rollin_Deep Vs Ecko296
 

aight...
10-20 linez...
no dick ridin...
no haters...
holla back dawg...
you drop first...

here ya go bro

im rolling deep in ya bitches pussy
ima leave it red and really gushy
nigga dont even try to fucken push me
they call me ecko and i guess they call u rolling deep
im the nigga u think about u just cant get any sleep
homey u cant see me imma win this rap shit
imma eat u up and i wont gain shit *
bitch im battlin' u and i wont get hurt
your the muthafucken white fat albert
u say ur rolling deep but im rolling deeper
wait i think i just got a page from your girlfriends beeper
punk u have no chance i got u on lock
u suck at rappin' your better off sucking cock
when the votes are said and done and im standing tall
youll need to look for someone else to battle
cause u have no chance at all
sorry i have to end it but i have no time
u should just quit cause this battles mine

*im referring to im not gaining weight

well i guess its ur turn......yo no beef...let the best guy win yo

aight...

Yo i would spend some more time on this...but you really should learn to ryhme//
your names ecko bitch because no one wants to hear you the first time//
this guy cant spit so he puts about 6 words to a sentance//
dawg you just plain wack...i wouldnt even allow you to be my apprentice//
i kno ive won this straight away...so fuck the votes..you can up this//
you goin on hardcore but i got news ya aint even tight//
i seen tighter shit spat from the 7 dwarves and snow white//
this guy is wack and ill drop him with no hesitation//
if presidents defined wack,you would rule the nation//
why dont you spit shit that makes you sound more complex//
because right now you sound as simple as casual sex//(nothing new)
goin on hardcore like 50 cent..dawg are you hungry today???//
because you bitin and feedin off evry gangsta shit he'd say//
listen dawg you give it up ur a fag and your just plain wack//
if i had room..id add you as another spunk bubble in my ball sack//
least you know you lost to the betta man..at least thats a token//
but you aint rollin deep dawg your hangin lower than my scrotum//

..........................................upppin.. ..............................................

drop a vote on here then ill drop one on yours..you can hold me to that dawg.... :thumbup:

lol anything for a win?

how ya work that out...like i said he drops a vote on this(a fair one) then ill drop one on his...

they way he said it was kind of fucked
if he wasnt gonna vote he shouldent of wrote shit

i thought my structure was kinda wack..so ill make it easier to understand..

Yo i would spend some more time on this...but you really should learn to ryhme//
your names ecko bitch because no one wants to hear you the first time//

this guy cant spit so he puts about 6 words to a sentance//
dawg you just plain wack...i wouldnt even allow you to be my apprentice//
i kno ive won this straight away...so fuck the votes..you can up this//

you goin on hardcore but i got news ya aint even tight//
i seen tighter shit spat from the 7 dwarves and snow white//

this guy is wack and ill drop him with no hesitation//
if presidents defined wack,you would rule the nation//

why dont you spit shit that makes you sound more complex//
because right now you sound as simple as casual sex//(nothing new)

goin on hardcore like 50 cent..dawg are you hungry today???//
because you bitin and feedin off evry gangsta shit he'd say//

listen dawg you give it up ur a fag and your just plain wack//
if i had room..id add you as another spunk bubble in my ball sack//

least you know you lost to the betta man..at least thats a token//
but you aint rollin deep dawg your hangin lower than my scrotum//

aight...

yer thats tru............................................... ............................uppin

aight:
Ecko: ya shit was good, good structure, flow, but ya personals lacked in creativity, i mean ya didn't say anything that made me go wow 6/10

Deep: aight, ya shit was betta, ya came wit betta punches and wit more creativity, therefore i'ma go wit u 7/10

win: Deep
"nuttin personal, just business"

thats cool homey

aight ill return the favour............................................ .....uppin.......

Well...deep dawg i wld say ur vocab and punches were betetr than echos....BUT ur lines were WAY to long so the ryhme went completly out of da window...so this basiclacy means it didnt ryme or flow....the end to lines rhymes but there were to many words between each ryhme to make it actually rhyme...so overall you get 2/10 coz rap anit rap with no rhyme realy....ehco...ur content was a bit below par mna..try longer words and wordplay need oilin'...but not bad for a newb....u..if da overcat actually got some basic structure he wld walk dis battle but seein' as his lines didnt ryhme coz they was 2 long he lost this one...echo wins coz his actually rhymes......im sorry but dat is a Fuckin' basic of rappin' so my vote gos to echo

Punches: Deep, by a bit.

Personal: Deep, with the echoe line. That was tight.

Other shit: Tie. Deep, your lines were too long in places and that makes the flow/structure a bit messed up, kinda hard to actually rap that shit. Echo.. what's up with the "*" thing.. if you can't tell your story in your lyrics too bad.

Pretty good on both sides, but I go with Deep.

Rollin_Deep Totally Got This Shit No doubt, Consistant WordPlay, Had Casual Vocab, Nice Flow I Was Feeling It, His Structure Was A Bit Off, But Still' His Shit Was Tight,' He Had Was Harder Punches That Connected' Right Off, I Have To Give My Vote To "Rollin_Deep" Just Because His Verse Was 'Most Deff, Better and For His Punches'

Vote: Rollin_Deep

3 more votez and this shits over.....uppin for some votezzzzzzzzzzz

yo i gotta give this to rolling deep. i liked ya flow and structure was iight. some good meta's and punches hit hard v nice finisher. i was feelin' ya verse good job

ecko- you had a few nice personals, but structure was kinda whack, it was a nice job tho

u suck at rappin' your better off sucking cock

the gay jokes are way way over played. use some originality next time

vote - rolling deep

hit this battle plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374

aight ill vote on urs..................come on one more vote and this shits over...

kingz have you voted because the score hasnt gone up..............uppin...

Rollin_Deep - Rollin you brought it real strong and I was feelin it.. good all the way threw awesome punches, multi's and flow.

Best Line: least you know you lost to the betta man..at least thats a token//
but you aint rollin deep dawg your hangin lower than my scrotum//
(nice finish)

Worst Line: NONE

Ecko - your punches were ok, and you had an alright flow, I just wasnt feelin your shit as much as Deep's.

Best Line: homey u cant see me imma win this rap shit
imma eat u up and i wont gain shit *


Worst Line: when the votes are said and done and im standing tall
youll need to look for someone else to battle
cause u have no chance at all

OVERALL - The battle was ok I think Deep flowed well and good punches so he gets my vote. Keep at it Ekco and keep wit it and you will get better, just step up on your flow and punches and you will get better.


vote here I just need like 2 more votes plz.. to win 5-0 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312