

Me Scared Of This "Shady" Charactor? You Old Bitch/
I'll Make AKA Walk The Green Mile , 8 Times So He Don't Get Home Sick"/

yo dog you acting tough but you shit is too hard understand//
you sounding like you retarted and should go to michel jackson never never land//
and you smack around with his pimp hand//
anyway tell me how did and shit rhyme//
a dude with some skill came at me it's about time//
i'm old but not when your looking at my age//
i'm the type that can cage up dragon rage//
dragons are fake like the style that you claim//
keep spitting that style and get the fuck out the game//
the green mile my ass i'll take you to 8 mile//
the typ theat make you switch your style//
ten lines is too short for me so i'll say about 15//
i'll make you an outkast sing so fresh and so clean//

BEST LINE IN THE WHOLE BATTEL "When It Comes To The Dick, This Bitch "Gobbles" Like A "Turkey"/
Ur So Full Of Std's Even Ya Fuckin Crabs Have Herpes/"
dragon i dont get how u voted for BIG'N WITH HIS SIMPLE LINES BUT ITS COOL....u won cause ur punches and multies killed it.....AKA IM GUESSIN ALSO KNOWN AS...U WERENT THAT GOOD...come on man u fed of his shit....and u couldnt make anythin of it....u repeated wht he said basically...try not feedin on niggaz shit and stay original
VOTE: DRAGON

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Dragon easily takes this one with all aspects of rapping not that he flowed better but his punches came so much harder than a.k.a's overall a.k.a's verse was mediocare but you can elavate yo hit up my battles

Agrreed He Swiped into his oppenet with ease and personally i think this cat should be elite!!

V/.Dragon Rage

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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tough battle y'all, both of ya shit had pretty hard punches, but:

dragon: nice structure and flow, a little hard to read wit all that shit in there, but still good 7/10

A.K.A.: ya shit was good, but ya punches didn't counter attack dragons, they were kinda soft man, i mean u were kinda just rhymin stuff to rhyme stuff, but still was tight 4/10

win:dragon
no beef y'all, (just given input)
return da favor and check these out
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like everyone else said, dragon has this one hands down. the rhymes are good, and the STD punch was real good. aka just fed off him, but the 8 mile and outkast disses are pretty weak, and anything with micheal jackson these days is just overused.

drop a vote on mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117350

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Dragon Rage - good battle man had some sweet flow and some awesome punches.

Best Line - When It Comes To The Dick, This Bitch "Gobbles" Like A "Turkey"/
Ur So Full Of Std's Even Ya Fuckin Crabs Have Herpes/ (lmao niiiice)

Worst Line: none

AKA - good battle bud, you need a better vocab but you had some alright punches.

Best Line: i'm old but not when your looking at my age//
i'm the type that can cage up dragon rage//

Worst Line: anyway tell me how did and shit rhyme//
a dude with some skill came at me it's about time//

OVERALL - good battle but I have to give this too Dragon for better punches and flow. work on the flow a little bit AKA and step up on the punches and you will get better.

Vote - Dragon

yo man.. can you hit this up I need one more vote, I alrdy won but one vote didnt count so hit this up: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118203

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okay........BREAKDOWN
opener - dragon
flow - dragon
punches - dragon
multi's - dragon
vocab - dragon
personals - dragon
closer - dragon
clean sweep........aka u werent ready for a cat of dragon's level...use personals and multis to get ur verse more complex....expand ur vocab....and get direct punches....ull get betta i see potential...
dragon easy win...very nice spit...u didnt have to come that hard and u woulda won....i like ya shit keep battling....nice win
vote - dragon
return the favor in my topical with nope
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637