Marvolousj1009 Vs Quickpunch
 

aight ummm i see u and ya boy runnin around talkin greasy..its nothin tho

10-20...or whuteva....no bullshit votes dont pm niggaz da vote 4 u or nun of dat.....if u dont wanna spit rite now i'll give u 2 2morrow nite...datz it...lets get it goin

i guess he forgot to mention, this is a pinkslip battle, loser gets banished for good

ight well when ur ass comes online KNOW THAT UR SPITTIN 1ST.....SO SPIT 1ST AND DONT SAY ANYTHIN ELSE......pce

Yo Marvolous I Kno Ur Online Now So Spit Ur Shit....everybody This Is A Bannishment Battle If Marvolous Wins I Get Bannished If I Win He Gets Bannished....marvolous U Have Till 9 Oclock To Have Ur Shit Spat Its 8:20 P.m. Right Now Here In Atlanta....pce

lol^^^^ i dont know if u cant read or u just a dickhead....fuck dat u spit first first shit how many tme do i gotta tell u dat damm....aight its 8:22 in nyc rite..da deadline is fuckin 10:00pm nigga if u dont spit ya shit u fuckin lose and get banned...do u a agree?? and dogg can u and ya fuckin boyfriend stop pmin me

ight nigga NOO FEEDING HERES MY SHIT...i kno niggaz want me bannished so whteva...just rap for fun...pce

kid fuck ur place, i've already passed your ranks, and smashed ur face
get crashed and laced with spits so hot i got propane as an aftertaste

survival of the fittest but this kid is the worst
he couldn't cum at me hard even if i let him jerk first

Understand that i'm dope, just take a minute to chill as I finish this drill
Tendencies kill,you shouldn't Masturbate before battles it diminishes ur skill

I'm relentless and ill,so i'll put it in your lingo and just say DUDE you're wack
Youre confused in rap and losin daps so stop trying 2 prove ur truly black

if you were modelin talliban garments u still wouldn't pose a threat
I keep foes in check lift up the skirt on this pussy and expose a vet

Here's another gay diss, some will like, some won't, opinions will splitting
But it's ironic how much you suck, and that ur occupation is spittin

I’ve hacked into rhymes so many times I compete with the Matrix
And I typed in your name and got an empty page, your just basics

U called this a banishment battle so u can erase ur 0-1 record with new identity
coming back to beat me? We all kno ur hiding from the truth like a tobacco facility

fuck ur mom and sis, ur dad's a bitch, don't hate it
just makin the punches like ur sex life, family related

I've said so much about you I’ve gotten BORED
And I'm sure everyone else has too, so I'll leave you now WHORED

yo man uve told me 2 spit now i have its 9:15 here in atlanta u have till 9:30 to have ur shit spat...dont ignor this bannishment battle....so come on man im waitin.....HURRY THE FUCK UP...dont reply 2 nothin else...ALL I WANT U 2 DO IS HAVE UR SHIT SPAT...SO WHEN I CHECK THIS IT BATTLE HAVE UR SHIT IN HERE....pce

marvolous ur a no show...ur a pussy man..u asked me 2 drop and i did....and i havent seen shit from u...DONT TAKE CHALLENGES U CANT KEEP BITCH

aight umm pardon me i needed a lil exstension...had da take care of some shit real quick....

i could tell u dont-know-marv..but dogg dat awas trash why u go-so-hard //
u should "serve drinks at a gay club" cuzz all u spit is "homo bars" //
quick punch is a lame and everbody tired of seen dis "pussy on da screen" like "old porno stars" //
i been waitin pateintly cuzz...so once u act up im wastin three slugs //
fuck "hov & b" i'll put ya "heart on a mental nigga" so ya'll could "crazy in luv" //
but if u wanna play me and start....da beam on da 380 is dark //
i'll leave ya splean in ya green avey and ya lady in chalk //
quick punch u not nice just "old & gassed" like u "80 and fart" //
fagget u couldn't "beat" me if put ya ahnd i ya chest and gave me ya "heart" //
i got dunns who a start shit..go da atl run thru and spark clipps //
quick punch u a net rapper only time u been in da "studio" was a "1 room apartment" //
i'll put ya lung in da dirt....by y bother i got gunna's dat squirt //
they a shoot at ya face and leave ya "skull on ya chest" like da "punisher shirt" //

dogg calm da fuck down i dont live on dis net shit i gota life.....and i amde dis post last nite as soon i did it u got offline how pussy is dat dunn

yo we need some votes man...this is a bannishment battle...so come on explain why u voted for who u did...thanks....uppin

Quickpunch- His verse was straight.. busted a couple of multiz but not all where dat good.. he was straight in his vocab.. tha punchz diden't really hit dat hard..

MarvolousJ- I was feelin his verse, nice wordplay an punchz an metaz.. he kinda fell off but picked it back up..

