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DisasterPeice420 Vs. Juss_Blaze
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Bah.. fux that... good luck to both of you though ^
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Drop Your Shit Playa
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I got you
Bout to start a crime becuz my 9 full o' clips/ Do you write on toilet paper? cuz yo rhymes full o' shit I just made a new way to die, make a nigga "mike slain"/ its kinda like sayin my mike game's like Mike's game/ ostrich ass nigga i put yo face in the sand/ you wacker than that island nigga from Making the Band/ It aint a graduation when i make these caps glide/ plus i got guns bigger than J.Lo's backside/ My guns spit hot shit whenever the flame's on/ you would think my ass found it on a mission in James Bond/ cuz you feel my rhymes when the punches hit you/ yea we can battle, but i rather just slit you/ i spit lines hot enough to injure satan/ but Blaze gifted with the blades like Ninja Gaiden/ Fuk wid my squad dog, you get rattled and dealt/ cuz the only way im losin is if i battle myself/ you cant diss Blaze and think there wont be a fight, boys/ my rhymes haze and spank like fraternity white boys/ you betta run wheneva Blaze see ya and step guy/ or you gon die before your time, like Aaliyah and left-eye/ |
Alright Checkin Innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn'
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Play The Racist Card With Me, Its "Bull-Shit",/
Called YourSelf A Retard, I'm Loaded With A "Full-Clip",/ Think Your Ob-Servant Cause You Can 'Peep-My-Profile',/ And The Mean While Still Aint Cramin 'My-Style',/ I'll Take Your Lips and Clean My Floor,/ Then Po-Pimp Your A$$ Another Mop-n-Glow Whore,/ You Opened The Door, And It Shut In Your 'Face',/ You Tried To Rock Tha Mic, But Your A 'Disgrace',/ Don't Show Your Face Around After This Battle,/ After This Verse This Shit Is Handled,/ I'll Dismantle Your Raps, Your 'Fragile-A$$-Style',/ Ain't There A Damn Thing You Can Find Without 'Generalities'?,/ Loose The Whak Rhyme Verse, Its A Curse Why You Frontin G?,/ As A Matter Of Fact, I Chirp Birds On A Roll,/ If Ya'll Cant Figure It Out, You Shouldn't Know,/ I Got Two Fo-Fo's Plus A Pack Of Pit-Bulls,/ After All This Shit, You Barking Like A "Shit-Sue",/ But I Know The HardHeaded Got Feel It To Believe It,/ A So Called Contender Trying To Toppl When Im Seeded,/ |
Just Checkin:
Why The Fuck You Calling Me A 'Nigga' When Its Plain & Simple To See Im "NOT" |
Bout to start a crime becuz my 9 full o' clips/
Do you write on toilet paper? cuz yo rhymes full o' shit Not bad, but gettin kinda played I just made a new way to die, make a nigga "mike slain"/ its kinda like sayin my mike game's like Mike's game/ Just glorifyin yourself... ostrich ass nigga i put yo face in the sand/ you wacker than that island nigga from Making the Band/ Check her sig........SHE'S A GIRL! It aint a graduation when i make these caps glide/ plus i got guns bigger than J.Lo's backside/ Weak..... My guns spit hot shit whenever the flame's on/ you would think my ass found it on a mission in James Bond/ *yawn* cuz you feel my rhymes when the punches hit you/ yea we can battle, but i rather just slit you/ Blah blah blah i spit lines hot enough to injure satan/ but Blaze gifted with the blades like Ninja Gaiden/ You just need to learn how to word things better Fuk wid my squad dog, you get rattled and dealt/ cuz the only way im losin is if i battle myself/ Good try...... you cant diss Blaze and think there wont be a fight, boys/ my rhymes haze and spank like fraternity white boys/ Finally a good punch......too bad she's a GIRL!!! you betta run wheneva Blaze see ya and step guy/ or you gon die before your time, like Aaliyah and left-eye/ Once again, a good punch but check the sex Play The Racist Card With Me, Its "Bull-Shit",/ Called YourSelf A Retard, I'm Loaded With A "Full-Clip",/ Not a good opener but not that bad Think Your Ob-Servant Cause You Can 'Peep-My-Profile',/ And The Mean