MARVOLoUsJ1009 vs. kuniva
 

10-20 lines
due by 3 east time
no unex., hate, d/r votes

u go first

u no showin again?????

kids a pussy i asked him 2 set it up and he didnt now he's talkin shit again...nigga a waste of time....

why is he a pussy, im droppin a verse anyway so i wont feel guilty taken a win for his no show

look, this nigga bitched out to quickslap when challenged to a pink slip
look man, by doin that if u had a chance here dawg uve jinxed it
ya weakness, is your arrogance while at a newby level
so dont ask for a rematch cause im a truly dreadful
my record aint a fluke, and ur record aint a fluke
only way u could show hot shit, is ta fuckin puke
if ya bitchout ta me, itl make all the fans see
how terribly bad marvelous is of an emcee
this nigga bitched out to quickslapped, now u get your ribs cracked
killen on impact, my wrist stays in tacked
prolly not gonna drop a verse here, but thats aight
cause im hoveren on top then droppen him on cacti
this whack guy, said that he was really imroved
then when people laugh, ur like "yo dawg, its true"
i dont know why i went passed ten, cause this nigga aint gon spit
and if this nigga drops a verse id prolly faint on it

no show?? me???.....lol

fagget i dont really wanna rap i'll put da metal 2 ya face & fire //
y u keep sayin u nice? dis "ass" wouldn't be "hott" if da "devil raped" kuniva //
u gay dunn and i hope ya lame crew dont cheer in dis //
cuzz ya rap career is at "steak" now since u call ya self a "a-1" lyricist //[think about it]
stop all da talkin and look-quer!,in who's heart do u put-fear??? //
i been da ya hood dogg i aint see a crook-near //
dog just "re-tire" cuzz by da look of ya bars u aint gon have a "good year" //
i'll shoot at ya "abs" and leave ya "6-pack" all ova like u opened a "shook beer" //
u not tuff u just frontin on ya dell-stop!..bcuzz dem shells-hott //
u not "sick" if u thru ya book at a "nigga with aids" u a give da "man-a-cure" like "nail shops" //
in ya hood u go outside but leave-by-dark..im not soft believe-i-spark //
i'll leave ya "chest on da shit u type with" so u could know da "keys by heart" //
dogg's is ova....cuzz all my niggaz a swarm with toastahz //
kuniva u suck da only time you'll "rip a mic" u gota grab a "jordan poster" //
im da best of best..u leave dis site is whut most of da vets suggest //
quickpunch ya "rite hand man" so when i "put ya chest in da air" i hope he gon "catch ya breath" //

lmaoooo i dont know how u niggaz be winnin battles seriously...datz enuff tho

datz it dunn???? lmaoooooooooooooo aww man uppin 4 votes...pleez no hate votes or nothin

stop stealen eminems lyrics homie

lmaoooooooo...whut??? niggaz em is nice but he neva said shit i just said...umm its sound like u a lil hate dunn whuts good....but aneway can we get some votes pleez

i was put here to put fear in faggots who spray faygo root beer and call themselves clowns cause thay look quere

yo MARVOLOUS GO AND SPIT IN OUR BATTLE BITCH ITS 9:15 HERE IN ATLANTA U HAVE TILL 9:30 HERE IN ATLANTA 2 SPIT OTHER WISE UR BANNISHED....SO U BEST HURRY UP....AND NOO FEEDING.....

stop all da talkin and look-quer!,in who's heart do u put-fear??? //
i been da ya hood dogg i aint see a crook-near //
dog just "re-tire" cuzz by da look of ya bars u aint gon have a "good year" //
^^^^^^^^^DATZ ME RITE....

why i cant say look quer...in who's heart do u put fear......why i cant say dat????..yo both u niggaz is on some real fukkin drugs

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^drop ya links rapper's i'll return da favor

