Ghost354 vs Renewer (merk 101)
 

10-15 linez
no crew votez

and u better not be another no show
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why dont u spit 1st so i know u wont be a no show

im here spit i told u that my only request was u spit first.

ite better not make me waist my time im goin

how u gonna come at me wit a name like renewer/
ive been doin this since u wore drawz wit turtlez hoppin out the sewer/

didnt u read the title merk 101/
meanz im comin wit 2 dirty birdz and aint talkin bout Mike Vick an Warrick Dunn/

or grab the hornet an sting u like elden campbell/
dont make me expose u for a fag like picturez of u wit tevin campbell/

bulletz leavin u wit migranez u cant relieve wit acetaminophen/
family left to greave since u aint believe till yo spirit seen yo brainz leakin like meltin ice cream/

so dont play tuff an act like tom cruise in the last samurai/
u callin me 007 cause when im behind the trigga i got a goldeye/
to leave ya face split like u waz in vanilla sky/


fuck it only feal like doin 11 holla back

think about ya future and whats goin happen, when when uv realise ur shit at rappin/

leaving u gasping like a asmatic four eyed neak, u know thats what u are acting like ur from the street/

seems to me u watch to many films u struggle to handle real life, u should end it slit ya wrists here use my samurai as a knife/

ur talents not there like the weapons in iraq, about time they gave up and realised that ur crap/

its a matter of a fact that u are jealous of the children who, micheal jakson stuck his dick into, thats the kinda shit that u wud of enjoyed to have been through/

sick freak on internet perving over kids lyin asleep in there bed, u and jackson both lost it in the head/

Im out Fed's on there way i just left u feeling woozie, spray lyrics at u like bullets from an oozie/

^^ wtf uppin for votez leave a link an ill hit yourz up

Got To Give This Shit To The "Friendly Ghost" Lmfao Just Fucking With You Once Again' ...

Punches: Ghost' They Were Alright
Structure: Ghost' Was Cool
WordPlay: Neither' Wasnt Feelin Either Of Em'
Vocab: Neither' ......
Multies: Neither....
Creativity: Neither - - - Wasnt Happenin
Character: Neither - - -

Vote: Ghost

uppin but damn no creativity?

You Had Some Creativity But I Just Wasnt Really Feeling It Playa!!!!!!! Your Safe Though' ...

uppin stop sleapin if u view it vote an leave ur shit an ill vote on it

uppin vote peepz

aight aight check it....

this battle i really wasnt feelin...it was off to a good start then you started to go off the road ya feel....
well anyways like DP said you guys were pretty even except ghost was kinda better...well return da favor aight,....ya need to elevate

vote=ghost

uppin for more votez ^^ i hit that up along time ago

I'm givin this vote to renewer, I think you were both real tight tho... but i just seemed to feel renewers style and "beet" more when i was readin through it...

However you both had some great lines... this was a toughy to decide but... I think overall I prefered renewers spit...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

^^ lol um ok lil guy uppin

Punchz: Ghost
Structure: Ghost
Vocab: berly Ghost
Multyz: Neither
Peronalz:Ghost

vote= GHOST

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uppin 2 more votez leave a link an ill return the favor

seeing as i voted, can y'all vote in this please?

(i asked nicely) lol

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118313

this was an equal battle both were good
i prefered the ghost
renewer ya verses were very good but they were basic not creative enough
well some of them where but i mean woozie and uzzi, life and knife
come'on that shits boring

ghost ya won this by the ya foreskin, bbbbbbarely

ghost-6/10
renewer-5/10

week battle and I hate to do it but I gotta vote for ghost, but that wasnt hot shit there bud..had a couple more punches .. both ya flows was good, step it up next time you will be able to beat em Ren.. just keep at it

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ite uppin this 2 more votez ill return the favor just leave tha name of the battle AND EXPLAIN UR VOTEZ PLEASE

uppin for 2 moe votez u know how i do just leave a link

end this battle already damn leave a link an ill return the favor

I have to give this to ghost, you had a solid verse and decent punches.
Renewer your verse made no sense son, no disrespect but yo u need a lot of work
Flow: ghost
Structure: Ghost( u need to tighten it up though)
punches: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Vocab: Ghost
multies: Ghost
Ghost I liked your verse but you could have had stronger punches, but you still murked that nigga.
Holla Back> seriously peep this shit son
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118131

^ voted on that along time ago vote got canceled though my bad


1 vote people put him out hiz misery

end this shit already explain yo vote or dont vote at all

both of have that habit of splitting up your lines in two.. kinda gives it no cohesion, but whatever.

ghost:

opened hard then dropped off, the third bar was just terrible, no good punch and piss poor flow. also, kinda cool how you kept using movies and people, but gets a little old, for me anyway. a good personal, so points for that.

renew:

man you used micheal jackson for 2 bars... not even anything creative, its old by now, give it up. other than that, no real great punch, flow kinda off, the close was ok but not great for a close..

vote: ghost, barely.

vote back on mine.