MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS Atticus
 

10-20 lines max

regular rules apply

check in then drop in atleast 25 minutes

jea...um fuck a check in dunny...no feedin

listen...dogg u must dont know me when it come da rap i speak fire //
u "like men and women" u "bi-son" like da cat from "street fighter" //[think]
rap bttles cant be serious if they da shit homie write a see me //
dogg i'll send a bunch dudes 2 ya block in only white gt's //
who like's ya bars? nobody only time u got "cheer's" is buyin "obie trice" cd //
fagget u betta rest with pounds..when i spit i bet da vets a frown //
u neva had "pussy" like dat "kanye and hov song" girls "neva let u down" //
u think i wont hit ya dome...dick face go get ya chrome //
dis fagget neva been da "jail" so only time he been in a "cell" was 1 of dos "picture phone's" //
bring ya girl with u i'll be popin her breast plates //
att u a "online super hero" u 1 of dem dudes rocin da "nets-cape" //

datz enuff...

i didn't read urs yet i just drop

So its a 'marvelous' nigga from Queens
Don't rep that hood if u aint NaS
cuz ur corney ass rhyme I haven't seen
so I'm battlin this sucka
I wanna C if he's sick like 'maleria'
I'm slowin ya movement
as if you trained like a 'tarrier'
makin you lose 'weight' like 'parapelegic aids carria'
Trace your last death u livin then I'll 'rebury ya'
I kno ya got all ya guns on 'safety'
bullets call em 'handi-caps'
I'll leave you in so many 'wraps'
couldn't 'ax' the doc for 'pain killa's'
Nigga I'll re-route your veins like maps in iraq
mistake'n clips for banana's
throwin fits like gorrillas
nothin like a black dude handlin U huh
no filler lemme hear u
so far atticus be the realest

lol umm aight....now can niggaz pleez vote .......

coo lines marv u got this battle, my raps r unstable as fuck... uppin

jea yo uppin 4 fuckin votes man dez fuckin battles be up here 2 long......

marvolous, i think imma up game... though its some'n i don't wanna do and when i learn how imma show u

^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote ppl drop ya links i'll return da favor

Lol well obviously yall know who g0t this...but imma explain
Punches:1009
Multis:N/a
Vocab:Att
Creativity:1009
structure:1009
Flow:1009

overall vote goes to 1009...for the fact his punches was on point..but the cell line is played..good shyt to both text heads...holla front

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

1009:
dis fagget neva been da "jail" so only time he been in a "cell" was 1 of dos "picture phone's" //
^^ Very Nice

Marv won this fairly easy. More creativity, complexity, better delivery,... I couldn't quote any lines from the other guy. Marv you'd be even better if you could have a better text flow and up your vocab...

vote: Marv..

aight yo dunnn u gotta poll vote 2 after u explain ya shit

ite eazy win

marvolous had a beter opener closer punchz an shit anythang else to get waznt 1 of ur strongest flowz but shit didnt even need it against this kid
best line out the battle
who like's ya bars? nobody only time u got "cheer's" is buyin "obie trice" cd

atticus didnt even understand wha uwaz tryna rap or wha u waz doin elevate get yo rhymez to where the barz actualy rhyme and get creative get some metaphorz
best line
only seen 1 in your sig no hate though

vote/marv

goodlookin out dunn.....y only got 1 poll vote damm

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote muthafuckas i jjust voted on madd niggaz battle return da fuckin favor

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^............................. .

Once again Marv came wit some sick shit against a poor defenseless newb.........lol

Atticus didn't seem to have any decent punches at all. I'm not gonna say anything else about your verse cause there wasn't really anything there. I wsan't really feelin Marv too much either until that picture phone line.......... I think that's what sealed it for him........

Vote - MarvolousJ

lol aight ............damm i voted on like 30 battles and niggaz aint tryin da return da favor

easily marv killed him off atticus brought nothin to this battle j had him beat in everythang punchs personals flow all of that shit tha phone line was the tightset shit in the battle atticus you need to elevate alot just keep postin an getin better nice shit though j

vote marvolous j

return the favor
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4 sho i'll return da favor dunn.....................dis battle been up 4 like a month

wow Marv killed him it wasnt evan close Eleavte kid

Marv=6.5/10
At=4/10

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lol damm i 4got about dis shit 2 UPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIINNNNN 4 VOTES

upppin....dis shit been up 4 like 2 month's can ya'll niggaz vote pleez

yo this one wasn t close clearly att was a newbie and wasn t used to or hasn t seen real battles there wasn t much creativity and format was not to stable
marv put it on em from begining to end i vote marv on all around skils and
flow never the less both still need practice as we all do
vote-marv

neither were good but
marv took structure allthough both could use work
creativity marv they were both played but marvemns was like the most played ive ever seen
puncher marv bcause atticus came really playes
vocab atticus marv didnt really have any big words both could use wok though