Ghost354 vs GKillaz05 II (The next Beatin)
 

here bitch ur rematch 12-15 linez
no crew votez
hate votez

post ur shit pussy

want me to start again so you can bite my shit again?.. ok then HERE I GO BITCH!

GHOST-354-thats how many losses in your career//
callin' yourself ghost cuz no one notices you in here//
I lost the last battle cuz I took it to soft on your ass//
this time ima be stompin on you like a patch a grass//
im smokin you like grass you gun fail this fuckin test//
you a lil dyke stop lookin and your pre-writes and type//
man stop thinkin' your the best cuz all you do is bite//
I gotta start again? man if you bite then its the end//
I will expose you as a bitch wit your dick rida friend//
THREATZ dont fuckin vote or ima slit your throat//
Ghost your a faggot a fuckin joke make a deposit//
I hate fags so homophobic wont throw clothes in the closet//
I bet you live wit your granny in the closet all alone//
take my advice heres a phone just like E.T. GO HOME//
cuz no one here wants you on this fucking earth//
moms shoulda used a rubba take away your birth//
thats why your so fucked up sittin watchin gay porn//
i give you pitty WAIT no I dont I hate you were born//

18 lines.. deal wit it I made the call out and you made me spit 1st again I could keep on goin but you knew I could and you were scared so you made it a quicky so spit bitch.

wear did you run too man.... get online and spit.. prolly went to go write it

mayn nigga stop bitchin, you sound lyke a ho
accept yo losses an shut tha fuck up, you ain't got nobody 2 blaim but yo self..

"Ghost your a faggot a fuckin joke make a deposit//
I hate fags so homophobic wont throw clothes in the closet//
I bet you live wit your granny in the closet all alone//
take my advice heres a phone just like E.T. GO HOME//"

^ Look at dat garbage.. stop spittin trash and maybe a nigga will vote 4 you..
N if you wanna get some mo shit off yo chest.. you already kno wha you gotta If you wanna do somethin

ah did I make you upset?.. poor baby I'll rip you apart too BITCH!

-getz on stage an punchz gumby out-


gkillaz u ignorant no talented mothafucka go join a sideshow/
or paramedicz be piecen u together like a slideshow/

your torso full of bullet holez endin up like a desert in tha movie holez/
if u comin out this battle a survivor better get some tipz from beyonce knowlez/

and dont try an deny yo affiliation wit the clay nation/(clay aiken)
that shit u just spit sound like parapa the rappa on playstation/

oh an whatz that G stand for gumby?/
wait i dont give a fuck ill just empty a clip threw that 05 on yo tummy/

so just leave this site...go do a duet wit elton john where u belong/
cause to me u sound like a rap version of william hong/

dog get ya mind right cause i dont write/
come on people even king of the hill said this boi aint right/

let me end this by sendin ya body to the morge for cremation/
u cant beat me face it losin to me is your final destination/

I say ghost...ghost had good punches...good personals..good imagery..and some of the shit G killaz was kinda whack...no offense...you probably ill that was just a weak verse...also...you never bring up a loss in another battle...you can make all the excuses you want...but it's not good to do that...anyways..thats my oppinion..take it or leave it..i can't vote on this shit yet anyways

uppin this shit

UPPIN for votes.... lets get some votes goin here

no one has voted yet, come on peeps I will return the fav

UPPIN for some votes, goin to bed now many get this closed tonight .. peace

put him out hiz misery an see threw the fog this iz a K.O eazy

take that shit off look rela lame wit u telli nthe truth about losin in the rap an got that u beat me in yo sig like itz the biggest accomplishment in yo life


UPPIN THIS SHIT LEAVE A LINK AN ILL HIT U BACK

yo ghost tight verse son, u merked duxs, Gkillaz that verse was wack as hell, no disrespect but you gotta tighten that shit up.
Flow: ghost
Structure: Ghost
Punches: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Vocab: Ghost
Personals: Ghost
Nice verse it was funny but at the sametime sick thats how u pose to lay a battle verse
Holla back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118131
Vote: Ghost

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

uppin this shit explain your vote or dont leave linkz

This was a good battle, both guys did what they came to do
Flow: Ghost flowed better an it was easier to read
Structure: Ghost had a basic structure, Gk I don't what his was it was unclear
Vocab: Ghost used more uncommon words in his verse, Gk yo jus start learning new words cuz when u have unique words an u use dem properly u stand out
Punches: Ghost had nice punches they were hard an to the point, Gk his punches were there but they jus wasn't strong enough to topple Ghost
Personals: neither one really had any personals in their verses
Wordplay: there wasn't alot but Ghost snuck a little in his verse, Gk didn't really have any
Ah'ight now y'all can't disqualify this vote, holla at cha boy!

