DisasterPeice420 Vs. Big'N
 

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yo peeps hit up my battle I only need one more vote, I alrdy won it but one of my votes got D'Qed so explain your vote.. plz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118203 I will hit this up as soon as both of you have spit.

Im gonna eat lunch right quick ill check in after that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lmfao DAMN' Alright Then ............................

Alright checkin in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok now here we go again

Yo u wanna battle with the Big Man
Im about to write u off faster than short-hand/

Dont get caught up in my record its jus like my checkerd past/
Not very good but I still can beat ur ass/

Ur like a Quarter Back with no arms ur style will never pass/
I float over garbage mc's like Boats and Hovercrafts/

See I aint here to keep score, baby girl u can do the math/
While u sweatin over these votes go draw me a bubble bath/

Or maybe ill jus be waitin to rip some other cats/
Shorty come over here so can rip your kitty cat/

Women are jus good for sex, thats why I jus fucked this bitch up/
U want to battle again then call me a bartender cuz ill serve u another cup/

I like a Lama I bring the load when spit
Its the Big'N ur Big END ill give u a moment to sit/

Alright Checkin In' Nice Drop Playa

Don't Play That White Bull-Shit, Like Get-Out Of "Jail-Free",/
Your Verse Aint Even Real, Must Not Be Hollar'n At Me,/
If You Did, Then Your Sury Suicidal,/
Instead Of A Mic On Stage, You Should Of Brought A Bible,/
I Dont Need Protection For Fuckin Up This Bitch,/
If Looks Could Kill You Would End Up As A Snitch,/
There's Must Be A Glitch Up In This "Rap-Session",/
Revenge Of The Nerd Spiting, Loving The "Smith-and-Wesson",/
For Their Deadly Hand Weapons, Representing "The-Block",/
Yo, I'm The Only One Here That Is In Complete Shock,/
Big'N Got A Job? He Works For The "D-A",/
I Bet This Canary Used To Get 'Laughed-at-EveryDay',/
Trying To Fit In, Yo Your In The Wrong Background,/
Tired Of These Of This Bitch Trying To Act 'Black-Now',/
You're Right Mr. Green You're Hazardous To YourSelf,/
Why Do You Wanna Front And Cutt Off Your Daddy's Wealth,?,/
You're Never On The Blck Cause You Don't Fucking 'Deal',/
Drugs You Give Hugs To Your Dog For A Cheap 'Feel',/
Odds? More Like A Long Shot, The House Always Wins,/
I Love Confiscating All Your Chip; Your Pitch Is Looking Pretty Thin, The Fact Is I'm Out Of Practive, But You Wining Is 'Slim',/

Upppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

C'Mon ya'll Don't Sleep On This Shit' ..... Votes Are Needed

yo u got me up in the poll vote as juss blaze........................................

I Know I See That Now' Lol' I Fucked It Up

Upppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votesssssssssssssssss

You Can Be Juss Blaze For A Night Lmfao' .. Upppppppppppin On This Shit

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votesssssssssssssssssssssssss

This is gonna be a close one but here it is

Big N
Creativity 7/10
flow 7/10
word usage 8/10
punchlines 7/10
total - 29

DP
Creativity 8/10
flow 7/10
word usage 8/10
punchlines 8/10
total - 31
It came down to the wire, but I believe DP won this one with her upperhand on her creativity with her words.

v-DP

hmmm...i see u have me up there. well i do have a battle goin on with you so... but are you a girl disaster? anyway i give this to disasner. Big'n made me laugh with some of his punches and i really liked the "I float over garbage mc's like Boats and Hovercrafts/" line. but disaster had a longer verse and more to draw from.

yo nice battle...
WELLL THE BREAKDOWN

Opener - Big...liked that short hand line alot...
Flow - Disaster...ya flow was really kickin up afta the 6th line and u took this category from there on...
Punches - Disaster...she had the bigger verse which gave more room for punches n she filled up that room with hot punches...
Personals - neither...no personals...
Vocab - Disaster...she had the better vocab in this one....
Multi's - Disaster....her closer's multi's beat your whole verses attempts at multis...she used a lot of hot multis...
Sustainment - Disaster...hers was hot from the 6th line through...Big urs fell off...need to werk on sustainment....
Closer - Disaster...hot closer with multi's...
Enjoyment - Disaster....hers was the better verse to read and i enjoyed it more...Big yours was more a chore to read....pretty boring...werk on personals, multis, and punches
vote - Disaster
ayo disaster illbe calling you out soon in bitch slapped within the next day...so be checkin in there!!!!
NICE SPIT

and let the mods know that that aint me you battlin, becuz i dont want an "L" on some bullshyt

yo change my fukkin name. it is showing up as losses on my screen. either change my name or end this thread and start over.

Yo I think disaster has to do it cuz I have no control over this thread.

Aye Yo ' Upppppppppppppppppppppppin On This Shit'

And Can Some "Mod" Fix The Poll' I Have The Wrong Name In There' lol

Uppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Battle' .. Don't Sleep On This Shit!!

C'Mon Ya'll & Drop A Vote

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit' .. Don't Sleep On It

C'Mon Ya'll & Drop A Vote

I think the winner here is DP, the last couple bars really had me going, it was a good way to go out with the worldplay on "odds." Both were kinda weak though.. big'n you can't rhyme "cat" and "cat" ... especially when that's such an easy thing to rhyme man.

Both of you could work on the punches though... BigN had some ok ones, DP had some weak and some good. I've seen both you do better though.

Vote on mine.

good battle let me get right 2 it
disaster-always feelin yo shitt yo shorty yo verses tight
structure-9/10
punches-8/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9/10
close-8/10
overall-9/10

big n
structure-8/10
punches-8/10
vocab-8/10
flow-9/10
close-8/10
overall-9/10

winner-disaster

Lol' .. Shit Aint My Best Thats For Sure' ... But Didn't Really Think I Needed To Come Hard This Time Around.. And Thanx Choppa Appriciate The FeedBack :) ' ...

Appriciate The Honest Votes

Stillllll Uppppppppppppppppin On This SHit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quit Sleepin On This Shit' ... & Drop Another Vote' Up In Here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Check It...

Big'N: 5/10
Punches Weren't Really Direct and Didnt Make Too Much Sense To Me. Flow Was off, Structure Was Horrible, and No Mulits and Metaphors. Elevate Kid.

DisasterPeice420: 6/10
Punches Were There, Not As Hard As Sum Other Ones, But The Flow and Structure Was Nice. Multis Weren't Really There and Metaphors Were Still Weak. Just Keep Elevating and Keep Droppin Dope Ish.

Vote - Disaster

~R~