fagget i dont really wanna rap i'll put da metal 2 ya face & fire //
y u keep sayin u nice? dis "ass" wouldn't be "hott" if da "devil raped" kuniva //
u gay dunn and i hope ya lame crew dont cheer in dis //
cuzz ya rap career is at "steak" now since u call ya self a "a-1" lyricist //[think about it]
stop all da talkin and look-quer!,in who's heart do u put-fear??? //
i been da ya hood dogg i aint see a crook-near //
dog just "re-tire" cuzz by da look of ya bars u aint gon have a "good year" //
i'll shoot at ya "abs" and leave ya "6-pack" all ova like u opened a "shook beer" //
u not tuff u just frontin on ya dell-stop!..bcuzz dem shells-hott //
u not "sick" if u thru ya book at a "nigga with aids" u a give da "man-a-cure" like "nail shops" //
in ya hood u go outside but leave-by-dark..im not soft believe-i-spark //
i'll leave ya "chest on da shit u type with" so u could know da "keys by heart" //
dogg's is ova....cuzz all my niggaz a swarm with toastahz //
kuniva u suck da only time you'll "rip a mic" u gota grab a "jordan poster" //
im da best of best..u leave dis site is whut most of da vets suggest //
quickpunch ya "rite hand man" so when i "put ya chest in da air" i hope he gon "catch ya breath" //


^^^^ maan itz ova lol

Punches:1009
Creativity:1009
Vocab:tie
Structure:tie
Multis:1009

this battle was......to eazy for marv yo. in my opinion he gets my vote cuz he had shit up in derr dat make ya say Damn...utha dudes was coo juzt needa lil more work on dem punches...but chea im out

1009
cuzz ya rap career is at "steak" now since u call ya self a "a-1" lyricist
^^ NIIIICE...

i'll leave ya "chest on da shit u type with" so u could know da "keys by heart" //
^^ Straight

Delivery: Kuniva.. better flow
Punches: Marv
Personals:...
Creativity: Marv.. the a-1 line was more creative than Kuniva's whole verse
Complexity: Marv
Vote: Marv

Rationale: Better in most categories. Punches were more elevated. Simple

..................okay goodlookin niggaz...............2-0

uppinnnnn...yo y i only 1 poll vote 2 explained votes....

uppin vote muthafukkkaz.................................

lmaooo oh my god dis shit is still up here................

y'all both crazy as hell, i still wanna catch Marvelous on a good day when my ass ain't half sleep... we need a rematch but kuniva i'll catch ya later... good luck to you two...

I'D HAVE TO SAY THAT MARV WON THIS BATTLE
HE DEFINITELY PROVIDED A MORE COMBATIVE VERSE. :shoot:

ALTHOUGH KINEVA HAD A GOOD SMOOTH DILIVERANCE THE COMPLEXITY WAS LOW :help:

Fuck Marvolous Jay...........Here's my vote.......

This was a one sided battle............Marv took this one wit ease. Kuniva must have thought he had an easy victory cause them lines looked like a third grader wrote em. Marv, once again, came wit some hot shit. Tight metas and wordplay filled the whole verse, not to mention punches............

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MarvolousJ

lol................. you probably thought I was gonna hate.

lol u funny dunn goodlookin tho.............................

look, this nigga bitched out to quickslap when challenged to a pink slip
look man, by doin that if u had a chance here dawg uve jinxed it
ya weakness, is your arrogance while at a newby level
so dont ask for a rematch cause im a truly dreadful
my record aint a fluke, and ur record aint a fluke
only way u could show hot shit, is ta fuckin puke
^^^^^^
nuthin hard at all man
ya multis were somewhat decent


but 1009 really got down on u


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fagget i dont really wanna rap i'll put da metal 2 ya face & fire //
y u keep sayin u nice? dis "ass" wouldn't be "hott" if da "devil raped" kuniva //
u gay dunn and i hope ya lame crew dont cheer in dis //
cuzz ya rap career is at "steak" now since u call ya self a "a-1" lyricist //[think about it]


he killed u from tha beginning
my vote goes to 1009

goodlookin........................................ ......

aiight this was a good battle but i gotta give it to kuniva his drop was an easy read and it flowed nice punches wordplay and multis nice structure too...1009 had a really nice drop too but i just wasnt feelin it that much and by the way the "rip the mic"...jordan...line has been used about 1000 times use something new and original....but no hate good battle

vote: kuniva

flow??? with text??? and u said he had "punches"?? u lookin at a different battle dunn...3-1

.................................................. .........vote ppl dis shit been up 2 fukkin long damm

mar got this he killed all subjects of flow tha otha dude got not 1 subject mar gets my vote

best line:in ya hood u go outside but leave-by-dark..im not soft believe-i-spark //
i'll leave ya "chest on da shit u type with" so u could know da "keys by heart" //


vote mar


vote on the battle in my sig

aight goodlookin out dunn..............................

Yo this 1 goes to Marv he had better punchline and came with the heat.
Kuniva u gon have to step it up ur verse was kinda simple! Marv killed him with the opener!

Vote= Marv