that shit shouldnt have been cancelled but fuck it uppin this shit

aight her eit is ...
lol this was pretty much a one sided battle ahha
Flow: ghost
Structure: Ghost
Punches: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Vocab: Ghost
Personals: Ghost

aight not to hate but thats how it goes

you need to up your skill and battle sum ppl on your level kid

^ that shitz gonna get canceled but uppin for votez

explain em please

no mothafuckin body votin lazy ass niggaz dont pm me to vote on your battlez no more if u aitn finna vote on my shit

uppin this shit explain yo vote

leave linkz an ill hit u back

jea..let me break dis down pause

STRUCTURE-ghost
PUNCHLINES-ghost..real easy
WORDPLAY-nun from both
CREATIVITY-ghost
PERSONALS-nun from both......GHOST took dis shit realy gkillaz ya verse look like u wrote dat drunk 4 real

my vote-GHOST354

RETURN DA FAVOR NIGGAZ!!!!!! MY BATTLES IS ALL OVA DIS SHIT

iite this shit should done had been over wit uppin this shit dro pan explained vote an ill get at you

Ok
 

Here we go:

Ghost- You had a good structure and good wordplay. I was feeling your verse more than Gk because you had lots of powerful punches. You need more personals, but you had a few in there, make them stronger. Nice opening and good job on focusing on your oppenent and not going off to your guy's other battle like he did.

Gk- Once again, the same Ghost personal. I don't know if you were the first to say it or what not, but make a more powerful personal, Ghost already saw that one commin'. Don't mention other names or past battles, you need to focus on this battle and nothing else, it threw off your verse. Good punches, but overall, Ghost had the better flow.

Vote: Ghost


Return the favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118732

this is whats goin on
Ghost you spit a crazy verse but i didnt like it and im gonna tell you why. everything was good except you kept changing up the amount of syllable you had in your verse i felt that it didnt flow.
Gkilla your verse wasnt the greatest in the world but i liked the way that the syllable remained constant it flowd together nicely and was nice and easy to feel the vibe of the verse

No hate vote just a personal opinion

^^LMAO okay end this batle already

i voting for ghost because rap have to ryhme and killaz ain't got that yet. plus i liked ghost's punchlines and flow (all his raps ryhmed). gkillaz - stop sticking in word that don't ryhme like throat and test. you stuck both in when they didn't ryhme with the other words.
best line-your torso full of bullet holez endin up like a desert in tha movie holez/
if u comin out this battle a survivor better get some tipz from beyonce knowlez/

^^ hot son keep going and no beef even if you voted against me.

uppin this shit end it already

UPPIN shit been up here for a week already damn

uppin for votez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

how many timnez i gotta up this before it endz

UPPIN leave linkz an ill hit u back wit an honest vote

aight ghost ahd this one he got his flow and structure. was hot... he got into you his personals were hot.

but gkilla sounded like he was ramblin running shit to gether remindin me of myself but i realized my mistake.I WILL NOT LOSE!....
but yea i vote for ghost

GBKILLA- U WERE TALKIN BOUT HIM BITING U MUST B READING MY SHIT....
CUZ IN 1 OF MY BATTLES.... I WROTE THAT...
READ .... AND C IF HE BIT MINES..."FUROSHIS IT'S TIME FOR YOUR LITTLE SWEET ASS TO COME OUT OF THE CLOSET*
AND TAKE CLASS SICS OFF YOUR SIGGY AND MAKE A DEPOSIT*"-$$UPREME

GBKILLA-"Ghost your a faggot a fuckin joke make a deposit//
I hate fags so homophobic wont throw clothes in the closet//"--- AT LEAST MAKE IT SOUND BETTER .... UR A WACK VAMPIRE.............


FLOW-GHOST
VOCAB-GHOST
STRUCTURE- TIE
PUNCHES-GHOST..
VOTE GOES TO GHOST354.... NOT A HATE VOTE......
GBKILLA IT WAS COOL TILL U BIT...
IT STILL WASN'T EVEN CLOSE..
MUCH LUV 4 BOTH ....1