VOCAB- Tie
PUNCHZ- Marv
MULTIS- Quickpunch
METAZ- Marv
PERSONALZ- Both

so my vote goez 2 MarvelousJ.. diz was a good battle doe..

oh yea holla atcha nigga marv

yall both spit like it was ya last battle good shit
punches was hitin for both, but quiks were a lil more thought out and affective
the rhymes were hott, and also favored quik to me for structure
although i like the fact that marv didnt use as many word to get at quik
i still give my vote to quik b/c he droped first, and came with it, at a level that was hard to match(marv damn near got there, maybe a few more bars)

*too many damn gay jokes(no- homo)
peace

I'm givin it to quick punch...i liked his structure a lot more..and his personals were on point...good battle tho...seriously...yall both brought it...no denyin that...much love and respect to both emcees

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lmao dat vote finna be canceled

let's break this shit down

Quick:

Structure: 8/10 thats damn good homie, check out those bars
Flow: 8.5/10 not one bar I couldnt flow good.. props
Punches: 7/10 listen ya had good lines, well thought, good shit, but nutin extra-ordinary
Multies: 8/10 lots of inners and shit.. fun to read
overall: 8/10

Marvolous:

Structure: 7/10, wans't as good as Quick's but still good
Flow: 8/10 I mamanged to flow it all
Punches: 7.5/10 u had sum nice lines g.. but sum shit I didnt really feel
Multies: 7/10, ya know.. twas good, but not as good as qp's

overall: 7/10

I think quick just took it by a bit.. this shit was close.. both was good
props
just my thoughs homies

i give this one 2 marv he was just a all around spitter

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what the fuck would it be cancelled for? that doesn't make any sense to me

that need be cancelled.. lol

i give this one to quick punch his flows were better than and the structure of the rap was more intact but good battle to the both of you

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Struture & FLow: I think that quickpunch structure was better because even though he had it longer he had more multi to make it flow and i dont usually seei multi being used like that . Marv was more short and he structure wasnt good but it seemed to flow just fine so they tie on that

Punches- I think Marv won the punches. I liked could tell u dont-know-marv..but dogg dat awas trash why u go-so-hard //
u should "serve drinks at a gay club" cuzz all u spit is "homo bars" //
that was some funny shit and it was and opener which makes him win punches too

Vocabulary- neither was impressive but i dont care about that anyway

Vote- Marv but this was close i dont think u guys shouldve made this for banishment cuz it couldve gone either way

ight thanks for the break down...come on ppl vote vote....

Aight fuck it, quick U came with the versatile flow, with fair an your rhymes were fair and I feel that your first bar was your strongest... U hack raps? That a no-no hack your own you'll learn more and anyways know thyself before u know your enemy nigga... My nigga Marvelous , low complexity and fair metaphors, I think your strongest bar was your second. Quick's lines were more expressive and contained more emotion which is key for simulation of flow. Unfortunately marvelous didn't have the metaphors and illusory riddles to defeat quicks complex thoughts.

my vote goes to: quickpunch

yo man we need some real explained votes so yall hit this up pleeeeeease....dont sleep on it its a bannishment battle...winner stays....holla

quick punch- i was feelin his verse, nice multies - could have spat a few more tho. some nice meta's in there - liked this one

if you were modelin talliban garments u still wouldn't pose a threat
I keep foes in check lift up the skirt on this pussy and expose a vet

i wrote something similar b4 - overall good verse

marv- ya structure was poor, u could improve on that, u made me laugh tho - thats a good thing, i was feelin's this line

quick punch is a lame and everbody tired of seen dis "pussy on da screen" like "old porno stars" //

you had some nice meta's

vote- quick punch- it was very tight battle but i felt quickpunch came that lil bit harder

hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374

yo uppin man...come on ppl dont sleep on this bannishment battle....we need votes....so please hit it up....thanks

Come Some1 Hit This Battle Up Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease....come On Ppl 1 Last Vote.........thats All It Takes.....just Explain Ur Votes....please...

yeah quickpunch takes this one. his lyrics have a lot more structure and i like the way that the verse goes in the same direction there are no flip flopping. marveluose has skills but they need i little more hoaning. so to sum itall up good battle but this goes to quickpunch.

yo i think quickpunch took this battle by a little bit.. but why you two be doing this banishment bs, i think you're both cool so i'm not voting

it like this people dont know shit on this site but how to dickride on somebodyz record


marvolous merked this nigga eazily had better punchz the wordplay in them waz sick az fuck just needed more multiez in that verse an u woulda won no contest but still had metaphorz in almost every punchline and some good personalz


quickpunch had a good verse had more multiz and some good punchz along with personalz but i think the only thing u beat him in iz structure and dont even know why that shit countz

good battle vote/m-a-r-v-o-l-o-u-s

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NICE BATTLE
BREAKDOWN
Opener - marv...that hom line was hot...
Flow - quick...you didnt have stretched lines...marv werk on ya syllabes bein close to the same cuz that also makes ya lines stretched...
Punches - quick...felt his punches hit harder than marv's...marv your shit was hot but a couple of ya bars werent too great n that fucked u up...
Multi's - quick...his multis werked throughout the whole verse while marv's seemed a lil forced...
Meta's - tie...both had hot metas...
Personals - tie...both had good personals...
Closer - Marv...that punisher line was hot...
TALLEYS UP AS...
quick - 5
Marv - 4

very close battle but quick gets it with better punches....marv u spi thot shit but quicks punches came out better n they mean a lot in a battle...keep droppin verses yall cuz ur shit is pure

vote - quick