While Still Aint Cramin 'My-Style',/ Where's the punch? I'll Take Your Lips and Clean My Floor,/ Then Po-Pimp Your A$$ Another Mop-n-Glow Whore,/ Ehh...... You Opened The Door, And It Shut In Your 'Face',/ You Tried To Rock Tha Mic, But Your A 'Disgrace',/ Booooo... Don't Show Your Face Around After This Battle,/ After This Verse This Shit Is Handled,/ Is it over yet? I'll Dismantle Your Raps, Your 'Fragile-A$$-Style',/ Ain't There A Damn Thing You Can Find Without 'Generalities'?,/ Loose The Whak Rhyme Verse, Its A Curse Why You Frontin G?,/ I don't even know what that means..... As A Matter Of Fact, I Chirp Birds On A Roll,/ If Ya'll Cant Figure It Out, You Shouldn't Know,/ OK???????? I Got Two Fo-Fo's Plus A Pack Of Pit-Bulls,/ After All This Shit, You Barking Like A "Shit-Sue",/ Not bad..... But I Know The HardHeaded Got Feel It To Believe It,/ A So Called Contender Trying To Toppl When Im Seeded,/ Weak closer...... Overall............ I expected a whole lot more from this battle. Quite frankly I was dissappointed. Juss Blaze didn't really hit any good punches. He didn't even know he was battlin a girl. Next time you might wanna check the sig before you post a verse. Also, work on your personals, flow and structure........ DisasterPiece wasn't that bad. She had a lot of rough spots but she hit a few good punches. You still have a lot of elevatin to do but for now you merked this newb. Vote: DisasterPiece |
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A pretty tight one, but I actually go with blaze on this one. Rhymes like this:
i spit lines hot enough to injure satan/ but Blaze gifted with the blades like Ninja Gaiden/ it's not perfect, but it's good (only problem is why the second line start with "but"?). points off for rhyming "boys" and "boys" but still I just wasn't feeling DP's punches, kinda like enygma. Vote on mine! |
yo dis was a tight ass battle both of yall came hella strong ya ming
juss blaze(comments-i was really into yo flow yo shit had me reading down and back kno wat im sayin good work pimp punches-7/10 vocab-8/10 flow-9/10 structure-8/10 closer-8/10 overall-8/10 DisasterPeice420(comments- u tight as hell im not gon front hott ass hell grl u tight punches-9/10 vocab-8/10 flow-9/10 structure-8/10 closer-9/10 overall-9/10 vote-disaster winner-^^^^ |
Aight Break'N It Down..
Juss_Blaze: 6/10 I've Seen Better From You, Why Are You Glorifying Yourself Threw The Whole Spit? Punches Is What You Need Pimpin. Mulits and Meta's Were There, Flow Was Tight, But Word Usuage and Punches Fell Off. DisasterPeice420: 7/10 Nice Work. I Knew You Was Good, I Wish You Woulda Brought Sum Heat Like Dis When You Battled Me. Newayz, Nice Metaphors and Punches. Not Many Mulits But The Punches and Flow Was Sick. Good Drop. Vote - DisasterPeiece420 ~R~ |
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yo my vote goes to disasterpeice420 here y
Disaster: yo gurl you had some koo punches some i dint get but i prolly read em wrong or im just retarded..........your verse flowed together well..........i think you had a meta or 2 too.......MY FAV LINE IN YOUR VERSE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I Got Two Fo-Fo's Plus A Pack Of Pit-Bulls,/ After All This Shit, You Barking Like A "Shit-Sue",/ Juss: you bro ur verse was alright man.......u usually come harder than that........but you had some alright punches and metas..........some of ur punches i would have to agree wit enygma dint hit as hard due to the fact that shes a female..........add in some personals next time.......over all pretty coo verse tho..........also you could of worded some of your verses better....... my vote= DisasterPeice420 |
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overall this was an iight battle nah mean both spittaz waz good.
so here go my break down: Creativity:DP420 Structure:Tie Punches:DP420 FLow:Blaze Multis:DP420 nice battle as i stated b4...but yo my vote goes to DP420 for da fact her punches was coo and them multis was on point. |
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