DisasterPeice420 Vs. Shadows edge
 

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Checking In & Dropping !!!!!

Aight go for it, good luck man and vote on my other battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117350

Shadows Edge Ran & Hid Under His Sourer Mothers Skirt,/
Warning! This Mother-Fucker (DP420) Cannot Be Hurt,/
Time For Me To Be Curt, You Winning Aint Going To Work,/
Survival Is The Key Don't Make Your Spit Touch My Shirt,/
Eh Lyrical, Your A Geek Attire Is Looking "Very-Critical",/
Fuck Off, I Aint Falling For Your Sumbliminal,/
Gun Babbling Criminal, Hey Dude I'm "Quite-Cynical",/
Save The Spit For Your Dog, Bestiality? 'You-Despicable',/
I'll Humiliate And Eradicate Your 'Rhyming-Existence',/
The Gauntlet Has Dropped, You Better Ask 'For-Assistance',/
Don't Bother Back Down Cause Resistance,/
Is Futile Clown, Battle Call? It Will Be More Like A "Beat-Down",/
When I'm Done Lyrically Kicking Out Your Spleen,/
Another Victim On The Rise Looking Like "Tom-Green" (LoL)
Better Organize Your Rhymes, Before You Think To Respond,/
You Wanted To Battle Shadows Edge Okay Lets Get It On,/

Aye Yo' Drop Your Shit Playa GoodLuck

(Sorry it took so long, had to take a piss.)

This battle gonna be a disaster, a week still picking the last piece up
Of 420’s broken rap… he got a nice life but the lease up
Shadow cocks the lyrical gun, bout to release, wasup
I bring it to the end, never cease or let up

DP ain’t even worth my rhythmical ammunition
His tired ass shit won’t deflect my mission
The destruction of the poet thug wanna be tradition
Rhyming so fast, DP be gassed, yo check your emission

Can’t face reality so he took the blue pill
Turn the face away as my lyrics flow and spill
Over his broken, bruised body, have you had your fill?
I battle you now just for the thrill o’ da kill

Emerge from the shadow, lyrical blade edge
Scared to face me but you don’t jump from the ledge
And with each cut, you bleed from the incision
Every verse making you regret the decision
This be the last time you battle, me or any other MC
Cuz the body of your rap is hung in town square for all to see

Bah type.. in the first line "a" = "after"

Anyway, tight rap man. Vote people!

^^^^ All I Fucking See Is "He,He,He,He,He" ... WTF?????????????? Ima FEMALEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE' ...... Don't Be Disrespecing Me Asuming Im A "He" .... Or WhatEver Lmfao' ... DAMN - - - Reppin In The Siggy

:banghead:

my bad, probably should have checked that out before hand. guess you'll have to accept an apology from this newb.

WTF? It Aint That Hard To Miss' .. & Shit' ....

lol.. the pink doesn't really show up on my monitor. ah whatever, it looks like i be losing.. nobody to blame but me really :banghead:

aight umm good shit ya'll

STRUCTURE-umm a tie i understood both ya'll shit
PUNCHLINES-disaster...by a lil bit
MULTI'S-disaster
WORDPLAY-edge
PERSONALS-edge
ENJOYED-umm i gota go with edge his shit started off hott then he feel off a lil bit but ya shit was still betta...and disaster mah ya verse was aight but some of ya lines was wack no hate or nothin

my VOTE- SHADOWS EDGE

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=18442
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118237
can ya'll vote on wun of dez battles...since i voted on ya'll shit

Its Cool - Yeah I Was Feelin His Shit Too' ... lol But DAMN Disrespecting Me Like That' ... -Shame On You lol' Your Safe Though

hey dp vote on my other battle: me vs. akademekz:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118472

I'll vote on your battle with toxic when (if) it ever gets done.

im goin with disaster piece on this one...the structure was good and basically it flowed smooth and i could flow to it...so disaster piece gets this...

return the favour and drop a vote on Rollin_Deep Vs Ecko aiiighht

hmm.. marv you wanna actually place that vote? ...

Thanks Rollin Deep ... Highly Appriciate The Vote Of Course I Will Return The Favor :)

Uppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes People!!!!!!! Don't Sleep On This Shit

C'Mon Ya'll Don't Sleep On This Shit...... Uppin on VOTES' ...................DAMN

People just don't recognize gold when they see it :) 5 more votes, come on.. hehe.

4More Votes Shadow'.. You Already Have A Vote He Just Forgot To Post!!!' lol

DAMN PEOPLE!!!! .. Fucking Hell' .. Uppp This Shit

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIN ON THIS SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DAMN Ya'lll

Some Votes Would Be Highly Appriciated...... Here' .. DAMN Quit Sleepin On This Shit'

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vvv close battle peeps..shadows..came harder tahn i thought..punches 5/10...flow3/10...structrue...5/10..personals...2/10<<not amny......vocab and wordplay...4/10...overall...6/10
desaster....punches...6/10....flow...4/10....structure....5/10...personals....6/10.....vocab&structure....6/10..overall...7/10....
v/desaster

yo my vote goes to Disaster heres y..............

Disaster: you had better punches and ur verse flowed together betta.....i think u had a couple of metas and the words you chose went together better in each line.....good job keep it up....

Shadow: man ur verse was cool but for me it was kinda hard to follow.........i had to read some of ur line 1ce or twice to understand it better.......but i can see that you have potential bro....keep it up...........also you had some alright punches but i dont think you had any metas........nice battle to both of you though......

My vote=DisasterPeice420

hahah.. it's gonna be a ko even though it was tight. good job PD

Thanks For The Votes Ya'll ... Much Respect' ...!! I Appriciate 'Em ....

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aight well flow was good from both sides... disaster piece had better structure and vocab... shadows orignalty was betta than disaster pieces but good lines from both close battle...
WINNER: DISASTER PIECE

Thanks lman' .. For The Vote' ... Highly Appriciated' ....!!!! Upppin on This Shit!!!!!!!!!

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This was a good battle y'all verses were similar in the sense y'all both started off strong an fell off at the end.
Structure: Dp
Vocab: Dp
Flow: Dp
Punches: Dp
Wordplay: Edge
Multies: Dp
I liked y'all verse but I had to go with dp's cause I could follow her's better, edge your verse was unclear for me, yo your verse would have been hot in a live spit but shit is different when u texting son.
Vote: Dp