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Diablo-Vice vs Lokie
ok kid how about 10-15 lines each
no d/r hate or crew votes verses due by tomm at 12pm (lunchtime thats eastern canadian time by my watch) gl I'll post up when u check in Checkin in |
^alrdy voted on that mans good show tho....diablo where u at?
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yo lokie can u go to quickpunch vs marvolous and quickpunch vs big'n and vote on those to battles....thats all i need u to do....and state why u voted for the person u voted for....other wise it wont count.....so give good explanations...i will hit this battle up when both yall have droped....thanks man..pce
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checkin in here yo lokie spit your first verse and il reply by tommorow night i dont have time right now so flip the shit ad i give u my word ill reply
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^^^kk no problem I'll give yah an extension until tonight
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Gl Diablo here's mine
Diablo Stealing Names off of video games But like 1st player shooters I got u right in my aim/ Got you in my sights, and kill a Diablo-Vice We all know Lucifer ain’t got nothing on Jesus Christ/ Thinking u nice when ur really just mediocre Have you looking jacked like shaggy and scoop at poker/ Like lighting rods and towers your catching a shocking You remind me of copy cats that style u be mocking/ So BITCH KEEP TALKING Cause your face my feet they meet, and I’m stomping/ You remind me of a tree branch the way I swing at you You couldn’t execute me with the help of pi-ka-chu/ Stamped this Calgarian like rhino’s and bulls Your lines are more overplayed then Nintendo consoles/ ^14 lines |
ummmmm diablo u said u where going to post tonight looks like ur offline but this is wack I thought u was down for this I set it up and shit now u ain't even drop nothing. I'll give this battle tell 12(noon) tommorrow if u havn't dropped a verse then I'll get mods to close this. Piss me off wasting a good verse for nothing.
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Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse
ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst I hope you like your name, yeah its a good one lokie but your girlfriend just told me your dicks like a chopstick and mine like a hogie im kinda new to this online rappa shit even so ill destroy any crap ya spit after battling me on RB get the hell out your lyrics are dead i also think your a sellout your a fag and u know it so why do you hide it like a wannabee gangster and the law u abide it i hate the way you rap you got no flow or no structure tell ur mom i got her cash cuz last night ya i fucked her your a loser a fool a fuckin fag and a tool battle me diablo-vice your ass got taken to school 16 lines |
i spit my verse like i saqi i would
so lokie stop livin the rich life try to live one day in the hood i gave you my word that i would lay down a beat and as soon as i got a chance to i did so good battle and well have to see who wins |
Loki wins, although neither verse really blew me away... yo vice you can't spit stuff like: "
i hate the way you rap you got no flow or no structure" when that 4th line of yours is horrible structure and broke your flow. nothing really special in your verse except you changed up the flow at the end which is ok, but all the punches are generic shit. Loki... decent personal, some ok punches, but then your pickachu and rhino lines were pretty bad.. still the close was good enough that it came off kinda strong. return the favor, hit up my battles. |
ok breakdown...
Opener - diablo....i like that lively herst line.... Flow - neither...didnt feel either of ya flows... Punches - diablo...i liked his punches betta n felt they hit harder...lokie werk on direct punches...u 2 diablo Personals - lokie...u made sum attempts at personals while diablo made none so u got this category...keep werkin on personals cuz they help ur punches... Closer - lokie...nice closer...a playd line but still better than diablos closer... talleys up as.... Diablo - 2 Lokie - 2 tied up so it comes down to the enjoyment vote... enjoyment - both yall verses were weak...lokie u had played lines....diablo those ur mom and ur girl lines dont make it in this site...but i like diablos verse better....i like his punches n they had me laughin...nice battle both of yall stay at this level battlin..... vote - diablo RETURN THE FAVOR http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...324#post1225324 |
i wont make my vote official, 'cuz i dont want cats thinkin' im hating on them (diablo). i think lokie "barely" took this. diablo...this is the best ive seen from you yet. your improving. keep it up my friend, dont get discouraged by the criticism cutty. holla at ya boy sometime (fair votes/help etc.). one.
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Lokie - Liked your spit, had some alright punches and an alright flow.
Best Line: Stamped this Calgarian like rhino’s and bulls Your lines are more overplayed then Nintendo consoles/ Worst Line: You remind me of copy cats that style u be mocking/ So BITCH KEEP TALKING Vice - pretty good battle was feelin your flow better and also had some alright punches. Best Line: your a fag and u know it so why do you hide it like a wannabee gangster and the law u abide it Worst Line: your a loser a fool a fuckin fag and a tool battle me diablo-vice your ass got taken to school (weak endin) OVERALL - it wasnt that good of a battle but I got to vote for vice, just liked his flow better, both of your punches were the same and neither used many multi's so I gotta go vice cuz he had btter structure and flow. Lokie, Ive seen better from you man, keep wit it and work on your flow and step up on the punches. |
Aight Check Dis..
Lokie: 5/10 Nice Flow, Structure Was Nice, But Punches Weren't Really That Hard, Lackin Word Usuage, Lacking Metas and Multis. Newas...Elevate and Stay Dope. Diablo-Vice: 6/10 Flow and Structure Was Nice, Punches Were Alright, A Little Harder Den Lokies'. You Didn't Really Have Mulits and Metaphors But Your Flow Was Tight. Vote - Vice ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
let me state right off that this battle was full of personals and punches, just none of them were really good. Lokie, u had a good verse, but u stayed with the video game concept to much, u should drop something like that after a 2 liner and not go on about it throughout the verse. Vice, u need to stop the shit like, i fucked ur mom and girlfriend, shit is way to played by the newbies here, but other than that, good verse, nice structure (if u understand his structure)
v/vice |
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Vice In My Opinion You Just About Take This Win Because You both Hit Hard At Each Other But Lokies lines Where overplayed and you kept the flow smooth throughout....
Aight My Vote goes To Vice... Return the favour and drop a vote on Rollin_Deep Vs Atticus Or Rollin Deep Vs Bowelle(3 More Votez And This Katz KO'd) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Lokie: You had some nice flow but your punches weren't really hittin. Your personals were OK but you didn't really make them stand out. I liked your flow, it was easy to read. That was about all I liked. You need to use some more wordplay. I also noticed that you stole a line from the late, great biggie smalls. It worked for him, not for you.
Diablo: I liked your verse better. I actually smiled at a line or two. Personals were hittin but you could have used some better wordplay. Overall you had the better verse. Keep It Up! Best line....... Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst ^ Diablo Vote: Diablo |
Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse
ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst I hope you like your name, yeah its a good one lokie but your girlfriend just told me your dicks like a chopstick and mine like a hogie im kinda new to this online rappa shit even so ill destroy any crap ya spit after battling me on RB get the hell out your lyrics are dead i also think your a sellout your a fag and u know it so why do you hide it like a wannabee gangster and the law u abide it i hate the way you rap you got no flow or no structure tell ur mom i got her cash cuz last night ya i fucked her your a loser a fool a fuckin fag and a tool battle me diablo-vice your ass got taken to school ----VICE HAD BETTER PERSONALS... |
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